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haha nice nice..... i could upload 1 or 2 for you if you email em me..... if you like haha
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I might hit you on IM later or tomorrow... Gta see which ones i wna put up next...
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haha nice nice..... i could upload 1 or 2 for you if you email em me..... if you like haha
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I might hit you on IM later or tomorrow... Gta see which ones i wna put up next...
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Delivery was monotone, no emotion. Flow was boring, content in the bars was played, and predictable in most places. Hook was awful, beat selection was boring. Nothing stand out about this at all. Don't PM me asking to feed your tracks anymore.
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09-23-2010, 05:18 PM
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Delivery was monotone, no emotion. Flow was boring, content in the bars was played, and predictable in most places. Hook was awful, beat selection was boring. Nothing stand out about this at all. Don't PM me asking to feed your tracks anymore.
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09-23-2010, 05:45 PM
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pretty good rhymes/multis...ya emotion on the track need to improve, the 2 syllable rhyme scheme was gettin a lil old about half way through, no lie..decent work overall though.
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pretty good rhymes/multis...ya emotion on the track need to improve, the 2 syllable rhyme scheme was gettin a lil old about half way through, no lie..decent work overall though.
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hook is good yoo i like it a lot...didnt expect this from you but now you set the bar so you have to exceed it with your next shit...flow is nice and the lyrics are on point...good shit yo
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hook is good yoo i like it a lot...didnt expect this from you but now you set the bar so you have to exceed it with your next shit...flow is nice and the lyrics are on point...good shit yo
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appreciate the feedback whether gud or bad... might post up 1 or 2 more... montone das mah style love it or hate it...
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appreciate the feedback whether gud or bad... might post up 1 or 2 more... montone das mah style love it or hate it...
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aight...this shit was pretty ill...voice is similar to Hov and flow is too..actually VERY Hov-like. Hook is forgettable, but decent. lyrically not mind blowing, but somewhat better than your battle shit.
no real pointers here fam, you've got the basics down, if anything come a little more unique witth flow and shit, but hey the same could be said about me lol...even though you aint nicer, bitch
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aight...this shit was pretty ill...voice is similar to Hov and flow is too..actually VERY Hov-like. Hook is forgettable, but decent. lyrically not mind blowing, but somewhat better than your battle shit.
no real pointers here fam, you've got the basics down, if anything come a little more unique witth flow and shit, but hey the same could be said about me lol...even though you aint nicer, bitch
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It's not like my criticism was bad, the majority of the thread have said the same things I did. They were just kinder with their wording.
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It's not like my criticism was bad, the majority of the thread have said the same things I did. They were just kinder with their wording.
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gud looks khryme... teezy i aint sweatin da criticism real talk i take it all as constructive and considerin da source i wont me lose any sleep at night... but gud looks ya'll...
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gud looks khryme... teezy i aint sweatin da criticism real talk i take it all as constructive and considerin da source i wont me lose any sleep at night... but gud looks ya'll...
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Sounded a lil like R.A Ruged in parts...Not bad..hook was aight at first, but got old..Keep it up
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Sounded a lil like R.A Ruged in parts...Not bad..hook was aight at first, but got old..Keep it up
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