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I'll critique your music.
Yeah drop links to music. I'm not going to vote on battles but I will check out some songs and give a slightly harsh critiques of em.
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I'll critique your music.
Yeah drop links to music. I'm not going to vote on battles but I will check out some songs and give a slightly harsh critiques of em.
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Beat i cooked up a while ago. The harsher the better lol
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Beat i cooked up a while ago. The harsher the better lol
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02-14-2020, 12:18 PM
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I don't like the sounds you are using in general they have a real midi feel like that snare sounds weird and so does the organ/piano
At 1:20 day turns to night an this shit actually becomes fire. I really do dig the rest of the beat and I wasn't expecting that at all from the start.
You can make dope beats. I don't like the kits and instruments you are using much. I skimmed through your other beats and that was generally what I felt on all of them. Dope beats maybe it's because you are using more piano's and organs and I like horns and woods more. The organ sounds inorganic and it's the same in the Enough for Me song which was also really dope but had a specific instrument I didn't like. Same with Sister tbh lmao wtf are those organs made from? Sounds like terminator babies crying or something.
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I don't like the sounds you are using in general they have a real midi feel like that snare sounds weird and so does the organ/piano
At 1:20 day turns to night an this shit actually becomes fire. I really do dig the rest of the beat and I wasn't expecting that at all from the start.
You can make dope beats. I don't like the kits and instruments you are using much. I skimmed through your other beats and that was generally what I felt on all of them. Dope beats maybe it's because you are using more piano's and organs and I like horns and woods more. The organ sounds inorganic and it's the same in the Enough for Me song which was also really dope but had a specific instrument I didn't like. Same with Sister tbh lmao wtf are those organs made from? Sounds like terminator babies crying or something.
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02-14-2020, 12:25 PM
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I don't like the sounds you are using in general they have a real midi feel like that snare sounds weird and so does the organ/piano
At 1:20 day turns to night an this shit actually becomes fire. I really do dig the rest of the beat and I wasn't expecting that at all from the start.
You can make dope beats. I don't like the kits and instruments you are using much. I skimmed through your other beats and that was generally what I felt on all of them. Dope beats maybe it's because you are using more piano's and organs and I like horns and woods more. The organ sounds inorganic and it's the same in the Enough for Me song which was also really dope but had a specific instrument I didn't like. Same with Sister tbh lmao wtf are those organs made from? Sounds like terminator babies crying or something.
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Appreciate it bro! Lmao at the organs etc.. they're some violins that come with Fl studio
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I don't like the sounds you are using in general they have a real midi feel like that snare sounds weird and so does the organ/piano
At 1:20 day turns to night an this shit actually becomes fire. I really do dig the rest of the beat and I wasn't expecting that at all from the start.
You can make dope beats. I don't like the kits and instruments you are using much. I skimmed through your other beats and that was generally what I felt on all of them. Dope beats maybe it's because you are using more piano's and organs and I like horns and woods more. The organ sounds inorganic and it's the same in the Enough for Me song which was also really dope but had a specific instrument I didn't like. Same with Sister tbh lmao wtf are those organs made from? Sounds like terminator babies crying or something.
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Appreciate it bro! Lmao at the organs etc.. they're some violins that come with Fl studio
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02-14-2020, 12:16 PM
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Last song i made, 8 years ago now (jesus).
Holla!
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Last song i made, 8 years ago now (jesus).
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Ok from the start I don't like this beat anymore. Pianos all over. You know you got bars . It holds up as far as the song, but i'd like to hear you on something that isn't so up tempo. Those bars with inner rhymes are my favorites and those just sound better on a slower joint. You switched schemes quite a few times my favorite was the very last part of you verse. You need to record more stuff its a shame this all u got out
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Ok from the start I don't like this beat anymore. Pianos all over. You know you got bars . It holds up as far as the song, but i'd like to hear you on something that isn't so up tempo. Those bars with inner rhymes are my favorites and those just sound better on a slower joint. You switched schemes quite a few times my favorite was the very last part of you verse. You need to record more stuff its a shame this all u got out
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Ok from the start I don't like this beat anymore. Pianos all over. You know you got bars . It holds up as far as the song, but i'd like to hear you on something that isn't so up tempo. Those bars with inner rhymes are my favorites and those just sound better on a slower joint. You switched schemes quite a few times my favorite was the very last part of you verse. You need to record more stuff its a shame this all u got out
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Appreciate this Phil. Was never a fan of song making tbh but got the itch to put something together to have to look back on one day.
Thanks.
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Ok from the start I don't like this beat anymore. Pianos all over. You know you got bars . It holds up as far as the song, but i'd like to hear you on something that isn't so up tempo. Those bars with inner rhymes are my favorites and those just sound better on a slower joint. You switched schemes quite a few times my favorite was the very last part of you verse. You need to record more stuff its a shame this all u got out
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Appreciate this Phil. Was never a fan of song making tbh but got the itch to put something together to have to look back on one day.
Thanks.
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I like this. This guy could probably give me tips on mixing and shit this sounds clean as fuck. Feel like I already commented on this somewhere though.
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lmao i'm literally the only comment on that song i'll give it another listen see how I feel 8 years later.
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I like this. This guy could probably give me tips on mixing and shit this sounds clean as fuck. Feel like I already commented on this somewhere though.
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lmao i'm literally the only comment on that song i'll give it another listen see how I feel 8 years later.
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I like this. This guy could probably give me tips on mixing and shit this sounds clean as fuck. Feel like I already commented on this somewhere though.
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lmao i'm literally the only comment on that song i'll give it another listen see how I feel 8 years later.
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yeah i re-uploaded lol
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I like this. This guy could probably give me tips on mixing and shit this sounds clean as fuck. Feel like I already commented on this somewhere though.
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lmao i'm literally the only comment on that song i'll give it another listen see how I feel 8 years later.
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yeah i re-uploaded lol
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