looking for tips, criticism...AND RAW OPPONENTS

[Po a Fo]

Ok.... been on here for a couple months now and am finally hittin a groove with this battle thing lol (always more of just a....rapper before) and I got to rise the ranks which was fine and dandy but fact of the matter is, like in everything i do I'm tryna be THE BEST... u can laugh or hate but shit I'm tryna be the next eminem if I can... I'm just trying to get down on battles with people better or same level as me, if u look at my recent trend in opponents ull see that its drastically improved n I want that to continue...... anyways if anyone has any legit feedback, criticism, or even hate that'll motivate me more, drop it right here... and if OTHER people think ur better than me along with yaself then lets battle (I really wanna battle..... mayneak, rule,wish....I'm high can't remember anymore but)












Show some love for tha organized po a fo {which btw means to pour a four.. aka 4 ounces of liquid codeine}

[Po a Fo]

Ok.... been on here for a couple months now and am finally hittin a groove with this battle thing lol (always more of just a....rapper before) and I got to rise the ranks which was fine and dandy but fact of the matter is, like in everything i do I'm tryna be THE BEST... u can laugh or hate but shit I'm tryna be the next eminem if I can... I'm just trying to get down on battles with people better or same level as me, if u look at my recent trend in opponents ull see that its drastically improved n I want that to continue...... anyways if anyone has any legit feedback, criticism, or even hate that'll motivate me more, drop it right here... and if OTHER people think ur better than me along with yaself then lets battle (I really wanna battle..... mayneak, rule,wish....I'm high can't remember anymore but)












Show some love for tha organized po a fo {which btw means to pour a four.. aka 4 ounces of liquid codeine}

[King of Comedy]

Nigga, you should send me your lines
Before you make 'em public

After I bless 'em
You won't have nothin to worry about

[King of Comedy]

Nigga, you should send me your lines
Before you make 'em public

After I bless 'em
You won't have nothin to worry about

[The Kid Eddie T]

cmon i really suck n beat po twice

[The Kid Eddie T]

cmon i really suck n beat po twice

[Po a Fo]

Ya rule looking at that line I wish I could take it back Lol.....Ok to make this easy here's my most recent.....



SON-BEST SHUT UP AND LISTEN HERE! CON-FESSED CUT UP AND DISSIN QUEER! but I couldn't help myself cuz Murka DONE-FESSED UP TO KISSIN REAR!!! Watch as dude SWITCHES HO-MO doesn't fuck BITCHES NO-MO! claim to have MO-FLOW but turned out a NO-SHOW!! like a bitch on tha RAG, DUD HOES BOUT TO BLOAT!! trachea hit with tha MAG, BLOOD FLOWS OUT YA THROAT!! well APPARENTLY i (TROUBLE-U) when ya bitch HE-SEEN {DE-MAND-SEX}!! now i GUARANTEE a (W) like if you look BE-TWEEN {V-AND-X}!!!{think...} see I'm SO FANCY WIT WORDS, drill this HOE PANSY, SPIT TURDS! you see "my vocals?" get ya "bi focals" so u CAN-SEE SHIT-NERDS!!! this faggot ate a cock MOUND, HE-FULL, told God n he FOUND de-CEIT-FUL, but "his-venue" is to "con-tinue" to POUND FE-CAL!!!{wow...} MURKA on some BULLSHIT ima MURK-YA, make me PULL-SHIT! Did you get your rhymes from lambchop cuz that shit looks WOOL-WRIT!!!

[Po a Fo]

Ya rule looking at that line I wish I could take it back Lol.....Ok to make this easy here's my most recent.....



SON-BEST SHUT UP AND LISTEN HERE! CON-FESSED CUT UP AND DISSIN QUEER! but I couldn't help myself cuz Murka DONE-FESSED UP TO KISSIN REAR!!! Watch as dude SWITCHES HO-MO doesn't fuck BITCHES NO-MO! claim to have MO-FLOW but turned out a NO-SHOW!! like a bitch on tha RAG, DUD HOES BOUT TO BLOAT!! trachea hit with tha MAG, BLOOD FLOWS OUT YA THROAT!! well APPARENTLY i (TROUBLE-U) when ya bitch HE-SEEN {DE-MAND-SEX}!! now i GUARANTEE a (W) like if you look BE-TWEEN {V-AND-X}!!!{think...} see I'm SO FANCY WIT WORDS, drill this HOE PANSY, SPIT TURDS! you see "my vocals?" get ya "bi focals" so u CAN-SEE SHIT-NERDS!!! this faggot ate a cock MOUND, HE-FULL, told God n he FOUND de-CEIT-FUL, but "his-venue" is to "con-tinue" to POUND FE-CAL!!!{wow...} MURKA on some BULLSHIT ima MURK-YA, make me PULL-SHIT! Did you get your rhymes from lambchop cuz that shit looks WOOL-WRIT!!!

[Po a Fo]

You may have "beat"the unorganized po

[Po a Fo]

You may have "beat"the unorganized po

[The Kid Eddie T]

well APPARENTLY i (TROUBLE-U) when ya bitch HE-SEEN {DE-MAND-SEX}!! now i GUARANTEE a (W) like if you look BE-TWEEN {V-AND-X}!!!{think...} should worked on that line a lil more doggy would flow way smoother

[The Kid Eddie T]

well APPARENTLY i (TROUBLE-U) when ya bitch HE-SEEN {DE-MAND-SEX}!! now i GUARANTEE a (W) like if you look BE-TWEEN {V-AND-X}!!!{think...} should worked on that line a lil more doggy would flow way smoother

[The Kid Eddie T]

do you put on instumentals when you battle or type???
re read the verse OUTLOUD before SENDING or POSTING AN OPEN???

[The Kid Eddie T]

do you put on instumentals when you battle or type???
re read the verse OUTLOUD before SENDING or POSTING AN OPEN???

[The Kid Eddie T]

that makes a BIG DIFFERENCE

[The Kid Eddie T]

that makes a BIG DIFFERENCE

[Po a Fo]

ONot Usually, does that help u

[Po a Fo]

ONot Usually, does that help u