The 500-syllable multi.

[Phroxen]

Originally Posted by DEADICATION

Smfh @Phroxen ... Do u know what slant rhyming is? EVERY FUCKING RAPPER DOES THAT name at least ONE rapper that doesn't do slant rhyming

Assuming you were defending Pronto_Banks, you're a moron. I don't care if he used slant rhyme or not.. I'm talking about the fucking syllables not matching. So either you're saying they match and you're a moron, or you're saying they don't match and you're proving my point.

And my vote?

You mean this one where I voted for you?

Originally Posted by Phroxen

Deadication: Nice multies through the whole verse.. the estrogen punch was the hardest in your verse, and the setup was solid too. The last bar seemed a little forced with the rhyme scheme, but the punch did connect in the end. Decent drop.

Or this one where I voted against you?

Originally Posted by Phroxen

The other verse had tons of mismatched multies.. and if they matched, they were forced as hell. When they're being forced that badly, you may as well not even use them.. it just fucks up the entire bar. This verse also had several disappointing punches. So, since the punches in both verses were either played, forced, or took way too long to deliver, I'll call them a tie. The winner gets this with a more fluid read (you can call it flow if you want), clearer setups and more relevant and up to date material.

Because one of those verses sucked. So, I'm cocky because I found flaws in your verse? You're not perfect, kid. You fuck outta here.

[Phroxen]

Originally Posted by DEADICATION

Smfh @Phroxen ... Do u know what slant rhyming is? EVERY FUCKING RAPPER DOES THAT name at least ONE rapper that doesn't do slant rhyming

Assuming you were defending Pronto_Banks, you're a moron. I don't care if he used slant rhyme or not.. I'm talking about the fucking syllables not matching. So either you're saying they match and you're a moron, or you're saying they don't match and you're proving my point.

And my vote?

You mean this one where I voted for you?

Originally Posted by Phroxen

Deadication: Nice multies through the whole verse.. the estrogen punch was the hardest in your verse, and the setup was solid too. The last bar seemed a little forced with the rhyme scheme, but the punch did connect in the end. Decent drop.

Or this one where I voted against you?

Originally Posted by Phroxen

The other verse had tons of mismatched multies.. and if they matched, they were forced as hell. When they're being forced that badly, you may as well not even use them.. it just fucks up the entire bar. This verse also had several disappointing punches. So, since the punches in both verses were either played, forced, or took way too long to deliver, I'll call them a tie. The winner gets this with a more fluid read (you can call it flow if you want), clearer setups and more relevant and up to date material.

Because one of those verses sucked. So, I'm cocky because I found flaws in your verse? You're not perfect, kid. You fuck outta here.

[-Dimez-]

Originally Posted by Phroxen

Assuming you were defending Pronto_Banks, you're a moron. I don't care if he used slant rhyme or not.. I'm talking about the fucking syllables not matching. So either you're saying they match and you're a moron, or you're saying they don't match and you're proving my point.

And my vote?

You mean this one where I voted for you?


Or this one where I voted against yoGu?


Because one of those verses sucked. So, I'm cocky because I found flaws in your verse? You're not perfect, kid. You fuck outta here.

Lmfao @ this kid basing his verses off of syllables...

[-Dimez-]

Originally Posted by Phroxen

Assuming you were defending Pronto_Banks, you're a moron. I don't care if he used slant rhyme or not.. I'm talking about the fucking syllables not matching. So either you're saying they match and you're a moron, or you're saying they don't match and you're proving my point.

And my vote?

You mean this one where I voted for you?


Or this one where I voted against yoGu?


Because one of those verses sucked. So, I'm cocky because I found flaws in your verse? You're not perfect, kid. You fuck outta here.

Lmfao @ this kid basing his verses off of syllables...

i always pitch this idea and everyone says "yea yea yea" but no one ever does it.


Stop trying to impress people with your lyrics and start trying to entertain them. imma tell you right now, reading your battles is fucking BORING. each and everyone one of you. you. you you. YES, YOU. check your verse for fluidity, narrative presence, original rhyme patters, punchlines, humor, effectiveness, then finally very last of all if at all syllable structure

try that out

i always pitch this idea and everyone says "yea yea yea" but no one ever does it.


Stop trying to impress people with your lyrics and start trying to entertain them. imma tell you right now, reading your battles is fucking BORING. each and everyone one of you. you. you you. YES, YOU. check your verse for fluidity, narrative presence, original rhyme patters, punchlines, humor, effectiveness, then finally very last of all if at all syllable structure

try that out

[Askari]

Originally Posted by Gurp Da God

i always pitch this idea and everyone says "yea yea yea" but no one ever does it.


Stop trying to impress people with your lyrics and start trying to entertain them. imma tell you right now, reading your battles is fucking BORING. each and everyone one of you. you. you you. YES, YOU. check your verse for fluidity, narrative presence, original rhyme patters, punchlines, humor, effectiveness, then finally very last of all if at all syllable structure

try that out

This. Make every word relevant to a scheme or punchline, rather than filling gaps with the most random shit, and mess around with the wording for optimum impact and fluidity. No point in having a 32 line battle where 24 lines of it is bullshit filler.

[Askari]

Originally Posted by Gurp Da God

i always pitch this idea and everyone says "yea yea yea" but no one ever does it.


