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Ashes To Ashes
In Sure And Certain Hope Of The Resurrection To Eternal Life, We Commit His Body To The Ground; Earth To Earth, Ashes To Ashes, Dust To Dust
I Am A King, A Bird, On A Righteous Throne, The Vices, Devices, I Rightfully Own
The Pitch, The Tone, I Mightly Hone, The Wings, The Bones, That Frightfully Shone
The Limbs In Clones, On A Nightly Gnome, A Witch, A Crone, That Climbed The Stones
A Switch To The Stove, An Enlightened Blow, The Fish Enclosed I Tightly Grope
The Animals Bow To Me, The Lion Is King, But The Lion Still A Cat To Lies I Bring
To The Fights For Eternal Life, To The Cries Of Kins, To The Rise Of My Flies, To The Lightning Wings
I'm The Sign Of Eternal Time, So I'm Obliged To Sing, The Chimes Of A Millennia, To The Wise Men Then
To The Ties Of My Hind, To Decline Within, To Let Me Fly To The Skies, And Lie With Jinns
I Was Born To A Baby That Was Born To Me, That Was Torn To A Lady When It Was Worn And Weak
I Was Forlorn And Crazy, The Crest Horned And Beat, The Chest Adorned And Lazy, Detest Scorned My Beak
The Flesh Gored And Basically Forced To Meet, The Tests, Morbidly Obese Chefs Adjourned To Eat
So As A Horse I Leaped, To The Remorse Of Sheep That Wore Wolves Vest To Bull Hats As Scores The Deeds
Countless Shipments Fought For Me, The Thought Of Another Brought To Shore, Like Morse To Me
The Dashes And The Short Longings, Like A Source For Me To Keep Me Tamed In A Vain That I Endorsed As Heat
The Diminishing Gods, Were The Thoughts As Leaves, Sticks And Stones That Wont Break My Bones For The Course Of Peace
All Bores To Me, The Ape And The Man, The Apple That Fell From The Tree And Became A Bran
The Level That Went From Defeat To Reign As Fan, The Shackles That Held Me For Weeks Were An Age For Men
I Settled Down In A Tree And Flamed, Detained In Grams, Slayed Not By Them But By My Space Of Sense
My State In A Day A Freight Of Base And Ash, There Lay An Egg, Paint In Black
The Egg Brakes In Halves And There Lays A Wreck, A Shrek That Will Gladly Awake As Death
I'm A Phoenix, Here I Lay, Ash To Ash
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Wait, how old are you? I feel uncomfortable being inside your head if you're a minor.
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Originally Posted by ILLoKWENT
you still have to give someone the benefit of the doubt regardless of how obvious it looks
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Originally Posted by Edgeworth
Ok so at this point you guys are just being willfully ignorant / not understanding on purpose / or just trolling.
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"Little 4 To 5"? Need To Be "Hand Held"? My "Style" Is Modish Than Basic, I Kid, Joint Clips Follow My "Touch" Like "Co-vid" App Tracing - Lizman Vs MarkThePatriarch
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03-28-2012, 07:22 PM
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Ashes To Ashes
In Sure And Certain Hope Of The Resurrection To Eternal Life, We Commit His Body To The Ground; Earth To Earth, Ashes To Ashes, Dust To Dust
I Am A King, A Bird, On A Righteous Throne, The Vices, Devices, I Rightfully Own
The Pitch, The Tone, I Mightly Hone, The Wings, The Bones, That Frightfully Shone
The Limbs In Clones, On A Nightly Gnome, A Witch, A Crone, That Climbed The Stones
A Switch To The Stove, An Enlightened Blow, The Fish Enclosed I Tightly Grope
The Animals Bow To Me, The Lion Is King, But The Lion Still A Cat To Lies I Bring
To The Fights For Eternal Life, To The Cries Of Kins, To The Rise Of My Flies, To The Lightning Wings
I'm The Sign Of Eternal Time, So I'm Obliged To Sing, The Chimes Of A Millennia, To The Wise Men Then
To The Ties Of My Hind, To Decline Within, To Let Me Fly To The Skies, And Lie With Jinns
I Was Born To A Baby That Was Born To Me, That Was Torn To A Lady When It Was Worn And Weak
I Was Forlorn And Crazy, The Crest Horned And Beat, The Chest Adorned And Lazy, Detest Scorned My Beak
The Flesh Gored And Basically Forced To Meet, The Tests, Morbidly Obese Chefs Adjourned To Eat
So As A Horse I Leaped, To The Remorse Of Sheep That Wore Wolves Vest To Bull Hats As Scores The Deeds
Countless Shipments Fought For Me, The Thought Of Another Brought To Shore, Like Morse To Me
The Dashes And The Short Longings, Like A Source For Me To Keep Me Tamed In A Vain That I Endorsed As Heat
The Diminishing Gods, Were The Thoughts As Leaves, Sticks And Stones That Wont Break My Bones For The Course Of Peace
All Bores To Me, The Ape And The Man, The Apple That Fell From The Tree And Became A Bran
The Level That Went From Defeat To Reign As Fan, The Shackles That Held Me For Weeks Were An Age For Men
I Settled Down In A Tree And Flamed, Detained In Grams, Slayed Not By Them But By My Space Of Sense
My State In A Day A Freight Of Base And Ash, There Lay An Egg, Paint In Black
The Egg Brakes In Halves And There Lays A Wreck, A Shrek That Will Gladly Awake As Death
I'm A Phoenix, Here I Lay, Ash To Ash
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Originally Posted by Student
Wait, how old are you? I feel uncomfortable being inside your head if you're a minor.
