Phroxen Vs ReeFer sucks

which is why an anonymous text tourney should be done to prove big names win because of big names

which is why an anonymous text tourney should be done to prove big names win because of big names

[Subreal]

Originally Posted by Row

which is why an anonymous text tourney should be done to prove big names win because of big names

yo co-sign, someone make that shit happen. orange title.

[Subreal]

Originally Posted by Row

which is why an anonymous text tourney should be done to prove big names win because of big names

yo co-sign, someone make that shit happen. orange title.

Sek-ken....Mecca? And I couldn't rhyme fucking Salmon with Shaman. Fuck off America.

DaDDiO can be a bit different Jason. I personally can't flow through Rumble what so ever. But yeah as I said, when Phrox isn't forcing it (like he did with that rhyme) I'm fine to flow through it, which is why I personally don't have too much of a problem with it. Slant rhyming is fine to me. It's a fucking death wish when you're from Scotland but none the less, especially when scheming, it's fine. But it's the double standards. It's like guys with names are allowed to slant rhyme but if guys near the bottom did it they'd be ripped to shreds. I can rhyme "SECOND MATCH IS" with "MECCA STATUS" fine but if I tried it, I'd get my arse kicked.

Ironically, a direct example of this is that I've used this in my upcomming battle with Rohan on FB. Sure he'll see this but I really don't give a fuck if he knows my lines beforehand.

Remember this avatar?
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Black girls? What about Islam’s RACIST ENDEVOURS? The fuck you gonna do, get a bitch and start PRAYING TOGETHER?
Giving some dark dames senSATIONS AND PLEASURE? Nah if he’s the type to say “I stare at the black box all night and day” it’s when he’s AIMING AT MECCA


Like 50% of the people I asked for feed on it has said "MECCA / toGETHER" doesn't rhyme man. So someone like me, a no name, has to deal with "GETHA / MECCA" not rhyming but "SECOND / MECCA" is fine.

I don't mean to make this the "EtH bitches cause he sucks and everyone says it" thread. I do suck, so don't just take me for example. Look at some lower level guy's battles and see that they will get their rhymes picked apart too by some top guys.

@Row, if you noticed the wordplay why didn't you mention it in your vote?

Sek-ken....Mecca? And I couldn't rhyme fucking Salmon with Shaman. Fuck off America.

DaDDiO can be a bit different Jason. I personally can't flow through Rumble what so ever. But yeah as I said, when Phrox isn't forcing it (like he did with that rhyme) I'm fine to flow through it, which is why I personally don't have too much of a problem with it. Slant rhyming is fine to me. It's a fucking death wish when you're from Scotland but none the less, especially when scheming, it's fine. But it's the double standards. It's like guys with names are allowed to slant rhyme but if guys near the bottom did it they'd be ripped to shreds. I can rhyme "SECOND MATCH IS" with "MECCA STATUS" fine but if I tried it, I'd get my arse kicked.

Ironically, a direct example of this is that I've used this in my upcomming battle with Rohan on FB. Sure he'll see this but I really don't give a fuck if he knows my lines beforehand.

Remember this avatar?
http://sd.keepcalm-o-matic.co.uk/i/k...ck-woman-2.png
Black girls? What about Islam’s RACIST ENDEVOURS? The fuck you gonna do, get a bitch and start PRAYING TOGETHER?
Giving some dark dames senSATIONS AND PLEASURE? Nah if he’s the type to say “I stare at the black box all night and day” it’s when he’s AIMING AT MECCA


Like 50% of the people I asked for feed on it has said "MECCA / toGETHER" doesn't rhyme man. So someone like me, a no name, has to deal with "GETHA / MECCA" not rhyming but "SECOND / MECCA" is fine.

I don't mean to make this the "EtH bitches cause he sucks and everyone says it" thread. I do suck, so don't just take me for example. Look at some lower level guy's battles and see that they will get their rhymes picked apart too by some top guys.

@Row, if you noticed the wordplay why didn't you mention it in your vote?

Originally Posted by Corporate EtH

Sek-ken....Mecca? And I couldn't rhyme fucking Salmon with Shaman. Fuck off America.

