FVC Membership Contest Round 2 (Text)

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Thanks for the feedback @Teek!

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VOTED@ILLoKWENT™ vs @Skilligan™
Skilligan™ Voted: tkarn6420: 2 / -Z0NE-: 5
ILLoKWENT™ Voted: tkarn6420: 3 / -Z0NE-: 5
Both of your expos were on point. The main difference is ILLoKWENT went into a lot more detail which I felt might have been more helpful to the battlers, particularly what he said about the basics of 2 line construction to tkarn6420. Imo, Skilligan had the better rating though. I don't think tkarn6420's verse deserved a 3. You both did a good job, but for this voting match, I'll have to go with ILLoKWENT.

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@Erupt vs @Dave
Dave Voted: Oversoul: 1 / Olde Concepts: 5
Erupt Voted: Oversoul: 3 / Olde Concepts: 4
You both gave great advice to the battlers and gave them pertinent pointers. The main difference to me was in tone. I felt the way Dave approached it could be considered as hate (I'm not saying I think it is). Dave had some humour in there, and I liked that, but I can also see how the people might take offence to it and miss some of the other points. Erupt's expo was more tempered, and he touched on a lot of the same points as Dave, but I also felt the way he laid it across might have been more helpful to the battlers. I feel like when pointing to what's bad in someone's verse, its better to use their own lines as example to show why it was bad---but it also works the same way when you're trying to show someone how to improve...I liked that Erupt used Oversoul's own line about Watson/Sherlock to point him in the right direction. Vote: Erupt.

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@BP Pride vs @Student
BP Pride Voted: Blacc Mamba: 5 / 956-D-town chino: 3
Student Voted: Blacc Mamba: 5 / 956-D-town chino: 3
You both gave good expos, but I felt Student was a lot more thorough and direct. BP Pride, you referred to both battlers as "one" while you were giving them advice and pointers. It was hard to distinguish which one you were referring to at times. I preferred the way you voted in the first round with a section directed specifically at each battler because it makes your expo more impactful and understandable. Vote: Student.

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@Fiji Osa vs @Unyqe
Unyqe Voted: PRESSURE519: 2 / Xplissit: 5
Fiji Osa Voted: PRESSURE519: 3 / Xplissit: 6
Both gave nice expos and decent advice, but I felt Fiji Osa went into more detail in his. You both pointed out that PRESSURE should cap his rhymes, but Fiji gave more of a reasoning while Unyqe said "thats how we do it here man." You both pointed out things that were wrong with Xplissit's verse but I felt Fiji went a little further with his suggestions. Vote: Fiji Osa

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Thanks for the feedback @Teek!

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VOTED@ILLoKWENT™ vs @Skilligan™
Skilligan™ Voted: tkarn6420: 2 / -Z0NE-: 5
ILLoKWENT™ Voted: tkarn6420: 3 / -Z0NE-: 5
Both of your expos were on point. The main difference is ILLoKWENT went into a lot more detail which I felt might have been more helpful to the battlers, particularly what he said about the basics of 2 line construction to tkarn6420. Imo, Skilligan had the better rating though. I don't think tkarn6420's verse deserved a 3. You both did a good job, but for this voting match, I'll have to go with ILLoKWENT.

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@Erupt vs @Dave
Dave Voted: Oversoul: 1 / Olde Concepts: 5
Erupt Voted: Oversoul: 3 / Olde Concepts: 4
You both gave great advice to the battlers and gave them pertinent pointers. The main difference to me was in tone. I felt the way Dave approached it could be considered as hate (I'm not saying I think it is). Dave had some humour in there, and I liked that, but I can also see how the people might take offence to it and miss some of the other points. Erupt's expo was more tempered, and he touched on a lot of the same points as Dave, but I also felt the way he laid it across might have been more helpful to the battlers. I feel like when pointing to what's bad in someone's verse, its better to use their own lines as example to show why it was bad---but it also works the same way when you're trying to show someone how to improve...I liked that Erupt used Oversoul's own line about Watson/Sherlock to point him in the right direction. Vote: Erupt.

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@BP Pride vs @Student
BP Pride Voted: Blacc Mamba: 5 / 956-D-town chino: 3
Student Voted: Blacc Mamba: 5 / 956-D-town chino: 3
You both gave good expos, but I felt Student was a lot more thorough and direct. BP Pride, you referred to both battlers as "one" while you were giving them advice and pointers. It was hard to distinguish which one you were referring to at times. I preferred the way you voted in the first round with a section directed specifically at each battler because it makes your expo more impactful and understandable. Vote: Student.

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@Fiji Osa vs @Unyqe
Unyqe Voted: PRESSURE519: 2 / Xplissit: 5
Fiji Osa Voted: PRESSURE519: 3 / Xplissit: 6
Both gave nice expos and decent advice, but I felt Fiji Osa went into more detail in his. You both pointed out that PRESSURE should cap his rhymes, but Fiji gave more of a reasoning while Unyqe said "thats how we do it here man." You both pointed out things that were wrong with Xplissit's verse but I felt Fiji went a little further with his suggestions. Vote: Fiji Osa