ILLoKWENT's best bars.

Originally Posted by Subreal

@Rant

why is it ok for you to use wordplay that doesn't make sense both ways? you make fun of "have a hunchback in the day." But you do the exact same thing in these bars:

"You're not a "G! P.S.," when I'm CRAFTING A STATEMENT??"

"Start deciding what to "Pen... Point;" I'm just out to 'MAP YOUR LOCATION!!"

" There's a "Bounty On Your Head," and you NEED TO TAKE A 'NAP, KIN!!"

That's so natural. Saying to someone, you need to take a nap, kin. Or telling someone that they aren't a GPS

Lol! Candidate for post of the year right here.

Originally Posted by Subreal

@Rant

why is it ok for you to use wordplay that doesn't make sense both ways? you make fun of "have a hunchback in the day." But you do the exact same thing in these bars:

"You're not a "G! P.S.," when I'm CRAFTING A STATEMENT??"

"Start deciding what to "Pen... Point;" I'm just out to 'MAP YOUR LOCATION!!"

" There's a "Bounty On Your Head," and you NEED TO TAKE A 'NAP, KIN!!"

That's so natural. Saying to someone, you need to take a nap, kin. Or telling someone that they aren't a GPS

Lol! Candidate for post of the year right here.

Originally Posted by Subreal

@Rant

why is it ok for you to use wordplay that doesn't make sense both ways? you make fun of "have a hunchback in the day." But you do the exact same thing in these bars:

"You're not a "G! P.S.," when I'm CRAFTING A STATEMENT??"

"Start deciding what to "Pen... Point;" I'm just out to 'MAP YOUR LOCATION!!"

" There's a "Bounty On Your Head," and you NEED TO TAKE A 'NAP, KIN!!"

That's so natural. Saying to someone, you need to take a nap, kin. Or telling someone that they aren't a GPS

The difference is that they make grammatical sense. You're not a GPS. When I'm crafting a statement, start deciding what to pinpoint.

Originally Posted by Subreal

@Rant

why is it ok for you to use wordplay that doesn't make sense both ways? you make fun of "have a hunchback in the day." But you do the exact same thing in these bars:

"You're not a "G! P.S.," when I'm CRAFTING A STATEMENT??"

"Start deciding what to "Pen... Point;" I'm just out to 'MAP YOUR LOCATION!!"

" There's a "Bounty On Your Head," and you NEED TO TAKE A 'NAP, KIN!!"

That's so natural. Saying to someone, you need to take a nap, kin. Or telling someone that they aren't a GPS

The difference is that they make grammatical sense. You're not a GPS. When I'm crafting a statement, start deciding what to pinpoint.

[Subreal]

Originally Posted by Rant

The difference is that they make grammatical sense. You're not a GPS. When I'm crafting a statement, start deciding what to pinpoint.

Your sentences only work one way.

"You're not a G! P.S.,.. blah blah
that works,

"You're not a GPS,
that doesn't make sense.



"Start deciding what to Pin point;
That works.

"Start deciding what to Pen point
that doesn't make sense.

" There's a "Bounty On Your Head," and you NEED TO TAKE A 'NAPKIN!!"
that works.

" There's a "Bounty On Your Head," and you NEED TO TAKE A NAP, KIN!!
that doesn't make sense.

They don't make logical sense.

[Subreal]

Originally Posted by Rant

The difference is that they make grammatical sense. You're not a GPS. When I'm crafting a statement, start deciding what to pinpoint.

Your sentences only work one way.

"You're not a G! P.S.,.. blah blah
that works,

"You're not a GPS,
that doesn't make sense.



"Start deciding what to Pin point;
That works.

"Start deciding what to Pen point
that doesn't make sense.

" There's a "Bounty On Your Head," and you NEED TO TAKE A 'NAPKIN!!"
that works.

" There's a "Bounty On Your Head," and you NEED TO TAKE A NAP, KIN!!
that doesn't make sense.

They don't make logical sense.

