And I'm Not FVC? - Lets Beef

-Sir · #1 03-13-2010, 07:38 PM

ok look at my last expo and tell me why i'm not FVC... if you can

A Certain Swag vs. Jack-O-Lantern

damn it this'll be a long expo... Break Down: Swag- opener was just beasting it out, like K said simple but well executed, flow was nice, structured well, concepts original, executed like a hanging, and surprisingly you went without any played lines about pumpking... good work// Jack- opener was nice, your flow is excellent, nice structure, ya got some good vocab, you set things up very well, and then you execute them nicely.... good work ~~ Best Lines: Swag- my favorite from you was--> Its like "Dislexia" the way he FAILING WIT GRAMMA, like a "Lunatic Judge" ill be FLAILING THE HAMMER, only time Jack "Sees/Seas" My "Frame" is SAILING WITH CAMERAS!!... second was---> I Didnt even want to "Waste Words" on this AGGRESSIVE PRICK, but im'a leev "Gay Murked" with A MESSAGE SICK, bashin his Skull till A CREVICE SPLIT, now this "Pussy's Face" lookin like A BLEMISHED CLIT!!//... then my 3rd favorite was ---> I think his EYES DECEIVED, Covered in Blood, Now �Watch� as i put my �Red Hand on his Lungs� so he got Minimum TIME TO BREATHE... Then He�ll �Float N Leave/Floatin Leaf�, And lose his �Bark� like DYING TREES!//... all of these were well set up and executed... good job// Jack- my favoite line from you was --->He ain't TEXTIN BOUT HIS SMITH AND'S, It's just the GAY HE MIGHT SHOW when he talks about "Tossing Me In The Ring" with some 'LADY TYPE' HOLDS, But his bars are "More Stretched Out" than WRESTLING SUBMISSIONS!!//... my 2nd was ---->That wouldn't be fair though, Like a GRIND TIME PRO versus John Cena, Or one of the guys from CRIME TIME... YO mute button... Your Tone-Is-Void, But It ain't hard to see why people LIKE MY PROSE, And "Swag Surfin" like "Soulja-Boy" still couldn't surVIVE MY FLOW!!//... and my 3rd was ---> Look, I'll take, And MAKE YOU DIE SLOW! Punches? "J's Rock" you could SAY THIS GUY'S 'STONED', But he'll never "Point With The Beam" to leave "Cons Hurt" like LASER LIGHT SHOWS!!//... like Swag's they were all nicely se up and executed... good job ~~ Overall: winner was a tough choice.... it was basically versitility & originality verse concepts & flow... both had hard punches and executed well but my descision came down to who i think had the better and more consistent delivery ~~ Scoring: winner recieves high 9 and looser recieves a higher mid 9... ya dig? ~~ fair is in and how can you argue against this expo... probably most thorough one here

-Sir · 03-13-2010, 07:38 PM

ok look at my last expo and tell me why i'm not FVC... if you can

A Certain Swag vs. Jack-O-Lantern

damn it this'll be a long expo... Break Down: Swag- opener was just beasting it out, like K said simple but well executed, flow was nice, structured well, concepts original, executed like a hanging, and surprisingly you went without any played lines about pumpking... good work// Jack- opener was nice, your flow is excellent, nice structure, ya got some good vocab, you set things up very well, and then you execute them nicely.... good work ~~ Best Lines: Swag- my favorite from you was--> Its like "Dislexia" the way he FAILING WIT GRAMMA, like a "Lunatic Judge" ill be FLAILING THE HAMMER, only time Jack "Sees/Seas" My "Frame" is SAILING WITH CAMERAS!!... second was---> I Didnt even want to "Waste Words" on this AGGRESSIVE PRICK, but im'a leev "Gay Murked" with A MESSAGE SICK, bashin his Skull till A CREVICE SPLIT, now this "Pussy's Face" lookin like A BLEMISHED CLIT!!//... then my 3rd favorite was ---> I think his EYES DECEIVED, Covered in Blood, Now �Watch� as i put my �Red Hand on his Lungs� so he got Minimum TIME TO BREATHE... Then He�ll �Float N Leave/Floatin Leaf�, And lose his �Bark� like DYING TREES!//... all of these were well set up and executed... good job// Jack- my favoite line from you was --->He ain't TEXTIN BOUT HIS SMITH AND'S, It's just the GAY HE MIGHT SHOW when he talks about "Tossing Me In The Ring" with some 'LADY TYPE' HOLDS, But his bars are "More Stretched Out" than WRESTLING SUBMISSIONS!!//... my 2nd was ---->That wouldn't be fair though, Like a GRIND TIME PRO versus John Cena, Or one of the guys from CRIME TIME... YO mute button... Your Tone-Is-Void, But It ain't hard to see why people LIKE MY PROSE, And "Swag Surfin" like "Soulja-Boy" still couldn't surVIVE MY FLOW!!//... and my 3rd was ---> Look, I'll take, And MAKE YOU DIE SLOW! Punches? "J's Rock" you could SAY THIS GUY'S 'STONED', But he'll never "Point With The Beam" to leave "Cons Hurt" like LASER LIGHT SHOWS!!//... like Swag's they were all nicely se up and executed... good job ~~ Overall: winner was a tough choice.... it was basically versitility & originality verse concepts & flow... both had hard punches and executed well but my descision came down to who i think had the better and more consistent delivery ~~ Scoring: winner recieves high 9 and looser recieves a higher mid 9... ya dig? ~~ fair is in and how can you argue against this expo... probably most thorough one here

**MacDaddySmith** · #2 03-13-2010, 07:41 PM

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=345236

gimme one of those please

**MacDaddySmith** · 03-13-2010, 07:41 PM

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=345236

gimme one of those please

-Sir · #3 03-13-2010, 07:42 PM

can't he's in my crew.. sorry... post another link and i'll get to it.... i need credits!!