Stop trying to impress people with your lyrics and start trying to entertain them. imma tell you right now, reading your battles is fucking BORING. each and everyone one of you. you. you you. YES, YOU. check your verse for fluidity, narrative presence, original rhyme patters, punchlines, humor, effectiveness, then finally very last of all if at all syllable structure

try that out

This. Make every word relevant to a scheme or punchline, rather than filling gaps with the most random shit, and mess around with the wording for optimum impact and fluidity. No point in having a 32 line battle where 24 lines of it is bullshit filler.

[KingBankstou]

it would have been doper if you could have kept one of those schemes going

this is really retarded. i aint hatin , i know this is stupid as fuck tho, it really dont take talent it just takes alotta time , i bet alotta ppl on lb could do that exact same thing if they had as much free-time as dude

[KingBankstou]

it would have been doper if you could have kept one of those schemes going

this is really retarded. i aint hatin , i know this is stupid as fuck tho, it really dont take talent it just takes alotta time , i bet alotta ppl on lb could do that exact same thing if they had as much free-time as dude

[Phroxen]

Two people have mentioned free time. Umm.. I wrote this in the normal time it takes me to write two verses. I didn't schedule fucking vacation time to write this or something. Those same two people said something about it being so simple. Well, until you've done it.. you're just talking out of your ass, really.

And you know what? I could be out of my mind and this could be a really crappy version of executing an entertaining 500-syllable multi.. but I don't see anyone else attempting it. And half the people hating on it can't match their syllables in the first place. So, yeah.. talking out of your ass.

[Phroxen]

Two people have mentioned free time. Umm.. I wrote this in the normal time it takes me to write two verses. I didn't schedule fucking vacation time to write this or something. Those same two people said something about it being so simple. Well, until you've done it.. you're just talking out of your ass, really.

And you know what? I could be out of my mind and this could be a really crappy version of executing an entertaining 500-syllable multi.. but I don't see anyone else attempting it. And half the people hating on it can't match their syllables in the first place. So, yeah.. talking out of your ass.

[KingBankstou]

Originally Posted by Phroxen

Two people have mentioned free time. Umm.. I wrote this in the normal time it takes me to write two verses. I didn't schedule fucking vacation time to write this or something. Those same two people said something about it being so simple. Well, until you've done it.. you're just talking out of your ass, really.

And you know what? I could be out of my mind and this could be a really crappy version of executing an entertaining 500-syllable multi.. but I don't see anyone else attempting it. And half the people hating on it can't match their syllables in the first place. So, yeah.. talking out of your ass.

nobody else attempts it because its a worthless peice'a shit

what the fuck do them lyrics repersent, not shit,

YOU GETS NO PROPS

[KingBankstou]

Originally Posted by Phroxen

Two people have mentioned free time. Umm.. I wrote this in the normal time it takes me to write two verses. I didn't schedule fucking vacation time to write this or something. Those same two people said something about it being so simple. Well, until you've done it.. you're just talking out of your ass, really.

And you know what? I could be out of my mind and this could be a really crappy version of executing an entertaining 500-syllable multi.. but I don't see anyone else attempting it. And half the people hating on it can't match their syllables in the first place. So, yeah.. talking out of your ass.

nobody else attempts it because its a worthless peice'a shit

what the fuck do them lyrics repersent, not shit,

YOU GETS NO PROPS

[-Dimez-]

Originally Posted by Phroxen

Two people have mentioned free time. Umm.. I wrote this in the normal time it takes me to write two verses. I didn't schedule fucking vacation time to write this or something. Those same two people said something about it being so simple. Well, until you've done it.. you're just talking out of your ass, really.

And you know what? I could be out of my mind and this could be a really crappy version of executing an entertaining 500-syllable multi.. but I don't see anyone else attempting it. And half the people hating on it can't match their syllables in the first place. So, yeah.. talking out of your ass.

Shut your fucking mouth up and take a look at DaDDiO's "Rumble In The Jungle" <===that's how u rhyme more than 8 fucking syllables at once. Till then I ain't impressed kid... I've seen 16's that are way better than that garbage you call "rap". Lol typical idiot "I can write a 32 liner in under 20 minutes so therefore I am a vet" shakes my DAMN head

[-Dimez-]

Originally Posted by Phroxen

Two people have mentioned free time. Umm.. I wrote this in the normal time it takes me to write two verses. I didn't schedule fucking vacation time to write this or something. Those same two people said something about it being so simple. Well, until you've done it.. you're just talking out of your ass, really.

And you know what? I could be out of my mind and this could be a really crappy version of executing an entertaining 500-syllable multi.. but I don't see anyone else attempting it. And half the people hating on it can't match their syllables in the first place. So, yeah.. talking out of your ass.

Shut your fucking mouth up and take a look at DaDDiO's "Rumble In The Jungle" <===that's how u rhyme more than 8 fucking syllables at once. Till then I ain't impressed kid... I've seen 16's that are way better than that garbage you call "rap". Lol typical idiot "I can write a 32 liner in under 20 minutes so therefore I am a vet" shakes my DAMN head

[FiNAL WoRD]

no there all right, that was fucking pitiful asshole
Now shut your cunt mouth and let people who are better then you tell you how it is

[FiNAL WoRD]

no there all right, that was fucking pitiful asshole
Now shut your cunt mouth and let people who are better then you tell you how it is

[KingBankstou]

i can multi better then you.

[KingBankstou]

i can multi better then you.