Originally Posted by Subreal

Your sentences only work one way.

"You're not a G! P.S.,.. blah blah
that works,

"You're not a GPS,
that doesn't make sense.



"Start deciding what to Pin point;
That works.

"Start deciding what to Pen point
that doesn't make sense.

" There's a "Bounty On Your Head," and you NEED TO TAKE A 'NAPKIN!!"
that works.

" There's a "Bounty On Your Head," and you NEED TO TAKE A NAP, KIN!!
that doesn't make sense.

They don't make logical sense.

There's this thing called punctuation, bro.

Originally Posted by Subreal

Your sentences only work one way.

"You're not a G! P.S.,.. blah blah
that works,

"You're not a GPS,
that doesn't make sense.



"Start deciding what to Pin point;
That works.

"Start deciding what to Pen point
that doesn't make sense.

" There's a "Bounty On Your Head," and you NEED TO TAKE A 'NAPKIN!!"
that works.

" There's a "Bounty On Your Head," and you NEED TO TAKE A NAP, KIN!!
that doesn't make sense.

They don't make logical sense.

There's this thing called punctuation, bro.

[Subreal]

Originally Posted by Rant

There's this thing called punctuation, bro.

It's not about the punctuation they don't make sense logically.

You don't call someone a fuckin global positioning system

[Subreal]

Originally Posted by Rant

There's this thing called punctuation, bro.

It's not about the punctuation they don't make sense logically.

You don't call someone a fuckin global positioning system

[Shodan]

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[Esso]

so SINCE THIS CAT'S CLOSE to getTIN HIS ASS SMOKED,my rap prose 'has ALL team meet in a bag',no SLIM JIM PACKS SHOWN!(salty meat in a bag)

[Esso]

so SINCE THIS CAT'S CLOSE to getTIN HIS ASS SMOKED,my rap prose 'has ALL team meet in a bag',no SLIM JIM PACKS SHOWN!(salty meat in a bag)

Originally Posted by Esso

so SINCE THIS CAT'S CLOSE to getTIN HIS ASS SMOKED,my rap prose 'has ALL team meet in a bag',no SLIM JIM PACKS SHOWN!(salty meat in a bag)

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Originally Posted by Xwizit

Damn yall bagging on the homie but he has had some dope punches. True, the wordplays be a lil iffy but dude is one of the best creatively. It's crazy how people focus so much on the negative aspects of someone rather than the positive.

/shrug

What good is creativity if you can't execute it in a comprehensible way?

Originally Posted by Esso

so SINCE THIS CAT'S CLOSE to getTIN HIS ASS SMOKED,my rap prose 'has ALL team meet in a bag',no SLIM JIM PACKS SHOWN!(salty meat in a bag)

---------- Post added at 08:47 PM ---------- Previous post was at 08:44 PM ----------

Originally Posted by Xwizit

Damn yall bagging on the homie but he has had some dope punches. True, the wordplays be a lil iffy but dude is one of the best creatively. It's crazy how people focus so much on the negative aspects of someone rather than the positive.

/shrug

What good is creativity if you can't execute it in a comprehensible way?

[exwhyzee]

Damn yall bagging on the homie but he has had some dope punches. True, the wordplays be a lil iffy but dude is one of the best creatively. It's crazy how people focus so much on the negative aspects of someone rather than the positive.

/shrug

[exwhyzee]

Damn yall bagging on the homie but he has had some dope punches. True, the wordplays be a lil iffy but dude is one of the best creatively. It's crazy how people focus so much on the negative aspects of someone rather than the positive.

/shrug

[exwhyzee]

Good point. All I'm saying is to give respect where it's due. He just may have been battling longer than a lot of those in this thread, I definitely agree he's hit his peak, but don't discredit what he's done so far.

[exwhyzee]

Good point. All I'm saying is to give respect where it's due. He just may have been battling longer than a lot of those in this thread, I definitely agree he's hit his peak, but don't discredit what he's done so far.