-Sir · 03-13-2010, 07:42 PM

can't he's in my crew.. sorry... post another link and i'll get to it.... i need credits!!

**MacDaddySmith** · #4 03-13-2010, 07:44 PM

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=345483

BBOOOOMMM!!!!

**MacDaddySmith** · 03-13-2010, 07:44 PM

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=345483

BBOOOOMMM!!!!

-Sir · #5 03-13-2010, 09:14 PM

hitting it up right now!!

-Sir · 03-13-2010, 09:14 PM

hitting it up right now!!

-Sir · #6 03-13-2010, 09:27 PM

making my case again!!!!

MaC vs. Str8 Rippin

here comes the beloved expo!!! ok... Break Down: Rippin- hm... at some points ya multies were fire & at some they were sorta broken, your punches hit, you had flow, you were pretty original, ya set things up well, and you executed nicely... nice drop// MaC- ya have a unique structure which can be risky but you make it work, since i can understand the order i get your multies which are solid, ya flow is decent, ya punches connect, ya have good concepts that are executed well, and your set ups are very nice... hot drop ~~ Best Lines: Rippin- my favorite line from you was -->OKAAY, hit em wit a punch, the LEFT MAKE EM PASS OUT - told me he bout to STEP DOWN THE CASH ROUTE but only time he ':Cook in Crack:' is CHEFS WIT THEY ASS OUT... then my 2nd was --> he aint HUSTLIN SADLY unless hes DUCKIN LIKE DAFFY get ripped BY BIG TECKS, you'd THINK IM INCEST how im FUCKIN UP DADDY!!... these both had a nice setup with connecting punch and were well executed... MaC- my favorite line from you was --> Im really TRIPPIN TAH SLAP HOES without GRIPPIN THE MAC THOUGH Yes I FALL IN THE PRO ZONE You can Ironically “CALL ME A HOMO” the way im “Straight-RIPPIN THIS ASSHOLE!”... my 2nd was --> Aight… I’ll never be as DUMB AS THESE BITCHES jus SLUMMIN WIT WRITTENS But Bitches couldn’t “Slam Ill” being “DRUMMERS ON SICK SHIT!” And when my PUNS’LL BLAST they’ll have yah “RUNNIN FAST” like “SUMMER OLYMPICS!”.... these were at the end and beginning of ya drop showing you can start and finish ya drop... good work ~~ Overall: tough choice but i believe one used the punches more and to his advantage resulting a more well rounded drop... giving him my vote ~~ Scoring: winner and looser both recieve mid 9's... Policy: the fair is in and welcomes a return and no hate to either cuz both were dope and..... DAMN I SHOULD BE FVC!!!

-Sir · 03-13-2010, 09:27 PM

making my case again!!!!

MaC vs. Str8 Rippin

here comes the beloved expo!!! ok... Break Down: Rippin- hm... at some points ya multies were fire & at some they were sorta broken, your punches hit, you had flow, you were pretty original, ya set things up well, and you executed nicely... nice drop// MaC- ya have a unique structure which can be risky but you make it work, since i can understand the order i get your multies which are solid, ya flow is decent, ya punches connect, ya have good concepts that are executed well, and your set ups are very nice... hot drop ~~ Best Lines: Rippin- my favorite line from you was -->OKAAY, hit em wit a punch, the LEFT MAKE EM PASS OUT - told me he bout to STEP DOWN THE CASH ROUTE but only time he ':Cook in Crack:' is CHEFS WIT THEY ASS OUT... then my 2nd was --> he aint HUSTLIN SADLY unless hes DUCKIN LIKE DAFFY get ripped BY BIG TECKS, you'd THINK IM INCEST how im FUCKIN UP DADDY!!... these both had a nice setup with connecting punch and were well executed... MaC- my favorite line from you was --> Im really TRIPPIN TAH SLAP HOES without GRIPPIN THE MAC THOUGH Yes I FALL IN THE PRO ZONE You can Ironically “CALL ME A HOMO” the way im “Straight-RIPPIN THIS ASSHOLE!”... my 2nd was --> Aight… I’ll never be as DUMB AS THESE BITCHES jus SLUMMIN WIT WRITTENS But Bitches couldn’t “Slam Ill” being “DRUMMERS ON SICK SHIT!” And when my PUNS’LL BLAST they’ll have yah “RUNNIN FAST” like “SUMMER OLYMPICS!”.... these were at the end and beginning of ya drop showing you can start and finish ya drop... good work ~~ Overall: tough choice but i believe one used the punches more and to his advantage resulting a more well rounded drop... giving him my vote ~~ Scoring: winner and looser both recieve mid 9's... Policy: the fair is in and welcomes a return and no hate to either cuz both were dope and..... DAMN I SHOULD BE FVC!!!