DaDDiO can be a bit different Jason. I personally can't flow through Rumble what so ever. But yeah as I said, when Phrox isn't forcing it (like he did with that rhyme) I'm fine to flow through it, which is why I personally don't have too much of a problem with it. Slant rhyming is fine to me. It's a fucking death wish when you're from Scotland but none the less, especially when scheming, it's fine. But it's the double standards. It's like guys with names are allowed to slant rhyme but if guys near the bottom did it they'd be ripped to shreds. I can rhyme "SECOND MATCH IS" with "MECCA STATUS" fine but if I tried it, I'd get my arse kicked.

Ironically, a direct example of this is that I've used this in my upcomming battle with Rohan on FB. Sure he'll see this but I really don't give a fuck if he knows my lines beforehand.

Remember this avatar?
http://sd.keepcalm-o-matic.co.uk/i/k...ck-woman-2.png
Black girls? What about Islam’s RACIST ENDEVOURS? The fuck you gonna do, get a bitch and start PRAYING TOGETHER?
Giving some dark dames senSATIONS AND PLEASURE? Nah if he’s the type to say “I stare at the black box all night and day” it’s when he’s AIMING AT MECCA


Like 50% of the people I asked for feed on it has said "MECCA / toGETHER" doesn't rhyme man. So someone like me, a no name, has to deal with "GETHA / MECCA" not rhyming but "SECOND / MECCA" is fine.

I don't mean to make this the "EtH bitches cause he sucks and everyone says it" thread. I do suck, so don't just take me for example. Look at some lower level guy's battles and see that they will get their rhymes picked apart too by some top guys.

@Row, if you noticed the wordplay why didn't you mention it in your vote?

i thought that the wp was so bad but i saw no one point it out.. so i kinda kept it to myself tbh. it looked like no one cared

Originally Posted by Corporate EtH

Sek-ken....Mecca? And I couldn't rhyme fucking Salmon with Shaman. Fuck off America.

DaDDiO can be a bit different Jason. I personally can't flow through Rumble what so ever. But yeah as I said, when Phrox isn't forcing it (like he did with that rhyme) I'm fine to flow through it, which is why I personally don't have too much of a problem with it. Slant rhyming is fine to me. It's a fucking death wish when you're from Scotland but none the less, especially when scheming, it's fine. But it's the double standards. It's like guys with names are allowed to slant rhyme but if guys near the bottom did it they'd be ripped to shreds. I can rhyme "SECOND MATCH IS" with "MECCA STATUS" fine but if I tried it, I'd get my arse kicked.

Ironically, a direct example of this is that I've used this in my upcomming battle with Rohan on FB. Sure he'll see this but I really don't give a fuck if he knows my lines beforehand.

Remember this avatar?
http://sd.keepcalm-o-matic.co.uk/i/k...ck-woman-2.png
Black girls? What about Islam’s RACIST ENDEVOURS? The fuck you gonna do, get a bitch and start PRAYING TOGETHER?
Giving some dark dames senSATIONS AND PLEASURE? Nah if he’s the type to say “I stare at the black box all night and day” it’s when he’s AIMING AT MECCA


Like 50% of the people I asked for feed on it has said "MECCA / toGETHER" doesn't rhyme man. So someone like me, a no name, has to deal with "GETHA / MECCA" not rhyming but "SECOND / MECCA" is fine.

I don't mean to make this the "EtH bitches cause he sucks and everyone says it" thread. I do suck, so don't just take me for example. Look at some lower level guy's battles and see that they will get their rhymes picked apart too by some top guys.

@Row, if you noticed the wordplay why didn't you mention it in your vote?

i thought that the wp was so bad but i saw no one point it out.. so i kinda kept it to myself tbh. it looked like no one cared

Originally Posted by Row

i thought that the wp was so bad but i saw no one point it out.. so i kinda kept it to myself tbh. it looked like no one cared

And yet now you're a mod who can see everyone's votes? What's to say you won't see that everyone voted one way, keep your thoughts to yourself and do what everyone else did again?

