My Bars..
Grizz?? psh like a 'rebellious son' he couldnt "HANDLE MEETING DAD"(DaDDiO) since then hes been watching the food CHANNEL, EATING SNACKS so much his 'hustle is being broke' now someone bring a CANDLE TO HIS PAD(lights out) cuz he wouldnt 'catch a break for the loot' if he was a "VANDAL SEEKING CASH"... 'you gonna be a grand champ' cuz you BOLDLY BEATING WEAK DROPS?? boy 'take a look through an old bulls eye' cuz you "ONLY SEEING THESE SHOTS"... you gonna leave 'my blood at my feet' and this REBELS CHEST SQUIRTING?? nah cuz there 'wouldnt be red under Phenomonon' unLESS "SPELL CHECKS WORKING"... you mean?? hoe you aint even KIND OF VICIOUS so dont make a 'career out of thinking' cuz that NINE'LL SPIT GRIZZ and the doctors'll 'work on ya head' since you wont "MIND YA BUSINESS"... ya hoe dont like you, ASK YA BITCH, SHES MET ME and she wouldnt let 'this tool soften her up' if her "LAXATIVES WERE READY"... somebody KEEP A GURNEY PURCHASED fa 'this dick sucker's NEEDS' CUZ 'GRIZZ KNEES HURTIN' from trying to 'bite his way through to the big one' like "RICAN'S TOURNEY VERSES"... he aint EATING RIGHT, YA DIG?? but im 'starving for you pussies' so i'll leave you LEAKING DRY FROM SIGS yeah im 'taking this hoe out for dinner' so its best he gets "TREATED LIKE A BITCH"
X-Calibur's Breakdown..
Ok so phe asked me to come back and break it down all imma do is a bar for bar on phe's verse at his request i guess .... Phenomonon ... Bar1 .... Hustle being broke candle to his pad !!! Vague refernce to not affording electricity weak catch a break for the loot .... Vandal stealing cash multie doesn't rhyme with previous ones what does CASH rhyme with PAD DAD SNACK ??? And again the punch was vague to its concept .... Bar2 .... This next bit to me was a bit huh!!!! You gunna be a grand champ boldly beating weak drops isnt that sort of big'n him up ?? Then threw a bulls eye only seeing these shots that dont make no cohesive sense or even make a metaphor ??? ... Bar3 ... Wierd way of wording this pun the concept is dopey but i just dont think the wording was right ... And i hate dudes who use the second sylabel of a word to make it a multie shits forced i.e less spell checks working rebels chest squirting ... Really phe ??? .... Bar4... Mind ya business pun meh need harder concepts than that for this battle you know that too ... Bar5 ... The laxatives tool combination laxatives shoulda used a wordplay on tool as stool is a shit anyway not hard hitting and talking bout someone's girlfriend or wifey meh not a fan .... Bar6 ... Multies was all over da place here .... KEEP A GURNEY PURCHASED NEEDS CUZ GRIZZ KNEES HURTIN RICANS TOURNEY VERSES none of them match for me ..... And the pun was a personal that needed a expo in the comments .... Bar7 ... Da fuck is LEAKING DRY FROM SIGS??? And starving for,pussies got to do with each other ???? And the last pun was weak fam ..... ...... YEAH KINDA HARSH BREAK DOWN BUT IMMA BE REAL WITH YOU PHE YOU GOT BETTER SHIT THAN THIS PERIOD .....
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