Stupidity At Its Finest..

[Apollyon]

My Bars..
Grizz?? psh like a 'rebellious son' he couldnt "HANDLE MEETING DAD"(DaDDiO) since then hes been watching the food CHANNEL, EATING SNACKS so much his 'hustle is being broke' now someone bring a CANDLE TO HIS PAD(lights out) cuz he wouldnt 'catch a break for the loot' if he was a "VANDAL SEEKING CASH"... 'you gonna be a grand champ' cuz you BOLDLY BEATING WEAK DROPS?? boy 'take a look through an old bulls eye' cuz you "ONLY SEEING THESE SHOTS"... you gonna leave 'my blood at my feet' and this REBELS CHEST SQUIRTING?? nah cuz there 'wouldnt be red under Phenomonon' unLESS "SPELL CHECKS WORKING"... you mean?? hoe you aint even KIND OF VICIOUS so dont make a 'career out of thinking' cuz that NINE'LL SPIT GRIZZ and the doctors'll 'work on ya head' since you wont "MIND YA BUSINESS"... ya hoe dont like you, ASK YA BITCH, SHES MET ME and she wouldnt let 'this tool soften her up' if her "LAXATIVES WERE READY"... somebody KEEP A GURNEY PURCHASED fa 'this dick sucker's NEEDS' CUZ 'GRIZZ KNEES HURTIN' from trying to 'bite his way through to the big one' like "RICAN'S TOURNEY VERSES"... he aint EATING RIGHT, YA DIG?? but im 'starving for you pussies' so i'll leave you LEAKING DRY FROM SIGS yeah im 'taking this hoe out for dinner' so its best he gets "TREATED LIKE A BITCH"



X-Calibur's Breakdown..
Ok so phe asked me to come back and break it down all imma do is a bar for bar on phe's verse at his request i guess .... Phenomonon ... Bar1 .... Hustle being broke candle to his pad !!! Vague refernce to not affording electricity weak catch a break for the loot .... Vandal stealing cash multie doesn't rhyme with previous ones what does CASH rhyme with PAD DAD SNACK ??? And again the punch was vague to its concept .... Bar2 .... This next bit to me was a bit huh!!!! You gunna be a grand champ boldly beating weak drops isnt that sort of big'n him up ?? Then threw a bulls eye only seeing these shots that dont make no cohesive sense or even make a metaphor ??? ... Bar3 ... Wierd way of wording this pun the concept is dopey but i just dont think the wording was right ... And i hate dudes who use the second sylabel of a word to make it a multie shits forced i.e less spell checks working rebels chest squirting ... Really phe ??? .... Bar4... Mind ya business pun meh need harder concepts than that for this battle you know that too ... Bar5 ... The laxatives tool combination laxatives shoulda used a wordplay on tool as stool is a shit anyway not hard hitting and talking bout someone's girlfriend or wifey meh not a fan .... Bar6 ... Multies was all over da place here .... KEEP A GURNEY PURCHASED NEEDS CUZ GRIZZ KNEES HURTIN RICANS TOURNEY VERSES none of them match for me ..... And the pun was a personal that needed a expo in the comments .... Bar7 ... Da fuck is LEAKING DRY FROM SIGS??? And starving for,pussies got to do with each other ???? And the last pun was weak fam ..... ...... YEAH KINDA HARSH BREAK DOWN BUT IMMA BE REAL WITH YOU PHE YOU GOT BETTER SHIT THAN THIS PERIOD .....


http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...549&section=tb

[Apollyon]

My Bars..
Grizz?? psh like a 'rebellious son' he couldnt "HANDLE MEETING DAD"(DaDDiO) since then hes been watching the food CHANNEL, EATING SNACKS so much his 'hustle is being broke' now someone bring a CANDLE TO HIS PAD(lights out) cuz he wouldnt 'catch a break for the loot' if he was a "VANDAL SEEKING CASH"... 'you gonna be a grand champ' cuz you BOLDLY BEATING WEAK DROPS?? boy 'take a look through an old bulls eye' cuz you "ONLY SEEING THESE SHOTS"... you gonna leave 'my blood at my feet' and this REBELS CHEST SQUIRTING?? nah cuz there 'wouldnt be red under Phenomonon' unLESS "SPELL CHECKS WORKING"... you mean?? hoe you aint even KIND OF VICIOUS so dont make a 'career out of thinking' cuz that NINE'LL SPIT GRIZZ and the doctors'll 'work on ya head' since you wont "MIND YA BUSINESS"... ya hoe dont like you, ASK YA BITCH, SHES MET ME and she wouldnt let 'this tool soften her up' if her "LAXATIVES WERE READY"... somebody KEEP A GURNEY PURCHASED fa 'this dick sucker's NEEDS' CUZ 'GRIZZ KNEES HURTIN' from trying to 'bite his way through to the big one' like "RICAN'S TOURNEY VERSES"... he aint EATING RIGHT, YA DIG?? but im 'starving for you pussies' so i'll leave you LEAKING DRY FROM SIGS yeah im 'taking this hoe out for dinner' so its best he gets "TREATED LIKE A BITCH"



