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[Carlos Brigante]

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=359668

[Carlos Brigante]

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=359668

[Carlos Brigante]

^^ gud lookin... it wuz a quick keyed up shit on mah phone trna catch YNS' open but dstruction beat me to it so i nus sed fuk n sent it as a challenge... respect on da advice... look out for da verse i got for slaughter though not a 5 minute key up...

[Carlos Brigante]

^^ gud lookin... it wuz a quick keyed up shit on mah phone trna catch YNS' open but dstruction beat me to it so i nus sed fuk n sent it as a challenge... respect on da advice... look out for da verse i got for slaughter though not a 5 minute key up...

[RULE]

I dont and wont

[RULE]

I dont and wont

[PRiiME]

Originally Posted by Student

Try To Shorten Your Lines And You Can Space Your Multi's And They'll Look Better.
For Example:
I'm A BLESSED SPORT...
Don't TEST Me Your SHORT...
Instead Of The Way You Have It Right Now:
DISGRACE-UR-AVATAR
MISPLACED!-TRUNK OF CAR
Like You Could've Said:
your a DISGRACE like UR AVATAR
you'll be MISPLACED! in the TRUNK of a CAR
But Then By The Same Token Some Of Your Multi's Are Broken As In They Don't Rhyme With Each Other Enough.
Example: Avatar (AveeTar)
Doesn't Rhyme With Trunk (Truunck) Only The Last Part Rhymes With Car I Would Have Used Like HAVE A CAR Instead Of Trunk That's Just For Example Though And You'd Have To Fit That Into Your Verse The Right Way.
Just Some Friendly Advice Take It For What It's Worth.

you give this advice, then tell him is multies are broke?

[PRiiME]

Originally Posted by Student

Try To Shorten Your Lines And You Can Space Your Multi's And They'll Look Better.
For Example:
I'm A BLESSED SPORT...
Don't TEST Me Your SHORT...
Instead Of The Way You Have It Right Now:
DISGRACE-UR-AVATAR
MISPLACED!-TRUNK OF CAR
Like You Could've Said:
your a DISGRACE like UR AVATAR
you'll be MISPLACED! in the TRUNK of a CAR
But Then By The Same Token Some Of Your Multi's Are Broken As In They Don't Rhyme With Each Other Enough.
Example: Avatar (AveeTar)
Doesn't Rhyme With Trunk (Truunck) Only The Last Part Rhymes With Car I Would Have Used Like HAVE A CAR Instead Of Trunk That's Just For Example Though And You'd Have To Fit That Into Your Verse The Right Way.
Just Some Friendly Advice Take It For What It's Worth.

you give this advice, then tell him is multies are broke?

[RULE]

Originally Posted by Student

Try To Shorten Your Lines And You Can Space Your Multi's And They'll Look Better.
For Example:
I'm A BLESSED SPORT...
Don't TEST Me Your SHORT...

Dude thats a horrible way of writing. Real talk.

I dunno why people write like that, the flow is thrown of completely.

[RULE]

Originally Posted by Student

Try To Shorten Your Lines And You Can Space Your Multi's And They'll Look Better.
For Example:
I'm A BLESSED SPORT...
Don't TEST Me Your SHORT...

Dude thats a horrible way of writing. Real talk.

I dunno why people write like that, the flow is thrown of completely.