People who rhyme the same word over and over

[Solomon Grundy]

Originally Posted by Unyqe

It Sounds like your making excuses for your bars before you even drop. Wait it sounds like that because you are. But your doing an 8 line battle, so to rhyme *Cat four times in a row for half your lines would be horrible.

It's ok man, other turnbulls are discussing this like grown up's. Feel free to join in at any point.

---------- Post added at 08:18 AM ---------- Previous post was at 08:16 AM ----------

Originally Posted by Dave

The actual concepts are based upon repititon, so it's not held as a weakness. If you're repeating words without it being punchline based, then yes, it is uncreative.

So in short, you agree with me.

[Solomon Grundy]

Originally Posted by Unyqe

It Sounds like your making excuses for your bars before you even drop. Wait it sounds like that because you are. But your doing an 8 line battle, so to rhyme *Cat four times in a row for half your lines would be horrible.

It's ok man, other turnbulls are discussing this like grown up's. Feel free to join in at any point.

---------- Post added at 08:18 AM ---------- Previous post was at 08:16 AM ----------

Originally Posted by Dave

The actual concepts are based upon repititon, so it's not held as a weakness. If you're repeating words without it being punchline based, then yes, it is uncreative.

So in short, you agree with me.

[Spooky Deep]

I don't care if a nigga says nigga repeatedly...that's how niggas talk when they get mad -- that shit is funny yo

[Spooky Deep]

I don't care if a nigga says nigga repeatedly...that's how niggas talk when they get mad -- that shit is funny yo

[D Will]

Originally Posted by SpookyDeep

I don't care if a nigga says nigga repeatedly...that's how niggas talk when they get mad -- that shit is funny yo

B.G.-This Nigga Die - YouTube

lool hell yea

[D Will]

Originally Posted by SpookyDeep

I don't care if a nigga says nigga repeatedly...that's how niggas talk when they get mad -- that shit is funny yo

B.G.-This Nigga Die - YouTube

lool hell yea

[Spooky Deep]

Originally Posted by Ghetto Poetry

lool hell yea

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m6ct_EOg-zI

That's that shit yo! I love that shit...Cube went off lol

[Spooky Deep]

Originally Posted by Ghetto Poetry

lool hell yea

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m6ct_EOg-zI

That's that shit yo! I love that shit...Cube went off lol

[D Will]

Originally Posted by SpookyDeep

That's that shit yo! I love that shit...Cube went off lol

bruh that's the #1 jam i play if ima ever fight , workout or whatever.. i remember when it was first released.. had it on repeat all day every fuckin day nigga lol.

[D Will]

Originally Posted by SpookyDeep

That's that shit yo! I love that shit...Cube went off lol

bruh that's the #1 jam i play if ima ever fight , workout or whatever.. i remember when it was first released.. had it on repeat all day every fuckin day nigga lol.

[Revan]

My bars are like a bullet, blow your head right off
Hate on the trigger, pull it, give your mouth a night off
Give your sound man a c-note to cut your mic off
The promoters need me, nigga, you just a write-off
After that, hit the dress room, turn the lights off
Score on the fourth broad, let her break my pipe off
I used the word 'off' seven times in a rhyme
You dumb enough to think I got a limited mind
But before you start tweaking, critiquing, pressing rewind
Einstein understand, that your third eye's blind

- LL Cool J

[Revan]

My bars are like a bullet, blow your head right off
Hate on the trigger, pull it, give your mouth a night off
Give your sound man a c-note to cut your mic off
The promoters need me, nigga, you just a write-off
After that, hit the dress room, turn the lights off
Score on the fourth broad, let her break my pipe off
I used the word 'off' seven times in a rhyme
You dumb enough to think I got a limited mind
But before you start tweaking, critiquing, pressing rewind
Einstein understand, that your third eye's blind

- LL Cool J

[Solomon Grundy]

Originally Posted by RULE

My bars are like a bullet, blow your head right off
Hate on the trigger, pull it, give your mouth a night off
Give your sound man a c-note to cut your mic off
The promoters need me, nigga, you just a write-off
After that, hit the dress room, turn the lights off
Score on the fourth broad, let her break my pipe off
I used the word 'off' seven times in a rhyme
You dumb enough to think I got a limited mind
But before you start tweaking, critiquing, pressing rewind
Einstein understand, that your third eye's blind

- LL Cool J

[Solomon Grundy]

Originally Posted by RULE

My bars are like a bullet, blow your head right off
Hate on the trigger, pull it, give your mouth a night off
Give your sound man a c-note to cut your mic off
The promoters need me, nigga, you just a write-off
After that, hit the dress room, turn the lights off
Score on the fourth broad, let her break my pipe off
I used the word 'off' seven times in a rhyme
You dumb enough to think I got a limited mind
But before you start tweaking, critiquing, pressing rewind
Einstein understand, that your third eye's blind

- LL Cool J

[Revan]

Originally Posted by Solomon Grundy

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iwzdY6uvUw0%26sns=em

Buddens killed it.

[Revan]

Originally Posted by Solomon Grundy

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iwzdY6uvUw0%26sns=em

Buddens killed it.

[Blue Hulk]

Cassidy be doing that shit all the time but those are still audio tracks, not text. And I get where he's coming from when he says you should write the way you plan to rap it but I just feel like people look for, I guess, stronger words?

[Blue Hulk]

Cassidy be doing that shit all the time but those are still audio tracks, not text. And I get where he's coming from when he says you should write the way you plan to rap it but I just feel like people look for, I guess, stronger words?

[FreezyCT]

dead @ you rhyming CAT 4 times

[FreezyCT]

dead @ you rhyming CAT 4 times