X-Calibur's Breakdown..
Ok so phe asked me to come back and break it down all imma do is a bar for bar on phe's verse at his request i guess .... Phenomonon ... Bar1 .... Hustle being broke candle to his pad !!! Vague refernce to not affording electricity weak catch a break for the loot .... Vandal stealing cash multie doesn't rhyme with previous ones what does CASH rhyme with PAD DAD SNACK ??? And again the punch was vague to its concept .... Bar2 .... This next bit to me was a bit huh!!!! You gunna be a grand champ boldly beating weak drops isnt that sort of big'n him up ?? Then threw a bulls eye only seeing these shots that dont make no cohesive sense or even make a metaphor ??? ... Bar3 ... Wierd way of wording this pun the concept is dopey but i just dont think the wording was right ... And i hate dudes who use the second sylabel of a word to make it a multie shits forced i.e less spell checks working rebels chest squirting ... Really phe ??? .... Bar4... Mind ya business pun meh need harder concepts than that for this battle you know that too ... Bar5 ... The laxatives tool combination laxatives shoulda used a wordplay on tool as stool is a shit anyway not hard hitting and talking bout someone's girlfriend or wifey meh not a fan .... Bar6 ... Multies was all over da place here .... KEEP A GURNEY PURCHASED NEEDS CUZ GRIZZ KNEES HURTIN RICANS TOURNEY VERSES none of them match for me ..... And the pun was a personal that needed a expo in the comments .... Bar7 ... Da fuck is LEAKING DRY FROM SIGS??? And starving for,pussies got to do with each other ???? And the last pun was weak fam ..... ...... YEAH KINDA HARSH BREAK DOWN BUT IMMA BE REAL WITH YOU PHE YOU GOT BETTER SHIT THAN THIS PERIOD .....


http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...549&section=tb

.. @X-Calibur , none of his shit was forced , read it allowed n it sounds natural. & he used slant rhymes , though none completely matched, it matched close enough to fit the puzzle, specific sounds in a word matched wit another which makes it a slant rhyme. I aint just fending for my boy but i know how it is.

.. @X-Calibur , none of his shit was forced , read it allowed n it sounds natural. & he used slant rhymes , though none completely matched, it matched close enough to fit the puzzle, specific sounds in a word matched wit another which makes it a slant rhyme. I aint just fending for my boy but i know how it is.

[J u s T C]

No offence Phe but it wasn't great interms of ideas and wording was a little awkward.

CHANNEL, EATING SNACKS so much his 'hustle is being broke' now someone bring a CANDLE TO HIS PAD(lights out) cuz he wouldnt 'catch a break for the loot' if he was a "VANDAL SEEKING CASH


^ Not getting how X didn't see how that worked from a rhyming point though I think the looseness/slant of CANDLE TO HIS PAD compared to the more rigid other capped multi's threw him.

[J u s T C]

No offence Phe but it wasn't great interms of ideas and wording was a little awkward.

CHANNEL, EATING SNACKS so much his 'hustle is being broke' now someone bring a CANDLE TO HIS PAD(lights out) cuz he wouldnt 'catch a break for the loot' if he was a "VANDAL SEEKING CASH


^ Not getting how X didn't see how that worked from a rhyming point though I think the looseness/slant of CANDLE TO HIS PAD compared to the more rigid other capped multi's threw him.

[X-Calibur]

Someone has caught some feelings right here ....

If my expo is so off why havent you got one vote yet phenomonon ?????

Voting is all personal opinion to me shit was off


@R o w i know what slant rhyming is fam ... Phe is better than slant rhymes tho ...

Find this kinda funny actually at how he has made a thread about an expo on a battle he clearly isn't going to win ....

Id understand if he was winning ...

[X-Calibur]

Someone has caught some feelings right here ....

If my expo is so off why havent you got one vote yet phenomonon ?????

Voting is all personal opinion to me shit was off


@R o w i know what slant rhyming is fam ... Phe is better than slant rhymes tho ...

Find this kinda funny actually at how he has made a thread about an expo on a battle he clearly isn't going to win ....

Id understand if he was winning ...

[GRizzEAT]

vote for phe, hoes!!

