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UnEtHiCaL hits FL :0
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[media]http://www.letsbeef.com/forums/proddetail.php?prod=57916-Piano-298[/media]
Feedback highly appretiated guys.
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UnEtHiCaL hits FL :0
First beat...
[media]http://www.letsbeef.com/forums/proddetail.php?prod=57916-Piano-298[/media]
Feedback highly appretiated guys.
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03-29-2010, 01:35 PM
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shit is whack.....lol...
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shit is whack.....lol...
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Copy and pasting the comments on your verse from our battle^ 
Hey, I guess feedback is feedback.
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03-29-2010, 01:39 PM
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Copy and pasting the comments on your verse from our battle^
Hey, I guess feedback is feedback.
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lol nah its ok..
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lol nah its ok..
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there's something catchy about it but it's too repettitive .... so seems amateurish .. which is expected for your first beat ...but you gotta have a slight change where the hooks gonna go so it breaks the beat up a bit
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Let me exPLAIN N DROP SOME KNOWLEDGE..Since uA's AN ALCOHOLIC!! you can SAY HE's PROPER SCOTTISH cuz he WAKES UP IN THE MORNINGS craving TASTES OF VODKA TONICS in his DAILY POT OF PORRIDGE laced with, BAILYS .... CHOCOLATE ORANGE? *shrugs*
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there's something catchy about it but it's too repettitive .... so seems amateurish .. which is expected for your first beat ...but you gotta have a slight change where the hooks gonna go so it breaks the beat up a bit
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Let me exPLAIN N DROP SOME KNOWLEDGE..Since uA's AN ALCOHOLIC!! you can SAY HE's PROPER SCOTTISH cuz he WAKES UP IN THE MORNINGS craving TASTES OF VODKA TONICS in his DAILY POT OF PORRIDGE laced with, BAILYS .... CHOCOLATE ORANGE? *shrugs*
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i swear when it started i thought it was billie jean
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i swear when it started i thought it was billie jean
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Yeah, I thought of all that UA, but then I thought 'Hmm, all of that seems like alot of effot for now'  . Yeah I took it more as a project than something someone could spit on.
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Yeah, I thought of all that UA, but then I thought 'Hmm, all of that seems like alot of effot for now' . Yeah I took it more as a project than something someone could spit on.
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i swear when it started i thought it was billie jean
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112 - Only You (Remix).... Thats what it reminded me off hahaha
Nice for a first EtH. It is too basic though. You have a good idea of structure though just needs MORE going on.
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112 - Only You (Remix).... Thats what it reminded me off hahaha
Nice for a first EtH. It is too basic though. You have a good idea of structure though just needs MORE going on.
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Yeah, now I'm afraid of how creative Ill need to be in the next one.
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Yeah, now I'm afraid of how creative Ill need to be in the next one.
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You got a topical to write...
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