::Moses Rap School:: Weeks 1-4 - Page 11 - Lets Beef

**Black Book** · #**101** 07-30-2013, 04:58 PM

@Moses I'd love for you to show me what short bar is out of curiosity. I've always heard of it but never knew what the fuck people were talking about.

**Black Book** · 07-30-2013, 04:58 PM

@Moses I'd love for you to show me what short bar is out of curiosity. I've always heard of it but never knew what the fuck people were talking about.

Rain-Matrix · #**102** 07-30-2013, 04:58 PM

what are you teaching these kids

Rain-Matrix · 07-30-2013, 04:58 PM

what are you teaching these kids

**Snoopy316** · #**103** 07-30-2013, 05:12 PM

@Moses respect for the breakdown.... I take what I said back bruh. And wil give it a good shot in the next submission. in Aus we pronounce "slavery" as "sla-vry" two syllables but yeah it's also three syllables, like "cemetery" some part of the world pronounce the word as "cem-meh-try" I'll be careful with words like those next time

**Snoopy316** · 07-30-2013, 05:12 PM

@Moses respect for the breakdown.... I take what I said back bruh. And wil give it a good shot in the next submission. in Aus we pronounce "slavery" as "sla-vry" two syllables but yeah it's also three syllables, like "cemetery" some part of the world pronounce the word as "cem-meh-try" I'll be careful with words like those next time

Rain-Matrix · #**104** 07-30-2013, 05:15 PM

Watch this shit turn into columbine ina minute

Rain-Matrix · 07-30-2013, 05:15 PM

Watch this shit turn into columbine ina minute

**Erupt da Monsta** · #**105** 07-30-2013, 05:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Black Book

@Moses I'd love for you to show me what short bar is out of curiosity. I've always heard of it but never knew what the fuck people were talking about.

No doubt, Ima hit u up in the pms in the next couple of days, I will also show it in the classroom, its a good way to keep the filler out, and focus more on relevant multis and punch power substituting filler for small inner multis.

@Snoopy316 no doubt man, i thought that was the case but yeah just watch those multis, and also focus on a more concrete punch, somthing that solid and makes more sense. Doesnt have to be the most creative, for you I just want to see better diction/word choice and a smoother read.

**Erupt da Monsta** · 07-30-2013, 05:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Black Book

@Moses I'd love for you to show me what short bar is out of curiosity. I've always heard of it but never knew what the fuck people were talking about.

No doubt, Ima hit u up in the pms in the next couple of days, I will also show it in the classroom, its a good way to keep the filler out, and focus more on relevant multis and punch power substituting filler for small inner multis.

@Snoopy316 no doubt man, i thought that was the case but yeah just watch those multis, and also focus on a more concrete punch, somthing that solid and makes more sense. Doesnt have to be the most creative, for you I just want to see better diction/word choice and a smoother read.

The Law · #**106** 07-30-2013, 07:05 PM

@Moses lol really? Your the teach so I respect it.. But if you read it, the syllable count doesn't do anything to my verse what so ever.. If I capped the 'with' Then it would have been the right syllables lol..

But the rest was on point, I know I rushed the shit, I've been mad busy lately.. Thanks for the breakdown, it's appreciated.. lol I promise I won't be as sloppy next time around.

The Law · 07-30-2013, 07:05 PM

@Moses lol really? Your the teach so I respect it.. But if you read it, the syllable count doesn't do anything to my verse what so ever.. If I capped the 'with' Then it would have been the right syllables lol..

But the rest was on point, I know I rushed the shit, I've been mad busy lately.. Thanks for the breakdown, it's appreciated.. lol I promise I won't be as sloppy next time around.