are u fucking kidding me ?? - Lets Beef

**COFFIN DODGER** · #1 01-27-2015, 01:52 PM

wait ..so now battles are WON by bars that make absolutely no fucking sense and are just random words linked together ??? seriously ? how come the only vote against me is by a fvc member and everyone else who voted said the guys bars made no sense and voted for me ?? want some fvc members to look at this and tell me if I right or just fucking imagining it !!!

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=485028

**COFFIN DODGER** · 01-27-2015, 01:52 PM

wait ..so now battles are WON by bars that make absolutely no fucking sense and are just random words linked together ??? seriously ? how come the only vote against me is by a fvc member and everyone else who voted said the guys bars made no sense and voted for me ?? want some fvc members to look at this and tell me if I right or just fucking imagining it !!!

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=485028

#2 01-27-2015, 02:02 PM

swaying while the battle is still opened is against the rules .. im obligated to delete this thread.

but

@Hastur

01-27-2015, 02:02 PM

swaying while the battle is still opened is against the rules .. im obligated to delete this thread.

but

@Hastur

**Lizman** · #3 01-27-2015, 02:28 PM

Ultimate Text Voting.

Drop Your Future Links In The Thread Linked In My Sig.

**Lizman** · 01-27-2015, 02:28 PM

Ultimate Text Voting.

Drop Your Future Links In The Thread Linked In My Sig.

**COFFIN DODGER** · #4 01-27-2015, 02:29 PM

yo sorry @Row , wasn't trying to sway , just made me mad when I saw that vote and expo ...

**COFFIN DODGER** · 01-27-2015, 02:29 PM

yo sorry @Row , wasn't trying to sway , just made me mad when I saw that vote and expo ...

**Shodan** · #5 01-27-2015, 02:45 PM

EDIT: EVERYTHING BELOW IS SWAYING, DON'T READ IT IF YOU DON'T WANT TO BE SWAYED

Steve, apart from the whole "open battle swaying," I voted against you because your "bars," while their construction was better than your opponents, were basically meaningless, as far as I am concerned.

"seriously I don't know what this MAN PREACHES but this FAG REACHES ! more confusing than one of 'RANTS' SPEECHES !"

"what ya talkin bout fool ? I should rip out this NIGGAS BLADDER for chatting all that JIBBER JABBER ! if ya want to elevat ya should by a BIGGER LADDER ! "

Lolwat? These ain't bars, fam. Where are the punches? Where are the concepts? Rant/rant is a concept now? No, it ain't. Your "bars" were so bad that your opponent won this battle solely on the basis of the fact that he didn't try to punch, which meant I wasn't cringing throughout his entire drop. That may sound odd, but your attempts at punching were so fucking embarassing that they actually lowered the quality of your verse. The fact you're arguing otherwise proves that you are a gigantic lolcow.

Oh, yes, and I know I'm swaying with this comment, but I don't care, since this is already a sway thread. I won't complain if this comment gets deleted.

**Shodan** · 01-27-2015, 02:45 PM

EDIT: EVERYTHING BELOW IS SWAYING, DON'T READ IT IF YOU DON'T WANT TO BE SWAYED

Steve, apart from the whole "open battle swaying," I voted against you because your "bars," while their construction was better than your opponents, were basically meaningless, as far as I am concerned.

"seriously I don't know what this MAN PREACHES but this FAG REACHES ! more confusing than one of 'RANTS' SPEECHES !"

"what ya talkin bout fool ? I should rip out this NIGGAS BLADDER for chatting all that JIBBER JABBER ! if ya want to elevat ya should by a BIGGER LADDER ! "

Lolwat? These ain't bars, fam. Where are the punches? Where are the concepts? Rant/rant is a concept now? No, it ain't. Your "bars" were so bad that your opponent won this battle solely on the basis of the fact that he didn't try to punch, which meant I wasn't cringing throughout his entire drop. That may sound odd, but your attempts at punching were so fucking embarassing that they actually lowered the quality of your verse. The fact you're arguing otherwise proves that you are a gigantic lolcow.

Oh, yes, and I know I'm swaying with this comment, but I don't care, since this is already a sway thread. I won't complain if this comment gets deleted.

**ILLoKWENT** · #6 01-27-2015, 03:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hastur

Steve, apart from the whole "open battle swaying," I voted against you because your "bars," while their construction was better than your opponents, were basically meaningless, as far as I am concerned.

"seriously I don't know what this MAN PREACHES but this FAG REACHES ! more confusing than one of 'RANTS' SPEECHES !"

"what ya talkin bout fool ? I should rip out this NIGGAS BLADDER for chatting all that JIBBER JABBER ! if ya want to elevat ya should by a BIGGER LADDER ! "

Lolwat? These ain't bars, fam. Where are the punches? Where are the concepts? Rant/rant is a concept now? No, it ain't. Your "bars" were so bad that your opponent won this battle solely on the basis of the fact that he didn't try to punch. .

remember the point of a punch is to diss your opponent whether straight forward..ex.so and so is a sheep fucker....or. using similes/metas/analogies etc...as a means to up the creativity of ones insult... in this case i see two types of figures of speech..simile and metaphor.... although very very rudimentary are still apparent... first one is him insulting his opponents bars as confusing and comparing it rants speeches using like or 'as'.....so his c9ncept here is 'confusing'..his setup was also relevant that led to his conclusion....next concept is 'elevate further' connecting with bigger ladder...the setup here was a fail. It didnt sculpt out why the opponent wants to elevate further..ex.. dude asking for advice in the threads or anything else that setsup the concept......bottomline is although they arent exactly cutting edge HOF material ..they still utilize imagry and allusion
that works at insulting his opponent..

**ILLoKWENT** · 01-27-2015, 03:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hastur

Steve, apart from the whole "open battle swaying," I voted against you because your "bars," while their construction was better than your opponents, were basically meaningless, as far as I am concerned.

"seriously I don't know what this MAN PREACHES but this FAG REACHES ! more confusing than one of 'RANTS' SPEECHES !"

"what ya talkin bout fool ? I should rip out this NIGGAS BLADDER for chatting all that JIBBER JABBER ! if ya want to elevat ya should by a BIGGER LADDER ! "

Lolwat? These ain't bars, fam. Where are the punches? Where are the concepts? Rant/rant is a concept now? No, it ain't. Your "bars" were so bad that your opponent won this battle solely on the basis of the fact that he didn't try to punch. .

remember the point of a punch is to diss your opponent whether straight forward..ex.so and so is a sheep fucker....or. using similes/metas/analogies etc...as a means to up the creativity of ones insult... in this case i see two types of figures of speech..simile and metaphor.... although very very rudimentary are still apparent... first one is him insulting his opponents bars as confusing and comparing it rants speeches using like or 'as'.....so his c9ncept here is 'confusing'..his setup was also relevant that led to his conclusion....next concept is 'elevate further' connecting with bigger ladder...the setup here was a fail. It didnt sculpt out why the opponent wants to elevate further..ex.. dude asking for advice in the threads or anything else that setsup the concept......bottomline is although they arent exactly cutting edge HOF material ..they still utilize imagry and allusion
that works at insulting his opponent..


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