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Originally Posted by Jason

lol yeah well i guess your accent will play a role in something like this
the setup and style is critical tho man .. Phroxen is amazing at writing in that style.. he writes it in such a way that the words bounce off each other properly
the way you did it in that bar is more .. rigid .. i dunno how to explain it .. its not the same quality of writing so its not gunna flow as well as his did

that said .. i wouldnt consider yours improper or criticize the verse for that multi .. but this type of writing is something he excels at so its even "less improper' when he does it .. it has nothing to do with his name .. Phroxen isnt even a big name (?) he kinda just appeared outta nowhere and dropped a few battles lol

your best multies in that bar are actually "praying together and racist endeavours" and they dont rhyme at all

So I don't rhyme at all....


Yet you haven't once mentioned PROBABLE / GODLY FEUD.


Maybe you will reply "I didn't read that" but that's EXACTLY what I'm talking about. Aye, it's easy to say "EtH man your shit's not rhyming" but in the first post of the thread there is a MUCH worse attempt at a rhyme from a top name on the site and no one seems to give a fuck.

Originally Posted by Row

i thought that the wp was so bad but i saw no one point it out.. so i kinda kept it to myself tbh. it looked like no one cared

And yet now you're a mod who can see everyone's votes? What's to say you won't see that everyone voted one way, keep your thoughts to yourself and do what everyone else did again?

---------- Post added at 10:53 AM ---------- Previous post was at 10:51 AM ----------

Originally Posted by Jason

lol yeah well i guess your accent will play a role in something like this
the setup and style is critical tho man .. Phroxen is amazing at writing in that style.. he writes it in such a way that the words bounce off each other properly
the way you did it in that bar is more .. rigid .. i dunno how to explain it .. its not the same quality of writing so its not gunna flow as well as his did

that said .. i wouldnt consider yours improper or criticize the verse for that multi .. but this type of writing is something he excels at so its even "less improper' when he does it .. it has nothing to do with his name .. Phroxen isnt even a big name (?) he kinda just appeared outta nowhere and dropped a few battles lol

your best multies in that bar are actually "praying together and racist endeavours" and they dont rhyme at all

So I don't rhyme at all....


Yet you haven't once mentioned PROBABLE / GODLY FEUD.


Maybe you will reply "I didn't read that" but that's EXACTLY what I'm talking about. Aye, it's easy to say "EtH man your shit's not rhyming" but in the first post of the thread there is a MUCH worse attempt at a rhyme from a top name on the site and no one seems to give a fuck.

Originally Posted by Corporate EtH

And yet now you're a mod who can see everyone's votes? What's to say you won't see that everyone voted one way, keep your thoughts to yourself and do what everyone else did again?

but mentioning that wouldnt have changed my vote.

and i dont follow crowds

Originally Posted by Corporate EtH

And yet now you're a mod who can see everyone's votes? What's to say you won't see that everyone voted one way, keep your thoughts to yourself and do what everyone else did again?

but mentioning that wouldnt have changed my vote.

and i dont follow crowds

PROBABLE / GODLY FEUD works fine.




This is pretty much like you're saying "EtH, Soulja Boi IS dope. You just have to hear his shit properly".

There is absolutely NO possible way in the English language, what so ever......AT ALL.....that PROBABLE / GODLY FEUD will ever...EVER....rhyme with each other.


The "LY" is a HUGE part of the GODLY FUED rhyme. It's by a landslide the most emphasised sound in those words. It's nowhere to be seen in PROBABLE.

PROBAH
GODLY

Not even similar in any aspect.

But it gets even worse.

FUED / BLE (Or BULL if you want to write it out like that)

FEUD and BULL.....WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?


Yeah absolutely miles past my comprehension here. If you can rhyme those two words, then Cabbage and Banana should be pretty damn similar as well.




EDIT: Beyond this, for the most part Phrox's verse rhymes fairly well. But in addition, it's ABSOLUTELY forced too. "MECCA STATUS; GODLY FEUD". That's ridiculously forced yet no one says it.

PROBABLE / GODLY FEUD works fine.




This is pretty much like you're saying "EtH, Soulja Boi IS dope. You just have to hear his shit properly".

There is absolutely NO possible way in the English language, what so ever......AT ALL.....that PROBABLE / GODLY FEUD will ever...EVER....rhyme with each other.


The "LY" is a HUGE part of the GODLY FUED rhyme. It's by a landslide the most emphasised sound in those words. It's nowhere to be seen in PROBABLE.

PROBAH
GODLY

Not even similar in any aspect.

But it gets even worse.

FUED / BLE (Or BULL if you want to write it out like that)

FEUD and BULL.....WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?


