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Unread 07-20-2014, 08:03 AM
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Writer 3: I really liked your story I wasn't expecting the end and it wrapped it up really nicely. I also thought it represented the image best to me.

Writer 1: I thought your story was a bit basic and didn't really have any plot twists. The way the dictator was so gracious in being murdered just seemed very unrealistic too.

Writer 5: Your story reminded me a bit of Royce Da 5'9's Part of Me. I thought some of the dialogue seemed unnatural "Aim to Thwart it" no one would really say that in real life. I thought your story was a bit simple though and wasn't particularly striking or creative.

My vote goes to: Writer 3
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Writer 3: I really liked your story I wasn't expecting the end and it wrapped it up really nicely. I also thought it represented the image best to me.

Writer 1: I thought your story was a bit basic and didn't really have any plot twists. The way the dictator was so gracious in being murdered just seemed very unrealistic too.

Writer 5: Your story reminded me a bit of Royce Da 5'9's Part of Me. I thought some of the dialogue seemed unnatural "Aim to Thwart it" no one would really say that in real life. I thought your story was a bit simple though and wasn't particularly striking or creative.

My vote goes to: Writer 3
 
 

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