The 500-syllable multi.

And realllllllly stretched. Lol.

And realllllllly stretched. Lol.

[Phroxen]

Originally Posted by DEADICATION

Do u know what slant rhyming is? EVERY FUCKING RAPPER DOES THAT name at least ONE rapper that doesn't do slant rhyming

Obviously you don't know what a slant rhyme is. What YOU are implying is that slant rhyming is forcing syllables. Incorrect. What a slant rhyme actually is (google it if you doubt me), is an imperfect rhyme.. in the sense that only the emphasized vowel sounds match. Yes, everyone on this site slant rhymes.. every single rapper slant rhymes. Know why? Because that's how advanced rhyming fucking works.

Otherwise we'd just all be using "perfect rhymes" like: catch, match, batch, hatch...
Instead of slant rhymes like: holler, bother, toddler, cobbler

Originally Posted by Jason

dead @ trying to explain multies to people on here by showing a 500 syllable long one.. real practical.. lol dumbfuck

First, I'm not trying to explain anything to anyone.. I'm just giving them something to view. If you don't like it, move along, dumbfuck. Second, if you think it's "random garbage"... you're either on a ridiculous high horse or just didn't read. Given, some is abstracted, but it all makes sense... and paints a picture. These aren't power verses by any means.. nor are they battle verses.. maybe a topical if anything. They're just two verses I pieced together in a very tedious exercise. I'm sure I could write something more entertaining now and make the entire verse rhyme with a counterpart, but I've already proven that I could string a multi together that was that long and still construct coherent thoughts and send a message.

@Jack-0-Lantern stretched? Pfft, lol. If you mean really long, then sure. If you're saying something didn't rhyme, I'm calling your bluff. If you meant forced then I'm calling your bluff again. Everything made sense.



TLDR; Achievement Unlocked.

[Phroxen]

Originally Posted by DEADICATION

Do u know what slant rhyming is? EVERY FUCKING RAPPER DOES THAT name at least ONE rapper that doesn't do slant rhyming

Obviously you don't know what a slant rhyme is. What YOU are implying is that slant rhyming is forcing syllables. Incorrect. What a slant rhyme actually is (google it if you doubt me), is an imperfect rhyme.. in the sense that only the emphasized vowel sounds match. Yes, everyone on this site slant rhymes.. every single rapper slant rhymes. Know why? Because that's how advanced rhyming fucking works.

Otherwise we'd just all be using "perfect rhymes" like: catch, match, batch, hatch...
Instead of slant rhymes like: holler, bother, toddler, cobbler

Originally Posted by Jason

dead @ trying to explain multies to people on here by showing a 500 syllable long one.. real practical.. lol dumbfuck

First, I'm not trying to explain anything to anyone.. I'm just giving them something to view. If you don't like it, move along, dumbfuck. Second, if you think it's "random garbage"... you're either on a ridiculous high horse or just didn't read. Given, some is abstracted, but it all makes sense... and paints a picture. These aren't power verses by any means.. nor are they battle verses.. maybe a topical if anything. They're just two verses I pieced together in a very tedious exercise. I'm sure I could write something more entertaining now and make the entire verse rhyme with a counterpart, but I've already proven that I could string a multi together that was that long and still construct coherent thoughts and send a message.

@Jack-0-Lantern stretched? Pfft, lol. If you mean really long, then sure. If you're saying something didn't rhyme, I'm calling your bluff. If you meant forced then I'm calling your bluff again. Everything made sense.



TLDR; Achievement Unlocked.

[DooX]

this is what happens when u praise someone too much

[DooX]

this is what happens when u praise someone too much

[Phroxen]

Side note: It's harder than it looks.. and if you'd like to prove me wrong, be my guest. Otherwise pipe down and enjoy (that goes for anyone who claims it's easy.)

[Phroxen]

Side note: It's harder than it looks.. and if you'd like to prove me wrong, be my guest. Otherwise pipe down and enjoy (that goes for anyone who claims it's easy.)

[Phroxen]

Originally Posted by DooX

AINT EVEN RANKED... FAINTS WHEN WANKED

From your most recent text battle...

@DooX You can't match your syllables either. I'd take notes if I were you, champ.

[Phroxen]

Originally Posted by DooX

AINT EVEN RANKED... FAINTS WHEN WANKED

From your most recent text battle...

