My Latest Battle

[FAME]

Fame v Sordid QC @ Barmageddon - YouTube

Watch that shit.

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Oh yeah... I'm also battling a female in this vid.

Awwww your second round was the scheme verse you had written for me :-)

haha yeah, I thought it was quite funny and didn't want it to go to waste LOL

Your first was nice, Sordid was pretty dope here.

Too many jokes tho fam, the fat jokes got boring after round 1.

Plenty positives & critques to elevate from here.

Good shit!

I know man... Let's just say, It's my best performance yet LOL

How the fuck did you lose to this piece of shit, i mean yeah the jokes were mad boring but women suck live.. just sayin

I was drunk and kept choking/stumbling... And she has tits... LOL

yeah your fucking stupid

hahaha we all know this.

Haha Dayum! she killed you. Uncomfortable.

Gotta love the hate lol.

I think a lesson has been learnt as applies to your concepts and range of them. Your delivery is steadly improving, just gotta work on that content and the balance of it. Also work on including more personals, her personals against you were most of her best stuff.

Also (imo) you should try to keep quiet when its not your turn to spit. I always think that people who comment during other peoples verses just come across looking a little desperate. Spit your verse and then just chill, look for possible rebuttles or even just look away all nonchalant like.

1/

haha I'm just an arrogant prick and I can't help myself :/

But yeah, I made the mistake of not having a wide range of angles here... My delivery and overall performance has gotten a LOT better though.

So whos next?

Dunno... I'm workin on music for now... But if anythin gets offered, I'll take it if it interests me.

She killed him and it was uncomfortable to watch. I don't even know who this kid is. Also Interrupting your opponent during their verse makes you look obnoxious & desperate. This is rap battling, and part of rap battling is creative writing, so nothing she said has to be true. Just like some of the stuff he said about her isn't true. It's entertainment, not a Biog.

Originally Posted by Plaudit

She killed him and it was uncomfortable to watch. I don't even know who this kid is. Also Interrupting your opponent during their verse makes you look obnoxious & desperate. This is rap battling, and part of rap battling is creative writing, so nothing she said has to be true. Just like some of the stuff he said about her isn't true. It's entertainment, not a Biog.

Aren't you the kid that claimed to be a ghostwriter in another thread? You make money off that? Judging by your quote in your sig, I'm calling you a liar.

Assume and call me what ever the fuck you want bruh, it's no skin off my nose. because at the end of the day homie, that video up there? Is PROOF you got bodied. Keep acting a fool though.

Originally Posted by Plaudit

Assume and call me what ever the fuck you want bruh, it's no skin off my nose. because at the end of the day homie, that video up there? Is PROOF you got bodied. Keep acting a fool though.

I ALWAYS act the fool... Deal with it.

I'll deal with it when you deal with that loss and the criticism that comes with it.

I'm dealing with the criticism... You're just not offering anything creative for me to build on.

[FAME]

Fame v Sordid QC @ Barmageddon - YouTube

Watch that shit.

---------- Post added at 10:25 AM ---------- Previous post was at 10:24 AM ----------

Oh yeah... I'm also battling a female in this vid.

Awwww your second round was the scheme verse you had written for me :-)

haha yeah, I thought it was quite funny and didn't want it to go to waste LOL

Your first was nice, Sordid was pretty dope here.

Too many jokes tho fam, the fat jokes got boring after round 1.

Plenty positives & critques to elevate from here.

Good shit!

I know man... Let's just say, It's my best performance yet LOL

How the fuck did you lose to this piece of shit, i mean yeah the jokes were mad boring but women suck live.. just sayin

I was drunk and kept choking/stumbling... And she has tits... LOL

yeah your fucking stupid

hahaha we all know this.

Haha Dayum! she killed you. Uncomfortable.

Gotta love the hate lol.

I think a lesson has been learnt as applies to your concepts and range of them. Your delivery is steadly improving, just gotta work on that content and the balance of it. Also work on including more personals, her personals against you were most of her best stuff.

Also (imo) you should try to keep quiet when its not your turn to spit. I always think that people who comment during other peoples verses just come across looking a little desperate. Spit your verse and then just chill, look for possible rebuttles or even just look away all nonchalant like.

1/

haha I'm just an arrogant prick and I can't help myself :/

But yeah, I made the mistake of not having a wide range of angles here... My delivery and overall performance has gotten a LOT better though.

So whos next?

Dunno... I'm workin on music for now... But if anythin gets offered, I'll take it if it interests me.

