New Track: Who I Am - Rough Draft w/ All 3 Verses - Lets Beef

**IAmFlow** · #1 09-02-2011, 07:47 PM

Wanted to put this up. See what everyone thought. I am going to record everything again, when I get a decent mic and some time to spruce it up a bit. Until then, I'll be working on some more shit.

Lets Beef Track: Who I Am - Rough Draft W/ All 3 Verses - By: ItsFlow

**IAmFlow** · 09-02-2011, 07:47 PM

Wanted to put this up. See what everyone thought. I am going to record everything again, when I get a decent mic and some time to spruce it up a bit. Until then, I'll be working on some more shit.

Lets Beef Track: Who I Am - Rough Draft W/ All 3 Verses - By: ItsFlow

**IAmFlow** · #2 09-02-2011, 08:01 PM

Keeping this up!!

**IAmFlow** · 09-02-2011, 08:01 PM

Keeping this up!!

**Ohs** · #3 09-02-2011, 08:18 PM

this shits pooooooop...na i wont hate on u like u do my battles, but u sound like u bout to kill yaself...this isnt bad tho, i was feelin it

**Ohs** · 09-02-2011, 08:18 PM

this shits pooooooop...na i wont hate on u like u do my battles, but u sound like u bout to kill yaself...this isnt bad tho, i was feelin it

**John Dos** · #4 09-02-2011, 08:21 PM

ayo remind me to come back to this shit when i get off work homie

**John Dos** · 09-02-2011, 08:21 PM

ayo remind me to come back to this shit when i get off work homie

**IAmFlow** · #5 09-02-2011, 08:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ohs

this shits pooooooop...na i wont hate on u like u do my battles, but u sound like u bout to kill yaself...this isnt bad tho, i was feelin it

Nah I'm good. And I don't hate on your battles. You know that, that's why I have one of the higher vps. But thanks for the feed. I know it needs work, but it will get it.

@ dose will do

**IAmFlow** · 09-02-2011, 08:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ohs

this shits pooooooop...na i wont hate on u like u do my battles, but u sound like u bout to kill yaself...this isnt bad tho, i was feelin it

Nah I'm good. And I don't hate on your battles. You know that, that's why I have one of the higher vps. But thanks for the feed. I know it needs work, but it will get it.

@ dose will do

**IAmFlow** · #6 09-02-2011, 08:48 PM

Keeping this up

**IAmFlow** · 09-02-2011, 08:48 PM

Keeping this up

**IAmFlow** · #7 09-02-2011, 09:41 PM

Thanks to those who have left feedback.

**IAmFlow** · 09-02-2011, 09:41 PM

Thanks to those who have left feedback.

**IAmFlow** · #8 09-03-2011, 01:00 AM

Keeping this up

**IAmFlow** · 09-03-2011, 01:00 AM

Keeping this up

**John Dos** · #9 09-03-2011, 01:21 AM

hook is nice. vocals need to be louder. flow is choppy, lyrics arent bad. some bright spots. i can tell you're new to track making, but you got potential. try to change your tempo in different spots some areas...the same scheme/flow throughout a song can get old. overall not bad. keep trying man you will get there.

**John Dos** · 09-03-2011, 01:21 AM

hook is nice. vocals need to be louder. flow is choppy, lyrics arent bad. some bright spots. i can tell you're new to track making, but you got potential. try to change your tempo in different spots some areas...the same scheme/flow throughout a song can get old. overall not bad. keep trying man you will get there.

**IAmFlow** · #10 09-03-2011, 12:09 PM

Ordering a new mic today. So wants it gets here. I will record this song again.

**IAmFlow** · 09-03-2011, 12:09 PM

Ordering a new mic today. So wants it gets here. I will record this song again.


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