Fame - Those Eyes Feat. Dono & Muggz

[Saxx]

Right im a big fan of this track and i wanna see more collabs with UK/US guys on here!

Anyway let's get it to it. Bad points first.

Dono: Like Crysis said the fast bits were very hard to hear/understand and i expected a bit more to be honest after seeing your videos etc. Also considering how good the clarity of the beat and backing vocals were, when you jumped in the lack of audio quality was very obvious.

Fame: In my opinion the best out of the three especially vocally. Could use a bit of fine tuning but was great, the audio clarity was also there too.

Muggz: Again few little adjustments and you are all good. I think you were definately held back by the shortness of your verse as i felt it fell off towards the end.

The track: The rapping parts were just too short or maybe you guys need to rap a lot faster. Im no master rapper but if i was on this i would have been practicing and practicing at making this as fast and intelligible as i could possibly make it.

Overall i think you guys just need to fine tune a few things taking on board the comments people have made. I hate criticism but these few points were probably not even picked up by yourselves and as long as the criticism isn't changing you artisticly then its not a problem.

I wanted to rate it a 10 but somehow its came out as zero. Provided the few things that need changing are changed i would be happily give a full 10 on the next version.

I also think this could be a top 10 track on LB all time.

[Saxx]

Right im a big fan of this track and i wanna see more collabs with UK/US guys on here!

Anyway let's get it to it. Bad points first.

Dono: Like Crysis said the fast bits were very hard to hear/understand and i expected a bit more to be honest after seeing your videos etc. Also considering how good the clarity of the beat and backing vocals were, when you jumped in the lack of audio quality was very obvious.

Fame: In my opinion the best out of the three especially vocally. Could use a bit of fine tuning but was great, the audio clarity was also there too.

Muggz: Again few little adjustments and you are all good. I think you were definately held back by the shortness of your verse as i felt it fell off towards the end.

The track: The rapping parts were just too short or maybe you guys need to rap a lot faster. Im no master rapper but if i was on this i would have been practicing and practicing at making this as fast and intelligible as i could possibly make it.

Overall i think you guys just need to fine tune a few things taking on board the comments people have made. I hate criticism but these few points were probably not even picked up by yourselves and as long as the criticism isn't changing you artisticly then its not a problem.

I wanted to rate it a 10 but somehow its came out as zero. Provided the few things that need changing are changed i would be happily give a full 10 on the next version.

I also think this could be a top 10 track on LB all time.