The 500-syllable multi. - Page 7 - Lets Beef

**FiNAL WoRD** · #61 01-13-2012, 04:46 PM

What ^ ? and rebuttle of what?

**FiNAL WoRD** · 01-13-2012, 04:46 PM

What ^ ? and rebuttle of what?

**Godbody** · #62 01-13-2012, 05:00 PM

500 syllable long multis? Son...your longest scheme was like 5 syllables. I thought I was about to be impressed...I'll show you how its done. Here's a verse in which almost everything rhymes. 11-13 syllable multis in every line

A little insane in the brain but i'm gifted. Belitted & thanked for the greatness i'm spittin, a riddle exchanged for a grain of some wisdom, i'm killin these lames every day with my writtens...I've crippled the ranks of Al-Qaeda's positions. A lyrical tank that remains non-forgiving. I was fly... til I've driven a plane & it banged into buildings.. shit, Call me Hussein if I fit the description. I'm not a farmer, but I stay with some "chickens" that give me the brains of an asian physician. You pitiful lames always hate on a nigga, yet still are amazed I contain my condition..

If you could live in a day of a king would live it? I can never explain all the pain that i'm feeling. I've risen from graves & I've slayed me some bitches, I never duck, yet you continue to blame me & claim that I did it? This rap shit isn't a game, but I play til I'm winning. My vision aint fame its to change up my living. Example; for dinner a steak with a maid in my kitchen. & a butler to pick up my plate when I say that i'm finished. I'm a little ashamed of the things that I witnessed, invisible reigns cause a strain on my tendons. We're all puppets...we're just living the way that THEY tell you to live it. A business gets paid & don't help in our districts. For minimal pay we just help with the dishes, instead of explaining whats dealt in our system. They're hella afraid to attempt a revision, when a president say all this bleh..do you listen? You ever just thinking "whats hell & what isn't?"...While these cities are plagued in a deadly condition, kids get in to gangs for respect & for bitches, & are dead the next day or instead end up missing. Is this really just fake? Someone tell me you're kidding. I'm dreaming..No, i'm really awake & it's hell that we live in.

**Godbody** · 01-13-2012, 05:00 PM

500 syllable long multis? Son...your longest scheme was like 5 syllables. I thought I was about to be impressed...I'll show you how its done. Here's a verse in which almost everything rhymes. 11-13 syllable multis in every line

A little insane in the brain but i'm gifted. Belitted & thanked for the greatness i'm spittin, a riddle exchanged for a grain of some wisdom, i'm killin these lames every day with my writtens...I've crippled the ranks of Al-Qaeda's positions. A lyrical tank that remains non-forgiving. I was fly... til I've driven a plane & it banged into buildings.. shit, Call me Hussein if I fit the description. I'm not a farmer, but I stay with some "chickens" that give me the brains of an asian physician. You pitiful lames always hate on a nigga, yet still are amazed I contain my condition..

If you could live in a day of a king would live it? I can never explain all the pain that i'm feeling. I've risen from graves & I've slayed me some bitches, I never duck, yet you continue to blame me & claim that I did it? This rap shit isn't a game, but I play til I'm winning. My vision aint fame its to change up my living. Example; for dinner a steak with a maid in my kitchen. & a butler to pick up my plate when I say that i'm finished. I'm a little ashamed of the things that I witnessed, invisible reigns cause a strain on my tendons. We're all puppets...we're just living the way that THEY tell you to live it. A business gets paid & don't help in our districts. For minimal pay we just help with the dishes, instead of explaining whats dealt in our system. They're hella afraid to attempt a revision, when a president say all this bleh..do you listen? You ever just thinking "whats hell & what isn't?"...While these cities are plagued in a deadly condition, kids get in to gangs for respect & for bitches, & are dead the next day or instead end up missing. Is this really just fake? Someone tell me you're kidding. I'm dreaming..No, i'm really awake & it's hell that we live in.

**Phroxen** · #63 01-13-2012, 05:18 PM

@God-Himself My longest scheme was 500 syllables.. that's why the entire top verse rhymes exactly with the entire bottom verse.. every syllable.. all 500. That's all it was, trying to make the longest multi with the best verse possible. Yeah your verse has some nice multies, but they're 11ish syllables like you said, and only rhyme on a few emphasized syllables.. they don't match word for word.. it's still impressive, yes. But if you're flaunting multies, you should rhyme more of the syllables in it.

Example:

Quote:

Originally Posted by God-Himself

plane & it banged into buildings.. shit, Call me Hussein if I fit the description

The words in red aren't close to rhyming in that 8-syllable scheme, when they should if you're bragging about long schemes. Whereas my multi is a 500-syllable verse... that rhymes with another 500-syllable verse. So, I thought that was impressive.

**Phroxen** · 01-13-2012, 05:18 PM

@God-Himself My longest scheme was 500 syllables.. that's why the entire top verse rhymes exactly with the entire bottom verse.. every syllable.. all 500. That's all it was, trying to make the longest multi with the best verse possible. Yeah your verse has some nice multies, but they're 11ish syllables like you said, and only rhyme on a few emphasized syllables.. they don't match word for word.. it's still impressive, yes. But if you're flaunting multies, you should rhyme more of the syllables in it.

