ILLoKWENT's best bars.

Originally Posted by Esso

so SINCE THIS CAT'S CLOSE to getTIN HIS ASS SMOKED,my rap prose 'has ALL team meet in a bag',no SLIM JIM PACKS SHOWN!(salty meat in a bag)

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Originally Posted by Xwizit

Damn yall bagging on the homie but he has had some dope punches. True, the wordplays be a lil iffy but dude is one of the best creatively. It's crazy how people focus so much on the negative aspects of someone rather than the positive.

/shrug

What good is creativity if you can't execute it in a comprehensible way?

Originally Posted by Esso

so SINCE THIS CAT'S CLOSE to getTIN HIS ASS SMOKED,my rap prose 'has ALL team meet in a bag',no SLIM JIM PACKS SHOWN!(salty meat in a bag)

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Originally Posted by Xwizit

Damn yall bagging on the homie but he has had some dope punches. True, the wordplays be a lil iffy but dude is one of the best creatively. It's crazy how people focus so much on the negative aspects of someone rather than the positive.

/shrug

What good is creativity if you can't execute it in a comprehensible way?

[exwhyzee]

Good point. All I'm saying is to give respect where it's due. He just may have been battling longer than a lot of those in this thread, I definitely agree he's hit his peak, but don't discredit what he's done so far.

[exwhyzee]

Good point. All I'm saying is to give respect where it's due. He just may have been battling longer than a lot of those in this thread, I definitely agree he's hit his peak, but don't discredit what he's done so far.

Originally Posted by Xwizit

Good point. All I'm saying is to give respect where it's due. He just may have been battling longer than a lot of those in this thread, I definitely agree he's hit his peak, but don't discredit what he's done so far.

I respect that you can defend this material with a straight face.

Originally Posted by Xwizit

Good point. All I'm saying is to give respect where it's due. He just may have been battling longer than a lot of those in this thread, I definitely agree he's hit his peak, but don't discredit what he's done so far.

I respect that you can defend this material with a straight face.

[exwhyzee]

Opinions differ. Not trying to defend or argue, just came to state a personal point.

[exwhyzee]

Opinions differ. Not trying to defend or argue, just came to state a personal point.

Originally Posted by Xwizit

Opinions differ. Not trying to defend or argue, just came to state a personal point.

That Illokwent already peaked? I agree.

Originally Posted by Xwizit

Opinions differ. Not trying to defend or argue, just came to state a personal point.

That Illokwent already peaked? I agree.

Even though it's unrelated, I wanna point something out:-

does 'hanna ring any bells'?i bet you OUTTA KNOW YA EX'S,plus i have a 'hunch, back in the day',she 'bumped ugly'wit ALL OF THOSE U FRIENDED,wit no AUDIO PRESENTED,ever since then you been LOST IN FULL DEPRESSION,and 'tryin to get over this hump',same way QUASIMODO DRESSES!/

I've always talked about my hatred for the reference style, but this is a perfect example of why it sucks. So the concept behind the reference style is to add in more references to the punchline. So in this situation, ILLo has added "hunch back, bumped ugly and trying to get over this hump". The problem however, is that you know the ending of the punch as soon as you get to hunch back.

Part of writing a bars is that you're supposed to have a sort of comedic delivery. The punchline to the joke is supposed to come out and as it does, you're supposed to have an element of surprise to it. But in this case, since we know the ending 2 lines before, you're basically just layering on shit to the top of it which makes us wait forever for it.

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Also Subreal is right on that wordplay Rant. Nothing to do with punctuation. They just don't work both ways.

Even though it's unrelated, I wanna point something out:-

does 'hanna ring any bells'?i bet you OUTTA KNOW YA EX'S,plus i have a 'hunch, back in the day',she 'bumped ugly'wit ALL OF THOSE U FRIENDED,wit no AUDIO PRESENTED,ever since then you been LOST IN FULL DEPRESSION,and 'tryin to get over this hump',same way QUASIMODO DRESSES!/

I've always talked about my hatred for the reference style, but this is a perfect example of why it sucks. So the concept behind the reference style is to add in more references to the punchline. So in this situation, ILLo has added "hunch back, bumped ugly and trying to get over this hump". The problem however, is that you know the ending of the punch as soon as you get to hunch back.

