16 Line(Same Rhyme Scheme)

[Black Book]

Just wrote one...Thoughts?

Why are you FEELIN' SMALL KIDS in the McDonalds CHILDREN BALL PITS??? & you love to PEEL EM SMALL DICKS as they 'Die A Worse Death' than WILLIAM WALLACE!?!/ Faggott, the diamond ring I use KILL N BRAWL PRICKS is worth more than a MILLION WALLETS! So how you 'Lose Green, Cold' like how a CHILL IN AUGUST!!!/ Swagged bars w/ STEEL DEM-OL-ISH this wannabe VILLIAN...CALL QUITS! Cuz you can't fuck w/ my 'Clean Structure' w/ a BUILDIN' POLISHED!!!/ Into brains I'm DRILLIN' KOWLEDGE, but you ain't want a 'Facin' Book' cuz I'm DEALIN' RAWNESS! So 'B Average?' Only being sub-par & STILL IN COLLEGE!!!/ As 'King Of The Jungle' I'm CHILLIN' FLAWLESS! But how you're 'Similar To' a REAL DIM FROG, IT'S proving how I 'Repped, I'll Kill'...No chaMELEON NON-SENSE!!!/ To him? We pay no heed...He ain't ILL N HOTISH! So my authority, I WILL INSTALL BITCH cuz my SKILL BEEN HONEST to these unHEALIN' DOG SHITS! So if 'Dawg Noticed' it's reVEALIN' PAW PRINTS!!!/ You know what!? KNEEL SON, FALL TRICKS...You suck! Just like the other BILLION ODD HICKS! If 'Bruh's Ill, Holmes' there gotta be a BraZILLIAN COTTAGE!!!/ I'll 'Rob Ya Babies' like Rumple STILTSKIN, GOT THIS!?! I gotta cocky ego, I ain't conCEALIN' MODEST cuz I 'Write More Classics' than DYLAN THOMAS!!!/

[Black Book]

Just wrote one...Thoughts?

Why are you FEELIN' SMALL KIDS in the McDonalds CHILDREN BALL PITS??? & you love to PEEL EM SMALL DICKS as they 'Die A Worse Death' than WILLIAM WALLACE!?!/ Faggott, the diamond ring I use KILL N BRAWL PRICKS is worth more than a MILLION WALLETS! So how you 'Lose Green, Cold' like how a CHILL IN AUGUST!!!/ Swagged bars w/ STEEL DEM-OL-ISH this wannabe VILLIAN...CALL QUITS! Cuz you can't fuck w/ my 'Clean Structure' w/ a BUILDIN' POLISHED!!!/ Into brains I'm DRILLIN' KOWLEDGE, but you ain't want a 'Facin' Book' cuz I'm DEALIN' RAWNESS! So 'B Average?' Only being sub-par & STILL IN COLLEGE!!!/ As 'King Of The Jungle' I'm CHILLIN' FLAWLESS! But how you're 'Similar To' a REAL DIM FROG, IT'S proving how I 'Repped, I'll Kill'...No chaMELEON NON-SENSE!!!/ To him? We pay no heed...He ain't ILL N HOTISH! So my authority, I WILL INSTALL BITCH cuz my SKILL BEEN HONEST to these unHEALIN' DOG SHITS! So if 'Dawg Noticed' it's reVEALIN' PAW PRINTS!!!/ You know what!? KNEEL SON, FALL TRICKS...You suck! Just like the other BILLION ODD HICKS! If 'Bruh's Ill, Holmes' there gotta be a BraZILLIAN COTTAGE!!!/ I'll 'Rob Ya Babies' like Rumple STILTSKIN, GOT THIS!?! I gotta cocky ego, I ain't conCEALIN' MODEST cuz I 'Write More Classics' than DYLAN THOMAS!!!/

[LOQ]

That does so much for the flow of your verse...best vverse ive heard/read from u.

[LOQ]

That does so much for the flow of your verse...best vverse ive heard/read from u.

[reEFer]

kneel son, fall tricks?? real dim frogs its?? ill n hottish?? billion odd hicks??? ... alot of the multi's are way too forced, & most of the punches don't make sense or are just weak .. if i was to rate it, it'd be like at tops a 6 ..

Try doing 8 lines with an easier scheme for now, or have someone else come up with the scheme for you & Loquence... the more comments/votes i see from you, the more i realize your a shitty/ignorant voter

[reEFer]

kneel son, fall tricks?? real dim frogs its?? ill n hottish?? billion odd hicks??? ... alot of the multi's are way too forced, & most of the punches don't make sense or are just weak .. if i was to rate it, it'd be like at tops a 6 ..

Try doing 8 lines with an easier scheme for now, or have someone else come up with the scheme for you & Loquence... the more comments/votes i see from you, the more i realize your a shitty/ignorant voter

[LOQ]

Originally Posted by -ReeFer-

kneel son, fall tricks?? real dim frogs its?? ill n hottish?? billion odd hicks??? ... alot of the multi's are way too forced, & most of the punches don't make sense or are just weak .. if i was to rate it, it'd be like at tops a 6 ..

Try doing 8 lines with an easier scheme for now, or have someone else come up with the scheme for you & Loquence... the more comments/votes i see from you, the more i realize your a shitty/ignorant voter

You don't do sarcasm well do you..and lol @ that comment you made, i must have voted against you..which is punishable by letsbeef law?

[LOQ]

Originally Posted by -ReeFer-

kneel son, fall tricks?? real dim frogs its?? ill n hottish?? billion odd hicks??? ... alot of the multi's are way too forced, & most of the punches don't make sense or are just weak .. if i was to rate it, it'd be like at tops a 6 ..

Try doing 8 lines with an easier scheme for now, or have someone else come up with the scheme for you & Loquence... the more comments/votes i see from you, the more i realize your a shitty/ignorant voter

You don't do sarcasm well do you..and lol @ that comment you made, i must have voted against you..which is punishable by letsbeef law?

[reEFer]

don't get all butt hurt, homie.. just an observation

[reEFer]

don't get all butt hurt, homie.. just an observation

[LOQ]

Seems I should be saying that to you.

[LOQ]

Seems I should be saying that to you.