@DooX You can't match your syllables either. I'd take notes if I were you, champ.

this is entertaining

this is entertaining

[DooX]

Originally Posted by Phroxen

From your most recent text battle...

@DooX You can't match your syllables either. I'd take notes if I were you, champ.

listen...i have no problem learning or taking advice from anyone, seriously im all ears but when you try to make a thread criticizing everyone and telling them to be a decent lyricist and along the way attacking a person who disagrees and says that your verse has flaws shows that your way too cocky.

[DooX]

Originally Posted by Phroxen

From your most recent text battle...

@DooX You can't match your syllables either. I'd take notes if I were you, champ.

listen...i have no problem learning or taking advice from anyone, seriously im all ears but when you try to make a thread criticizing everyone and telling them to be a decent lyricist and along the way attacking a person who disagrees and says that your verse has flaws shows that your way too cocky.

[-Dimez-]

Originally Posted by Phroxen

Obviously you don't know what a slant rhyme is. What YOU are implying is that slant rhyming is forcing syllables. Incorrect. What a slant rhyme actually is (google it if you doubt me), is an imperfect rhyme.. in the sense that only the emphasized vowel sounds match. Yes, everyone on this site slant rhymes.. every single rapper slant rhymes. Know why? Because that's how advanced rhyming fucking works.

Otherwise we'd just all be using "perfect rhymes" like: catch, match, batch, hatch...
Instead of slant rhymes like: holler, bother, toddler, cobbler






First, I'm not trying to explain anything to anyone.. I'm just giving them something to view. If you don't like it, move along, dumbfuck. Second, if you think it's "random garbage"... you're either on a ridiculous high horse or just didn't read. Given, some is abstracted, but it all makes sense... and paints a picture. These aren't power verses by any means.. nor are they battle verses.. maybe a topical if anything. They're just two verses I pieced together in a very tedious exercise. I'm sure I could write something more entertaining now and make the entire verse rhyme with a counterpart, but I've already proven that I could string a multi together that was that long and still construct coherent thoughts and send a message.

@Jack-0-Lantern stretched? Pfft, lol. If you mean really long, then sure. If you're saying something didn't rhyme, I'm calling your bluff. If you meant forced then I'm calling your bluff again. Everything made sense.



TLDR; Achievement Unlocked.

I didn't fucking say that u arrogant dumbshit, you just defined slant rhyming to everyone who already knew what it was ... And that expo u dropped on my battle was all bullshit ...fuck outta here son ...I hate cocky bitches

[-Dimez-]

Originally Posted by Phroxen

Obviously you don't know what a slant rhyme is. What YOU are implying is that slant rhyming is forcing syllables. Incorrect. What a slant rhyme actually is (google it if you doubt me), is an imperfect rhyme.. in the sense that only the emphasized vowel sounds match. Yes, everyone on this site slant rhymes.. every single rapper slant rhymes. Know why? Because that's how advanced rhyming fucking works.

Otherwise we'd just all be using "perfect rhymes" like: catch, match, batch, hatch...
Instead of slant rhymes like: holler, bother, toddler, cobbler






First, I'm not trying to explain anything to anyone.. I'm just giving them something to view. If you don't like it, move along, dumbfuck. Second, if you think it's "random garbage"... you're either on a ridiculous high horse or just didn't read. Given, some is abstracted, but it all makes sense... and paints a picture. These aren't power verses by any means.. nor are they battle verses.. maybe a topical if anything. They're just two verses I pieced together in a very tedious exercise. I'm sure I could write something more entertaining now and make the entire verse rhyme with a counterpart, but I've already proven that I could string a multi together that was that long and still construct coherent thoughts and send a message.

@Jack-0-Lantern stretched? Pfft, lol. If you mean really long, then sure. If you're saying something didn't rhyme, I'm calling your bluff. If you meant forced then I'm calling your bluff again. Everything made sense.



TLDR; Achievement Unlocked.

I didn't fucking say that u arrogant dumbshit, you just defined slant rhyming to everyone who already knew what it was ... And that expo u dropped on my battle was all bullshit ...fuck outta here son ...I hate cocky bitches

[Mindless]

Originally Posted by Jason

youre not trying to explain anything to anyone?
your original post that most people on here cant multi so you dug up an old "gem" (lmao) of yours and told everyone to "take notes"

lol @ claiming this "paints a picture" its just streams of unconnected rhyme schemes that've been put together for the sole purpose of matching the same rhyme schemes in another verse
it literally takes absolutely no skill other than the ability to do a multi. anyone with a serious lack of social life / decent vocabulary can do it with ease. you've done nothing impressive at all. youre only gunna get attention for it because its long but in reality its just glorified garbage.

