In Depth Verse Breakdown

[EtH]

Originally Posted by Rieper

I did it to really irritate you in our battle. Did it work?

Honestly the fact you did something so different from the norm is what people liked most about it. I can see why folks voted for it.

I think it's really cool people got what I was doing. I LOVED feedback on that, but objectively as a verse it wasn't as hard hitting so I really couldn't win. It was really hard to write a fresh 16 since I put loads into the previous so I wanted to be a bit off the wall with it.

It worked, fuck the reference style! Nah I liked the verse even if i didn't remember it haha. It's good to see fresh shit being pulled out. The UA and RULE angles were new concepts on me and a good example of how to bring personals out of things people usually don't give credit to.

[EtH]

Originally Posted by Rieper

I did it to really irritate you in our battle. Did it work?

Honestly the fact you did something so different from the norm is what people liked most about it. I can see why folks voted for it.

I think it's really cool people got what I was doing. I LOVED feedback on that, but objectively as a verse it wasn't as hard hitting so I really couldn't win. It was really hard to write a fresh 16 since I put loads into the previous so I wanted to be a bit off the wall with it.

It worked, fuck the reference style! Nah I liked the verse even if i didn't remember it haha. It's good to see fresh shit being pulled out. The UA and RULE angles were new concepts on me and a good example of how to bring personals out of things people usually don't give credit to.