The Minefield of Wordplay

Well since I've returned I've noticed wordplay is very popular and therefore I've had to employ it more in order to cater for voters. However I can write wordplay that I could literally say aloud and it would be perfect and yet some people will still tell me it's forced, I put this down to differences in accents and pronunciation. I can have one person tell me the wordplay I used was amazing and another tell me it's awful on the exact same verse.

Is anyone else having this issue?

Well since I've returned I've noticed wordplay is very popular and therefore I've had to employ it more in order to cater for voters. However I can write wordplay that I could literally say aloud and it would be perfect and yet some people will still tell me it's forced, I put this down to differences in accents and pronunciation. I can have one person tell me the wordplay I used was amazing and another tell me it's awful on the exact same verse.

Is anyone else having this issue?