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Originally Posted by ILLoKWENT
you still have to give someone the benefit of the doubt regardless of how obvious it looks
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Originally Posted by Edgeworth
Ok so at this point you guys are just being willfully ignorant / not understanding on purpose / or just trolling.
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"Little 4 To 5"? Need To Be "Hand Held"? My "Style" Is Modish Than Basic, I Kid, Joint Clips Follow My "Touch" Like "Co-vid" App Tracing - Lizman Vs MarkThePatriarch
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03-28-2012, 08:04 PM
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Yo props to actually dropping.
Good luck.
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03-28-2012, 08:04 PM
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Yo props to actually dropping.
Good luck.
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03-29-2012, 06:16 PM
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Rhyming Scheme/Flow- i liked Liz's flow n think he did a bit better here
Vocabulary- Liz
Topic/Meaning- Dono..
Storytelling/Progression- Dono..
Emotion- Dono
Imagery- Dono
Poetic Techniques- Liz
Ending- Dono
My vote goes to Dono.. Liz has a style of writing that i dont really get and imo Dono was more on topic and had a better verse here. There were some spots like flow n vocab that Liz got.. imo but my votes in.
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03-29-2012, 06:16 PM
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The Raw Talent
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Rhyming Scheme/Flow- i liked Liz's flow n think he did a bit better here
Vocabulary- Liz
Topic/Meaning- Dono..
Storytelling/Progression- Dono..
Emotion- Dono
Imagery- Dono
Poetic Techniques- Liz
Ending- Dono
My vote goes to Dono.. Liz has a style of writing that i dont really get and imo Dono was more on topic and had a better verse here. There were some spots like flow n vocab that Liz got.. imo but my votes in.
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03-30-2012, 01:31 AM
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Thats Cool
Good That I Didn't Went Ham On This Or You Wouldn't Have Given Me Any Points
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Wait, how old are you? I feel uncomfortable being inside your head if you're a minor.
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Originally Posted by ILLoKWENT
you still have to give someone the benefit of the doubt regardless of how obvious it looks
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Originally Posted by Edgeworth
Ok so at this point you guys are just being willfully ignorant / not understanding on purpose / or just trolling.
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"Little 4 To 5"? Need To Be "Hand Held"? My "Style" Is Modish Than Basic, I Kid, Joint Clips Follow My "Touch" Like "Co-vid" App Tracing - Lizman Vs MarkThePatriarch
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03-30-2012, 01:31 AM
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Thats Cool
Good That I Didn't Went Ham On This Or You Wouldn't Have Given Me Any Points
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03-30-2012, 02:38 AM
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what a surprise ..Lizman doesn't agree with a vote.
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03-30-2012, 02:38 AM
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The Raw Talent
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what a surprise ..Lizman doesn't agree with a vote.
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03-30-2012, 01:05 PM
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What A Surprise
Madverbs, Whose Best Cypher Doesn't Even Touch My Worst, Is Unable To Understand My Lines
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Wait, how old are you? I feel uncomfortable being inside your head if you're a minor.
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Originally Posted by ILLoKWENT
you still have to give someone the benefit of the doubt regardless of how obvious it looks
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Originally Posted by Edgeworth
Ok so at this point you guys are just being willfully ignorant / not understanding on purpose / or just trolling.
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"Little 4 To 5"? Need To Be "Hand Held"? My "Style" Is Modish Than Basic, I Kid, Joint Clips Follow My "Touch" Like "Co-vid" App Tracing - Lizman Vs MarkThePatriarch
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03-30-2012, 01:05 PM
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What A Surprise
Madverbs, Whose Best Cypher Doesn't Even Touch My Worst, Is Unable To Understand My Lines
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Rhyming Scheme/Flow-Liz
Vocabulary-Liz
Topic/Meaning-Dono
Storytelling/Progression-dono
Emotion-dono
Imagery-dono
Poetic Techniques-Liz
Ending-dono
this was actually pretty close, the winner got this with the ending and the overall storyline. pz/
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03-30-2012, 02:30 PM
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Rhyming Scheme/Flow-Liz
Vocabulary-Liz
Topic/Meaning-Dono
Storytelling/Progression-dono
Emotion-dono
Imagery-dono
Poetic Techniques-Liz
Ending-dono
this was actually pretty close, the winner got this with the ending and the overall storyline. pz/
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Lmao ..i bet you actually believe that shit too.
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03-30-2012, 06:30 PM
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The Raw Talent
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Lmao ..i bet you actually believe that shit too.
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Prove Me Wrong
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Wait, how old are you? I feel uncomfortable being inside your head if you're a minor.
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you still have to give someone the benefit of the doubt regardless of how obvious it looks
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Originally Posted by Edgeworth
Ok so at this point you guys are just being willfully ignorant / not understanding on purpose / or just trolling.
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"Little 4 To 5"? Need To Be "Hand Held"? My "Style" Is Modish Than Basic, I Kid, Joint Clips Follow My "Touch" Like "Co-vid" App Tracing - Lizman Vs MarkThePatriarch
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03-30-2012, 08:41 PM
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This is why I said no, @ Verity.
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03-30-2012, 10:33 PM
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This is why I said no, @ Verity.
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