Part of writing a bars is that you're supposed to have a sort of comedic delivery. The punchline to the joke is supposed to come out and as it does, you're supposed to have an element of surprise to it. But in this case, since we know the ending 2 lines before, you're basically just layering on shit to the top of it which makes us wait forever for it.

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Also Subreal is right on that wordplay Rant. Nothing to do with punctuation. They just don't work both ways.

[Shodan]

Originally Posted by EtHnic Cleansing

Part of writing a bars is that you're supposed to have a sort of comedic delivery.

This is not necessarily true.

[Shodan]

Originally Posted by EtHnic Cleansing

Part of writing a bars is that you're supposed to have a sort of comedic delivery.

This is not necessarily true.

[ILLoKWENT]

Originally Posted by EtHnic Cleansing

Even though it's unrelated, I wanna point something out:-

does 'hanna ring any bells'?i bet you OUTTA KNOW YA EX'S,plus i have a 'hunch, back in the day',she 'bumped ugly'wit ALL OF THOSE U FRIENDED,wit no AUDIO PRESENTED,ever since then you been LOST IN FULL DEPRESSION,and 'tryin to get over this hump',same way QUASIMODO DRESSES!/

I've always talked about my hatred for the reference style, but this is a perfect example of why it sucks. So the concept behind the reference style is to add in more references to the punchline. So in this situation, ILLo has added "hunch back, bumped ugly and trying to get over this hump". The problem however, is that you know the ending of the punch as soon as you get to hunch back.

Part of writing a bars is that you're supposed to have a sort of comedic delivery. The punchline to the joke is supposed to come out and as it does, you're supposed to have an element of surprise to it. But in this case, since we know the ending 2 lines before, you're basically just layering on shit to the top of it which makes us wait forever for it.

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Also Subreal is right on that wordplay Rant. Nothing to do with punctuation. They just don't work both ways.

@Rant.. even Dave can figure out what I was doing.. you really need to get off my dick faggit, and get an actual life outside LB instead of glorifying me with all of your moronic posts.

[ILLoKWENT]

Originally Posted by EtHnic Cleansing

Even though it's unrelated, I wanna point something out:-

does 'hanna ring any bells'?i bet you OUTTA KNOW YA EX'S,plus i have a 'hunch, back in the day',she 'bumped ugly'wit ALL OF THOSE U FRIENDED,wit no AUDIO PRESENTED,ever since then you been LOST IN FULL DEPRESSION,and 'tryin to get over this hump',same way QUASIMODO DRESSES!/

I've always talked about my hatred for the reference style, but this is a perfect example of why it sucks. So the concept behind the reference style is to add in more references to the punchline. So in this situation, ILLo has added "hunch back, bumped ugly and trying to get over this hump". The problem however, is that you know the ending of the punch as soon as you get to hunch back.

Part of writing a bars is that you're supposed to have a sort of comedic delivery. The punchline to the joke is supposed to come out and as it does, you're supposed to have an element of surprise to it. But in this case, since we know the ending 2 lines before, you're basically just layering on shit to the top of it which makes us wait forever for it.

---------- Post added at 03:34 AM ---------- Previous post was at 03:26 AM ----------

Also Subreal is right on that wordplay Rant. Nothing to do with punctuation. They just don't work both ways.

@Rant.. even Dave can figure out what I was doing.. you really need to get off my dick faggit, and get an actual life outside LB instead of glorifying me with all of your moronic posts.

Originally Posted by Shodan

This is not necessarily true.

Comedic, impactful, whatever word you want to use. The shock, impact or comedy is supposed to be delivered with the conclusion of the punch. If people know that conclusion, yet you still ramble on for 2 more lines, it's not going to have a fraction of the impact.

Originally Posted by Shodan

This is not necessarily true.

Comedic, impactful, whatever word you want to use. The shock, impact or comedy is supposed to be delivered with the conclusion of the punch. If people know that conclusion, yet you still ramble on for 2 more lines, it's not going to have a fraction of the impact.

Originally Posted by ILLoKWENT

@Rant.. even Dave can figure out what I was doing.. you really need to get off my dick faggit, and get an actual life outside LB instead of glorifying me with all of your moronic posts.

Eth described how your bar was wack to him.

So, he figured out that you were being wack?

Originally Posted by ILLoKWENT

@Rant.. even Dave can figure out what I was doing.. you really need to get off my dick faggit, and get an actual life outside LB instead of glorifying me with all of your moronic posts.

Eth described how your bar was wack to him.

So, he figured out that you were being wack?