Rant's Critique Cloud:

This is a thread where I'll be giving out bar by bar break downs of verses posted for feedback. I may not get to all of them right away, but, I'll always do my best to get to as many of them as I can, whenever I can.

If you'd like to leave verses before sending, and risk giving your opponent an edge, you can do that. But, pretty much this'll be for verses from closed battles.

This is a thread where I'll be giving out bar by bar break downs of verses posted for feedback. I may not get to all of them right away, but, I'll always do my best to get to as many of them as I can, whenever I can.

If you'd like to leave verses before sending, and risk giving your opponent an edge, you can do that. But, pretty much this'll be for verses from closed battles.