Example:

Quote:

Originally Posted by God-Himself

plane & it banged into buildings.. shit, Call me Hussein if I fit the description

The words in red aren't close to rhyming in that 8-syllable scheme, when they should if you're bragging about long schemes. Whereas my multi is a 500-syllable verse... that rhymes with another 500-syllable verse. So, I thought that was impressive.

**Godbody** · #64 01-13-2012, 06:21 PM

actually I kept my scheme way longer than you did. You're rhyming something every other bar, on some Freeway shit.

I rhyme almost everything, give or take a word or two in every line. but then again.. I'm droppin 11-13 syllable multis...that actually MAKE sense and send a message. that's much more than I can say about the shit you posted

**Godbody** · 01-13-2012, 06:21 PM

actually I kept my scheme way longer than you did. You're rhyming something every other bar, on some Freeway shit.

I rhyme almost everything, give or take a word or two in every line. but then again.. I'm droppin 11-13 syllable multis...that actually MAKE sense and send a message. that's much more than I can say about the shit you posted

**Phroxen** · #65 01-13-2012, 06:42 PM

You aren't listening to me. lol, wow. My "scheme" is the entire fucking verse. Not a few syllables in a bar.. not a bunch of multies.. it's the entire fucking verse. Every single syllable of the first verse rhymes with every single syllable of the second verse... making it one continuous multi that is 500-syllables long. If youre looking for individual multies in my bars, you're looking for the wrong thing.. my intent wasnt to showcase that. Read each verse (at about the same time) or read one bar from each at a time and maybe you'll see what I actually did lol.

I don't think I can describe that any clearer.

**Phroxen** · 01-13-2012, 06:42 PM

You aren't listening to me. lol, wow. My "scheme" is the entire fucking verse. Not a few syllables in a bar.. not a bunch of multies.. it's the entire fucking verse. Every single syllable of the first verse rhymes with every single syllable of the second verse... making it one continuous multi that is 500-syllables long. If youre looking for individual multies in my bars, you're looking for the wrong thing.. my intent wasnt to showcase that. Read each verse (at about the same time) or read one bar from each at a time and maybe you'll see what I actually did lol.

I don't think I can describe that any clearer.

**Phroxen** · #66 01-13-2012, 06:45 PM

What you did was all fine and dandy.. you sent a message and used an 11ish syllable scheme that rhymed in most of the places. I wasn't trying to do that at all. Comparing the two is pointless, especially if you're talking multies.

**Phroxen** · 01-13-2012, 06:45 PM

What you did was all fine and dandy.. you sent a message and used an 11ish syllable scheme that rhymed in most of the places. I wasn't trying to do that at all. Comparing the two is pointless, especially if you're talking multies.

**Student** · #67 01-13-2012, 10:46 PM

Your "Scheme" Made No Fucking Sense Though, Sure You Multi'd 500 Syllables BIG FUCKING WHOOP, Was It Good Though? HELL NO! It Doesn't Matter If You Can Multi Or Not If Your Shit Sounds Like A Lizman Verse, Oh Yes I Went There.

**Student** · 01-13-2012, 10:46 PM

Your "Scheme" Made No Fucking Sense Though, Sure You Multi'd 500 Syllables BIG FUCKING WHOOP, Was It Good Though? HELL NO! It Doesn't Matter If You Can Multi Or Not If Your Shit Sounds Like A Lizman Verse, Oh Yes I Went There.

**Lizman** · #68 01-13-2012, 11:00 PM

He Indirectly Complimented Me
Than He Offended Me By Comparing Me To The Likes Of Phroxen

**Lizman** · 01-13-2012, 11:00 PM

He Indirectly Complimented Me
Than He Offended Me By Comparing Me To The Likes Of Phroxen

**Lizman** · #69 01-13-2012, 11:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by God-Himself

actually I kept my scheme way longer than you did. You're rhyming something every other bar, on some Freeway shit.

I rhyme almost everything, give or take a word or two in every line. but then again.. I'm droppin 11-13 syllable multis...that actually MAKE sense and send a message. that's much more than I can say about the shit you posted

What Is It... 11 Or 13?
I Need To Know Whether To Up My Game Or Stay Cocky

**Lizman** · 01-13-2012, 11:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by God-Himself

actually I kept my scheme way longer than you did. You're rhyming something every other bar, on some Freeway shit.

I rhyme almost everything, give or take a word or two in every line. but then again.. I'm droppin 11-13 syllable multis...that actually MAKE sense and send a message. that's much more than I can say about the shit you posted

What Is It... 11 Or 13?
I Need To Know Whether To Up My Game Or Stay Cocky

**Mindless** · #70 01-13-2012, 11:19 PM

If @Student insults you and it sticks or has truth to it then you're in a sorry fucking boat dude.

**Mindless** · 01-13-2012, 11:19 PM

If @Student insults you and it sticks or has truth to it then you're in a sorry fucking boat dude.


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