Crew? Check this..

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=lb&id=571886

I need a crew, I'll let you be the judge. ^^

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=lb&id=571886

I need a crew, I'll let you be the judge. ^^

[Phil Banks]

need to work on your delivery with the writtens.... got some cool concepts couple lines i liked somewhat.... keep battling you'll get better the more you write as far as crews... they'll hit u up once u make a lil noise

[Phil Banks]

need to work on your delivery with the writtens.... got some cool concepts couple lines i liked somewhat.... keep battling you'll get better the more you write as far as crews... they'll hit u up once u make a lil noise

thanks ill keep doing work. just gettin the hang of things

thanks ill keep doing work. just gettin the hang of things

[✍FoeCoe™]

not enough hard hitting punches & metaphors arent really connecting,

[✍FoeCoe™]

not enough hard hitting punches & metaphors arent really connecting,

why are you talking about what i need to do.. when i've beatin you like 4 times this week, no hate just don't see how you could help me lol, by repeating what dude said above you? lol.

why are you talking about what i need to do.. when i've beatin you like 4 times this week, no hate just don't see how you could help me lol, by repeating what dude said above you? lol.

[Phil Banks]

nah some of ya metaphors are worded weird... hard to really tell u what i don't like main thing was delivery after your fart line u got a lil less potent with it before that u was doing it... i dunno if u need any help get at me though

[Phil Banks]

nah some of ya metaphors are worded weird... hard to really tell u what i don't like main thing was delivery after your fart line u got a lil less potent with it before that u was doing it... i dunno if u need any help get at me though

[✍FoeCoe™]

...Err body know that I wasn't even trying on to battlez... lilwayne voice , lil b voice , and Bnas voice... i waz just bored so I posted random shit..... and u still sucked you can't write fo shit ur style is weak and u should just quit rapping 4real

[✍FoeCoe™]

...Err body know that I wasn't even trying on to battlez... lilwayne voice , lil b voice , and Bnas voice... i waz just bored so I posted random shit..... and u still sucked you can't write fo shit ur style is weak and u should just quit rapping 4real