Yeah absolutely miles past my comprehension here. If you can rhyme those two words, then Cabbage and Banana should be pretty damn similar as well.




EDIT: Beyond this, for the most part Phrox's verse rhymes fairly well. But in addition, it's ABSOLUTELY forced too. "MECCA STATUS; GODLY FEUD". That's ridiculously forced yet no one says it.

Originally Posted by Jason

you also gotta take into consideration that he went 32 lines rhyming the same words.
granted, thats not an excuse to do things incorrectly .. but im a big picture kinda guy .. i dont sit there and get hung up on every single thing rhyming flawlessly .. its more appreciating the verse as a total package sometimes .. godly feud / probable is a not a great multi but when i read it i instantly know that they match and flow together.. its all in the way its said

if you got a preschooler to rhyme: cat, hat, bat, car .. you would see that "car" doesnt rhyme

just like if you got a preschooler to rhyme "racist endeavours" and "praying together" they would not rhyme

but ... in a text battle ... car and cat dont rhyme
but in a text battle .. praying together and racist endeavours do rhyme cus of the way the writing is

its contextual

not arguing with your overall point though

I'd be the same, but with that one multi (which this isn't about, I don't mean to JUST take shots at Phrox. Seems everyone agrees about ReeF haha), with that multi I had to stop and make sure it was supposed to rhyme with the first one. I wasn't trying to pick stuff out but straight away I had to read over some stuff again to find what I was supposed to be rhyming with. For example, probable flows off like one word. It's quite a quickly said word. When you hit godly feud, it's MUCH slower and has the glottal stop in the middle (is it still called glottal when it's actually a space?). Straight away the flow got fucked up from that to me and I would have to adjust how I'd go about reading from then on.

How the fuck does cat rhyme with car in preschool?

Originally Posted by Jason

you also gotta take into consideration that he went 32 lines rhyming the same words.
granted, thats not an excuse to do things incorrectly .. but im a big picture kinda guy .. i dont sit there and get hung up on every single thing rhyming flawlessly .. its more appreciating the verse as a total package sometimes .. godly feud / probable is a not a great multi but when i read it i instantly know that they match and flow together.. its all in the way its said

if you got a preschooler to rhyme: cat, hat, bat, car .. you would see that "car" doesnt rhyme

just like if you got a preschooler to rhyme "racist endeavours" and "praying together" they would not rhyme

but ... in a text battle ... car and cat dont rhyme
but in a text battle .. praying together and racist endeavours do rhyme cus of the way the writing is

its contextual

not arguing with your overall point though

I'd be the same, but with that one multi (which this isn't about, I don't mean to JUST take shots at Phrox. Seems everyone agrees about ReeF haha), with that multi I had to stop and make sure it was supposed to rhyme with the first one. I wasn't trying to pick stuff out but straight away I had to read over some stuff again to find what I was supposed to be rhyming with. For example, probable flows off like one word. It's quite a quickly said word. When you hit godly feud, it's MUCH slower and has the glottal stop in the middle (is it still called glottal when it's actually a space?). Straight away the flow got fucked up from that to me and I would have to adjust how I'd go about reading from then on.

How the fuck does cat rhyme with car in preschool?

[J u s T C]

It's been like this forever. You act like this is a new phenomenon.

Person A) Puts out garbage, it gets called garbage.

Person B who I'm cool with and has a rep puts out garbage, it's great, or at worst I wont bring him to question.

Look man It aint just that, half these idiots haven't got the slightest clue.

So much so that I'm probably talking about someone who will agree with what I'm saying above. Thats just how clueless some of these guys are. It's happened before in these types of threads but I just left them to their delusions rather than say

"well actually, YOU'RE 1 of them"

You're talking about the only site where you can post a track you recorded rapping off beat inside a wind tunnel and receive 10's and "dope shit!" then get pissy with ya ego because someone had the temerity to give you a 1 and tell you the truth.

You got idiots like bnas who are tone def and after a thousand battles still sound like they did on battle 1, yet still gets wins, still gets 10's and people encourage him.

You really expecting continuity NOW? lol.

[J u s T C]

It's been like this forever. You act like this is a new phenomenon.

Person A) Puts out garbage, it gets called garbage.

