Hakuna thinks he's good? Lets see

[Coldstorms Dad]

These are some of his bars from his battle vs me

The tech's pow, leave part of ya textiles in tuscan/
Ur an x-file, reptile with erectile dysfunction/

^^ Wait what? My textiles? Does that even make sense to you? Im an X-file? The TV series? Are you even making sense here? Calling me a reptile with erectile dysfunction was your punchline...didnt make any sense. How is that even an insult, calling me a reptile and shit lol. No creativity and just rhyming without making any sense.

I see u munchkin, u tryna westnile the punchin/
Beatchu like a stepchild, exile ya junction/

^^ WHAT THE FUCK does WESTNILE THE PUNCHIN even mean? Doesnt make any sense grammatically. So you are beating me like a stepchild to "Exile my junction" <---read that slowly and tell me if it makes any sense..how can a junction be exiled? lol

Letcha dogs talk, its bark bark then spark spark/
Getta chard heart with this long nose like an aardvark/
Soon as ya car start, im ina carhartt/
With the ratchet like im tryna fix up a car part/

^^ Lol @ spark spark. Trash! Long nose/aardvark was ok but a basic simile. So as my car starts you in a "carhartt"? CARHARTT is a clothing company and has nothing to do with me being in a car. So your punchline was you using the ratchet to fix my car part? How is that an insult? More like a compliment bar/flex line.

Ur an idiot see ur idioms are alright/
Butchu not setting the course is the cause of more strife/
The Duece a hitcha 3rd eye thats forsight/
The fifth a hitchu with sixgod then its praying hands for more life/

^^ Ok the first line didnt even insult me but saying my idioms are alright is a compliment. The second line was very bland and not at all creative. Just a statement. Third line was creative but executed poorly... so you're hitting my 3 eye and thats "four"sight? Doesnt make any sense grammatically with the way you put it. The punchline was just a statement and lacked any real creativity, bland and boring.

Im bout to hitchu with some transit bars no need to play/
Then ya lemons gonna get 30 rocked thats tina fey/
Get (rocked away) or the (eighth), and i aint talking new york trains/
Butchu got an L coming either way/

^^ First line was delivered ok, but still basic. My "lemons gonna get 30 rocked" makes no sense and has no double meaning/entendre. Just a simple comparison without any double meaning. Your punchline was you telling me I got an L coming...how is that an insult? Bland and basic, not at all creative.

Lmfao is this what im supposed to be scared of? Boy is trash. Id give that verse a low 3/10, maybe 4 if im generous. But that shit is HOT TRASH lol, no real punchlines or metaphors, bland and basic bars with no real creativity either. Son was talking mad shit about how he is better than me but then comes up with trash like this.

I just broke down his bars, yall can read and judge for yourselves but son is trash.

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[Coldstorms Dad]

These are some of his bars from his battle vs me

The tech's pow, leave part of ya textiles in tuscan/
Ur an x-file, reptile with erectile dysfunction/

^^ Wait what? My textiles? Does that even make sense to you? Im an X-file? The TV series? Are you even making sense here? Calling me a reptile with erectile dysfunction was your punchline...didnt make any sense. How is that even an insult, calling me a reptile and shit lol. No creativity and just rhyming without making any sense.

I see u munchkin, u tryna westnile the punchin/
Beatchu like a stepchild, exile ya junction/

^^ WHAT THE FUCK does WESTNILE THE PUNCHIN even mean? Doesnt make any sense grammatically. So you are beating me like a stepchild to "Exile my junction" <---read that slowly and tell me if it makes any sense..how can a junction be exiled? lol

Letcha dogs talk, its bark bark then spark spark/
Getta chard heart with this long nose like an aardvark/
Soon as ya car start, im ina carhartt/
With the ratchet like im tryna fix up a car part/

^^ Lol @ spark spark. Trash! Long nose/aardvark was ok but a basic simile. So as my car starts you in a "carhartt"? CARHARTT is a clothing company and has nothing to do with me being in a car. So your punchline was you using the ratchet to fix my car part? How is that an insult? More like a compliment bar/flex line.

Ur an idiot see ur idioms are alright/
Butchu not setting the course is the cause of more strife/
The Duece a hitcha 3rd eye thats forsight/
The fifth a hitchu with sixgod then its praying hands for more life/

^^ Ok the first line didnt even insult me but saying my idioms are alright is a compliment. The second line was very bland and not at all creative. Just a statement. Third line was creative but executed poorly... so you're hitting my 3 eye and thats "four"sight? Doesnt make any sense grammatically with the way you put it. The punchline was just a statement and lacked any real creativity, bland and boring.

Im bout to hitchu with some transit bars no need to play/
Then ya lemons gonna get 30 rocked thats tina fey/
Get (rocked away) or the (eighth), and i aint talking new york trains/
Butchu got an L coming either way/

^^ First line was delivered ok, but still basic. My "lemons gonna get 30 rocked" makes no sense and has no double meaning/entendre. Just a simple comparison without any double meaning. Your punchline was you telling me I got an L coming...how is that an insult? Bland and basic, not at all creative.

Lmfao is this what im supposed to be scared of? Boy is trash. Id give that verse a low 3/10, maybe 4 if im generous. But that shit is HOT TRASH lol, no real punchlines or metaphors, bland and basic bars with no real creativity either. Son was talking mad shit about how he is better than me but then comes up with trash like this.

I just broke down his bars, yall can read and judge for yourselves but son is trash.

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