She killed him and it was uncomfortable to watch. I don't even know who this kid is. Also Interrupting your opponent during their verse makes you look obnoxious & desperate. This is rap battling, and part of rap battling is creative writing, so nothing she said has to be true. Just like some of the stuff he said about her isn't true. It's entertainment, not a Biog.

Originally Posted by Plaudit

She killed him and it was uncomfortable to watch. I don't even know who this kid is. Also Interrupting your opponent during their verse makes you look obnoxious & desperate. This is rap battling, and part of rap battling is creative writing, so nothing she said has to be true. Just like some of the stuff he said about her isn't true. It's entertainment, not a Biog.

Aren't you the kid that claimed to be a ghostwriter in another thread? You make money off that? Judging by your quote in your sig, I'm calling you a liar.

Assume and call me what ever the fuck you want bruh, it's no skin off my nose. because at the end of the day homie, that video up there? Is PROOF you got bodied. Keep acting a fool though.

Originally Posted by Plaudit

Assume and call me what ever the fuck you want bruh, it's no skin off my nose. because at the end of the day homie, that video up there? Is PROOF you got bodied. Keep acting a fool though.

I ALWAYS act the fool... Deal with it.

I'll deal with it when you deal with that loss and the criticism that comes with it.

I'm dealing with the criticism... You're just not offering anything creative for me to build on.

[IV]

Fat jokes are funny, but they do get boring.. You improving a lot though

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You got zero reaction from the fat jokes, people don't vote for fat jokes on LB, but people still do it, i don't get it lmao. Btw.. i just finished watching the whole thing, she was a lot doper than I thought she'd be pretty whack tbh. I wanna battle her

[IV]

Fat jokes are funny, but they do get boring.. You improving a lot though

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You got zero reaction from the fat jokes, people don't vote for fat jokes on LB, but people still do it, i don't get it lmao. Btw.. i just finished watching the whole thing, she was a lot doper than I thought she'd be pretty whack tbh. I wanna battle her

[AfterThought]

V > Sordid.

Goooooooo.

[AfterThought]

V > Sordid.

Goooooooo.

[IV]

We're probably too similar to battle really

[IV]

We're probably too similar to battle really

[ORC]

hmm

idk what was more uncomfortable

baron mynds terrible hatwear or the battle itself

[ORC]

hmm

idk what was more uncomfortable

baron mynds terrible hatwear or the battle itself

[FiNAL WoRD]

this guys a fucking retard fame ^

all and all if you want feed it wasn't you worst battle, it was actually a big improvement from bloodstro

The fat jokes lost you the battle and you know it.. and bro.. she wasnt good at all i don't know where these people get off sayin that.. but with a shitty league comes shitty femcees

[FiNAL WoRD]

this guys a fucking retard fame ^

all and all if you want feed it wasn't you worst battle, it was actually a big improvement from bloodstro

The fat jokes lost you the battle and you know it.. and bro.. she wasnt good at all i don't know where these people get off sayin that.. but with a shitty league comes shitty femcees

[AfterThought]

Originally Posted by Verity

We're probably too similar to battle really

I swear I was thinkin that lol. Still would be dope though

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If you are gonna battle anyway, just battle Fame.

:wtf:

[AfterThought]

Originally Posted by Verity

We're probably too similar to battle really

I swear I was thinkin that lol. Still would be dope though

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If you are gonna battle anyway, just battle Fame.

:wtf:

[TalkSick]

Did anyone else notice the massive unibrow the host had? HA! Jeeeesus

[TalkSick]

Did anyone else notice the massive unibrow the host had? HA! Jeeeesus

[IV]

Originally Posted by AfterThought

I swear I was thinkin that lol. Still would be dope though

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If you are gonna battle anyway, just battle Fame.

:wtf:

Haha yeah, similar accent, sort of similar appearance, wouldnt be that entertaining. But I'd deff have better jokes, and be a lot less basic. The UK loves jokes>bars but I like mixing the two but some people are too slow to catch them. When fame battled Micky he actually had better material but lost by a lot. I would battle though

[IV]

Originally Posted by AfterThought

I swear I was thinkin that lol. Still would be dope though

---------- Post added at 04:55 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:55 PM ----------

If you are gonna battle anyway, just battle Fame.

:wtf:

Haha yeah, similar accent, sort of similar appearance, wouldnt be that entertaining. But I'd deff have better jokes, and be a lot less basic. The UK loves jokes>bars but I like mixing the two but some people are too slow to catch them. When fame battled Micky he actually had better material but lost by a lot. I would battle though

[AfterThought]

Yeah you should deff battle Fame on some first LB live battle ish lol.

[AfterThought]

Yeah you should deff battle Fame on some first LB live battle ish lol.