" quick blows with a curb" lol wut?

" slap these guys with leather boots - then spit on a racist - guys, xen don't play that herb shit" lmao what the fuck?

the concept in itself is retarded. the point of a multi is to establish a rhythm in the verse, to enhance flow, etc.
you obviously lose that when its 500 fuckin syllables it defeats the whole purpose.

congrats you sat there for hours and rhymed a whole bunch of lame shit then rhymed equally lame shit again in another 30 lines. youre a hero

[Mindless]

Originally Posted by Jason

youre not trying to explain anything to anyone?
your original post that most people on here cant multi so you dug up an old "gem" (lmao) of yours and told everyone to "take notes"

lol @ claiming this "paints a picture" its just streams of unconnected rhyme schemes that've been put together for the sole purpose of matching the same rhyme schemes in another verse
it literally takes absolutely no skill other than the ability to do a multi. anyone with a serious lack of social life / decent vocabulary can do it with ease. you've done nothing impressive at all. youre only gunna get attention for it because its long but in reality its just glorified garbage.

" quick blows with a curb" lol wut?

" slap these guys with leather boots - then spit on a racist - guys, xen don't play that herb shit" lmao what the fuck?

the concept in itself is retarded. the point of a multi is to establish a rhythm in the verse, to enhance flow, etc.
you obviously lose that when its 500 fuckin syllables it defeats the whole purpose.

congrats you sat there for hours and rhymed a whole bunch of lame shit then rhymed equally lame shit again in another 30 lines. youre a hero

[Phroxen]

Originally Posted by DEADICATION

Smfh @Phroxen ... Do u know what slant rhyming is? EVERY FUCKING RAPPER DOES THAT name at least ONE rapper that doesn't do slant rhyming

Assuming you were defending Pronto_Banks, you're a moron. I don't care if he used slant rhyme or not.. I'm talking about the fucking syllables not matching. So either you're saying they match and you're a moron, or you're saying they don't match and you're proving my point.

And my vote?

You mean this one where I voted for you?

Originally Posted by Phroxen

Deadication: Nice multies through the whole verse.. the estrogen punch was the hardest in your verse, and the setup was solid too. The last bar seemed a little forced with the rhyme scheme, but the punch did connect in the end. Decent drop.

Or this one where I voted against you?

Originally Posted by Phroxen

The other verse had tons of mismatched multies.. and if they matched, they were forced as hell. When they're being forced that badly, you may as well not even use them.. it just fucks up the entire bar. This verse also had several disappointing punches. So, since the punches in both verses were either played, forced, or took way too long to deliver, I'll call them a tie. The winner gets this with a more fluid read (you can call it flow if you want), clearer setups and more relevant and up to date material.

Because one of those verses sucked. So, I'm cocky because I found flaws in your verse? You're not perfect, kid. You fuck outta here.

[Phroxen]

Originally Posted by DEADICATION

Smfh @Phroxen ... Do u know what slant rhyming is? EVERY FUCKING RAPPER DOES THAT name at least ONE rapper that doesn't do slant rhyming

Assuming you were defending Pronto_Banks, you're a moron. I don't care if he used slant rhyme or not.. I'm talking about the fucking syllables not matching. So either you're saying they match and you're a moron, or you're saying they don't match and you're proving my point.

And my vote?

You mean this one where I voted for you?

Originally Posted by Phroxen

Deadication: Nice multies through the whole verse.. the estrogen punch was the hardest in your verse, and the setup was solid too. The last bar seemed a little forced with the rhyme scheme, but the punch did connect in the end. Decent drop.

Or this one where I voted against you?

Originally Posted by Phroxen

The other verse had tons of mismatched multies.. and if they matched, they were forced as hell. When they're being forced that badly, you may as well not even use them.. it just fucks up the entire bar. This verse also had several disappointing punches. So, since the punches in both verses were either played, forced, or took way too long to deliver, I'll call them a tie. The winner gets this with a more fluid read (you can call it flow if you want), clearer setups and more relevant and up to date material.

Because one of those verses sucked. So, I'm cocky because I found flaws in your verse? You're not perfect, kid. You fuck outta here.