[GRizzEAT]

vote for phe, hoes!!

Yea i know shit it opinionated

Yea i know shit it opinionated

[X-Calibur]

I just felt if i was harsh it might shock him into rethinking it and hopefully round 2 he'll drop with what we know he can ....

[X-Calibur]

I just felt if i was harsh it might shock him into rethinking it and hopefully round 2 he'll drop with what we know he can ....

[Apollyon]

Leaking dry from sigs means he'll bleed out from a gun shot..

Cash rhymes with dad, snacks, pad.. black, fat, ass, rap, cap, smack, tap, trash.. I can keep going..

so much his 'hustle is being broke' now someone bring a CANDLE TO HIS PAD(lights out) cuz he wouldnt 'catch a break for the loot' if he was a "VANDAL SEEKING CASH".. Your kind of right but hustle being broke wasnt meant to have anything to do candle to his pad but now that i look at it it kind of does cuz if your broke you cant afford lights but the previous line i was basically saying he watched tv and ate his self broke after his loss to DaDDiO.. Stupid..

Me saying that Grizz beats weak competition is in no way hyping him up...

You said my bullseye line made no cohesive sense but let me learn ya something .. Put your self in a bullseyes position.. Bullseyes see shots all day stupid and me calling myself an old bull has to do with me at one time being a Turnbull AC which is a crew on Letsbeef.com maybe..

you gonna leave 'my blood at my feet' and this REBELS CHEST SQUIRTING?? nah cuz there 'wouldnt be red under Phenomonon' unLESS "SPELL CHECKS WORKING".. This ish was fine and actually one of my favorite lines of the battle all though it wasnt really a strong punch at all but yeah the multies are fine.. Just cuz you dont like it dont mean somethings wrong with it..

"and talking bout someone's girlfriend or wifey meh not a fan".. Interesting.. Please tell me more about how this makes my bars not connect..

somebody KEEP A GURNEY PURCHASED fa 'this dick sucker's NEEDS' CUZ 'GRIZZ KNEES HURTIN' from trying to 'bite his way through to the big one' like "RICAN'S TOURNEY VERSES"... How exactly are my multies all over the place?? And this wasnt a personal and i dont see how its a personal.. I'm saying he sucks dick.. Are you saying that Grizz is gay?? lol..

[Apollyon]

Leaking dry from sigs means he'll bleed out from a gun shot..

Cash rhymes with dad, snacks, pad.. black, fat, ass, rap, cap, smack, tap, trash.. I can keep going..

so much his 'hustle is being broke' now someone bring a CANDLE TO HIS PAD(lights out) cuz he wouldnt 'catch a break for the loot' if he was a "VANDAL SEEKING CASH".. Your kind of right but hustle being broke wasnt meant to have anything to do candle to his pad but now that i look at it it kind of does cuz if your broke you cant afford lights but the previous line i was basically saying he watched tv and ate his self broke after his loss to DaDDiO.. Stupid..

Me saying that Grizz beats weak competition is in no way hyping him up...

You said my bullseye line made no cohesive sense but let me learn ya something .. Put your self in a bullseyes position.. Bullseyes see shots all day stupid and me calling myself an old bull has to do with me at one time being a Turnbull AC which is a crew on Letsbeef.com maybe..

you gonna leave 'my blood at my feet' and this REBELS CHEST SQUIRTING?? nah cuz there 'wouldnt be red under Phenomonon' unLESS "SPELL CHECKS WORKING".. This ish was fine and actually one of my favorite lines of the battle all though it wasnt really a strong punch at all but yeah the multies are fine.. Just cuz you dont like it dont mean somethings wrong with it..

"and talking bout someone's girlfriend or wifey meh not a fan".. Interesting.. Please tell me more about how this makes my bars not connect..

somebody KEEP A GURNEY PURCHASED fa 'this dick sucker's NEEDS' CUZ 'GRIZZ KNEES HURTIN' from trying to 'bite his way through to the big one' like "RICAN'S TOURNEY VERSES"... How exactly are my multies all over the place?? And this wasnt a personal and i dont see how its a personal.. I'm saying he sucks dick.. Are you saying that Grizz is gay?? lol..

[GRizzEAT]

thats an expo, hoes!!

[GRizzEAT]

thats an expo, hoes!!

[Apollyon]

@Just C.. I agree my ideas werent all that great.. I dont see where i have wording issues but i havent really examined my bars..

@X-Calibur I never said i beat Grizz stupid..

[Apollyon]

@Just C.. I agree my ideas werent all that great.. I dont see where i have wording issues but i havent really examined my bars..

@X-Calibur I never said i beat Grizz stupid..