Person B who I'm cool with and has a rep puts out garbage, it's great, or at worst I wont bring him to question.

Look man It aint just that, half these idiots haven't got the slightest clue.

So much so that I'm probably talking about someone who will agree with what I'm saying above. Thats just how clueless some of these guys are. It's happened before in these types of threads but I just left them to their delusions rather than say

"well actually, YOU'RE 1 of them"

You're talking about the only site where you can post a track you recorded rapping off beat inside a wind tunnel and receive 10's and "dope shit!" then get pissy with ya ego because someone had the temerity to give you a 1 and tell you the truth.

You got idiots like bnas who are tone def and after a thousand battles still sound like they did on battle 1, yet still gets wins, still gets 10's and people encourage him.

You really expecting continuity NOW? lol.

Originally Posted by Indianapolis Jones

It's been like this forever. You act like this is a new phenomenon.

Person A) Puts out garbage, it gets called garbage.

Person B who I'm cool with and has a rep puts out garbage, it's great, or at worst I wont bring him to question.

Look man It aint just that, half these idiots haven't got the slightest clue.

So much so that I'm probably talking about someone who will agree with what I'm saying above. Thats just how clueless some of these guys are. It's happened before in these types of threads but I just left them to their delusions rather than say

"well actually, YOU'RE 1 of them"

You're talking about the only site where you can post a track you recorded rapping off beat inside a wind tunnel and receive 10's and "dope shit!" then get pissy with ya ego because someone had the temerity to give you a 1 and tell you the truth.

It's just annoyed me with certain people. I was really pissed off that Dissizit Vs ILLoKWENT was billed as one of the greatest battles ever at the time too when I thought it was awful.

I'm not even a guy who breaks things down much. If I can flow through the verse and the punches hit hard and are frequent, who gives a fuck about everything else? Illimit's a really good example of this. Here's a line that technically sucks but I thought it was awesome. Vs a 14 year old Verity.

I'm 25, you 15? that's a DISASTEROUS RECIPE! wrong punchline and them CATS IS ARRESTIN ME then I'll end up on an ACTUAL REGISTRY!! So don't think when I say I'm "puttin ROCKETS IN YA ABDOMEN" or I'll "POP YOU IN YA ASS AND SHIT..." that for even a second I found you ATTRACTIVE, Uh, SEXUALLY!!/

I can flow through that and the punch hits hard. Sorted. Good line.

But I can't ignore that lower level guys get smashed because of their rhyming when guys like Phrox is allowed to be forced and barely even rhyme.

Originally Posted by Indianapolis Jones

It's been like this forever. You act like this is a new phenomenon.

Person A) Puts out garbage, it gets called garbage.

Person B who I'm cool with and has a rep puts out garbage, it's great, or at worst I wont bring him to question.

Look man It aint just that, half these idiots haven't got the slightest clue.

So much so that I'm probably talking about someone who will agree with what I'm saying above. Thats just how clueless some of these guys are. It's happened before in these types of threads but I just left them to their delusions rather than say

"well actually, YOU'RE 1 of them"

You're talking about the only site where you can post a track you recorded rapping off beat inside a wind tunnel and receive 10's and "dope shit!" then get pissy with ya ego because someone had the temerity to give you a 1 and tell you the truth.

It's just annoyed me with certain people. I was really pissed off that Dissizit Vs ILLoKWENT was billed as one of the greatest battles ever at the time too when I thought it was awful.

I'm not even a guy who breaks things down much. If I can flow through the verse and the punches hit hard and are frequent, who gives a fuck about everything else? Illimit's a really good example of this. Here's a line that technically sucks but I thought it was awesome. Vs a 14 year old Verity.

I'm 25, you 15? that's a DISASTEROUS RECIPE! wrong punchline and them CATS IS ARRESTIN ME then I'll end up on an ACTUAL REGISTRY!! So don't think when I say I'm "puttin ROCKETS IN YA ABDOMEN" or I'll "POP YOU IN YA ASS AND SHIT..." that for even a second I found you ATTRACTIVE, Uh, SEXUALLY!!/

I can flow through that and the punch hits hard. Sorted. Good line.

But I can't ignore that lower level guys get smashed because of their rhyming when guys like Phrox is allowed to be forced and barely even rhyme.