New Track Feat. Po a Fo

[ItsFame]

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[ItsFame]

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[TMKAD]

listening to FAME...1st guy where are you from? sounds like you have an accent...with that being said some words did not come across clear...need to work on your diction and emotion. lyrics were cool...2nd dude better...much more clear...flow is not bad...needs to work on emotion as well though doesn't come across like you believe what you saying...overall it wasnt bad tho...i like the beat...song is long for just 2 verse btw lol...cut down the beat or add a bridge or another verse lol...keep doing ya'll thing. Peace

[TMKAD]

listening to FAME...1st guy where are you from? sounds like you have an accent...with that being said some words did not come across clear...need to work on your diction and emotion. lyrics were cool...2nd dude better...much more clear...flow is not bad...needs to work on emotion as well though doesn't come across like you believe what you saying...overall it wasnt bad tho...i like the beat...song is long for just 2 verse btw lol...cut down the beat or add a bridge or another verse lol...keep doing ya'll thing. Peace

[GTech]

1st Verse - Sounds kinda monotone, needs more presence. Flow slips a lot. Quality aint htat great either. Mediocre verse

2nd Verse - Flow is better, a lil more consistent. Monotone as well, gotta be more expressive. Decent verse.

Overall a weak track, no hate. Beat is banging, gotta bring more to the table with this kinda beat. Stay up

[GTech]

1st Verse - Sounds kinda monotone, needs more presence. Flow slips a lot. Quality aint htat great either. Mediocre verse

2nd Verse - Flow is better, a lil more consistent. Monotone as well, gotta be more expressive. Decent verse.

Overall a weak track, no hate. Beat is banging, gotta bring more to the table with this kinda beat. Stay up