Punchline Maintenance - Lets Beef

1DollarShort · #1 09-22-2010, 01:46 PM

Ok, Have you ever battled, (obv) and then looked back at a couple of punchlines that you had, and realized you could have made them better?

If you got time, post 5 punchlines from past battles - Then underneath each one, type up an alternative punch that you think would have been better.

Eg: My first battle with IAmFlow -

Talkin about �Daimonds n Rocks�? That SHIT TO PLEASURE CATS!? I'll Haf'ta "Wipe Em With Mops", GET�CHA MELON CRACKED from a �Height When You Drop�, coz you "Light Off The Top" like PIMPS IN FEATHERED HATS!!

I would have added somethin like "Get Zipped up in Black, like GIMPS IN LEATHER STRAPS"

1DollarShort · 09-22-2010, 01:46 PM

Ok, Have you ever battled, (obv) and then looked back at a couple of punchlines that you had, and realized you could have made them better?

If you got time, post 5 punchlines from past battles - Then underneath each one, type up an alternative punch that you think would have been better.

Eg: My first battle with IAmFlow -

Talkin about �Daimonds n Rocks�? That SHIT TO PLEASURE CATS!? I'll Haf'ta "Wipe Em With Mops", GET�CHA MELON CRACKED from a �Height When You Drop�, coz you "Light Off The Top" like PIMPS IN FEATHERED HATS!!

I would have added somethin like "Get Zipped up in Black, like GIMPS IN LEATHER STRAPS"

**Krhyme Killz** · #2 09-22-2010, 08:14 PM

this is actually a good idea for a thread, fam

**Krhyme Killz** · 09-22-2010, 08:14 PM

this is actually a good idea for a thread, fam

**MYST** · #3 09-22-2010, 08:28 PM

yea this a great idea, id prob change all of mine completly lol

**MYST** · 09-22-2010, 08:28 PM

yea this a great idea, id prob change all of mine completly lol

**John Dos** · #4 09-22-2010, 08:33 PM

i can think of hundreds of lines i would have worded a bit differently..too late now though lol

**John Dos** · 09-22-2010, 08:33 PM

i can think of hundreds of lines i would have worded a bit differently..too late now though lol

#5 09-22-2010, 08:44 PM

I love how everyone comments on the thread, but no one actually partakes in the idea for the thread.

EDIT:
I got that fire.

09-22-2010, 08:44 PM

I love how everyone comments on the thread, but no one actually partakes in the idea for the thread.

EDIT:
I got that fire.

1DollarShort · #6 09-23-2010, 12:49 PM

Thanks Krhyme

@Teezy, true words. (except the EDIT)

1DollarShort · 09-23-2010, 12:49 PM

Thanks Krhyme

@Teezy, true words. (except the EDIT)


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