Text Battles - Lets Beef

**FAME** · #1 03-12-2013, 04:35 AM

Discuss.....

**FAME** · 03-12-2013, 04:35 AM

Discuss.....

**ILLoKWENT** · #2 03-12-2013, 04:41 AM

lol, you have to be more specific..

**ILLoKWENT** · 03-12-2013, 04:41 AM

lol, you have to be more specific..

**FAME** · #3 03-12-2013, 04:55 AM

Apparently so

**FAME** · 03-12-2013, 04:55 AM

Apparently so

**RULE** · #4 03-12-2013, 04:56 AM

Remember your hoodrich diss track? Good times./

**RULE** · 03-12-2013, 04:56 AM

Remember your hoodrich diss track? Good times./

-Apollyon- · #5 03-12-2013, 04:58 AM

lol...

-Apollyon- · 03-12-2013, 04:58 AM

lol...

**ItzNDaSawce** · #6 03-12-2013, 05:59 AM

FVC tell me in my last battle that my ish needs to connect and have more concepts..less filler and more punches..so I whip up a personal that sumone was spose to send to me(Prince S-Tana) didn't so I sent..now the FVC tellin me my verse was too VAgue!! like WTF..really? now on a beef site a verse was too vague.lol..rite on then

**ItzNDaSawce** · 03-12-2013, 05:59 AM

FVC tell me in my last battle that my ish needs to connect and have more concepts..less filler and more punches..so I whip up a personal that sumone was spose to send to me(Prince S-Tana) didn't so I sent..now the FVC tellin me my verse was too VAgue!! like WTF..really? now on a beef site a verse was too vague.lol..rite on then

**RULE** · #7 03-12-2013, 06:03 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by trill_conceptz

FVC tell me in my last battle that my ish needs to connect and have more concepts..less filler and more punches..so I whip up a personal that sumone was spose to send to me(Prince S-Tana) didn't so I sent..now the FVC tellin me my verse was too VAgue!! like WTF..really? now on a beef site a verse was too vague.lol..rite on then

Post the verse and we'll dissect it for you...

**RULE** · 03-12-2013, 06:03 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by trill_conceptz

FVC tell me in my last battle that my ish needs to connect and have more concepts..less filler and more punches..so I whip up a personal that sumone was spose to send to me(Prince S-Tana) didn't so I sent..now the FVC tellin me my verse was too VAgue!! like WTF..really? now on a beef site a verse was too vague.lol..rite on then

Post the verse and we'll dissect it for you...

**ItzNDaSawce** · #8 03-12-2013, 06:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RULE

Post the verse and we'll dissect it for you...

(Trill) every"dog has its day" so im BRAWLIN WIT BITCHES, but 4"balls in this game?'CALL IT SUSPICIOUS or"call it a phrase"so while she CLAWIN RELENTLESS, wit(Cs"ock)in her face" is just STALIN DEFENSES cuz ima "Leave (Ls)"in"{A~LL)OF YA BUSINESS! i'm back yal no BRO'KEN ACCENT tho when SPOKEN AT SCRIPTS they FOCUSED AT PRINCE so "check ya lines then view these",LB wont"recognize the new me" while I"stand over ya box"like an OPEN*CASKET*chick winning? is 'sumthing delirious?' T FEELS like leavin P. "bloody as periods"and still 'eat her box up', learn why C'REAL/cereal, and 'others be fearin this'and not a CHEAP THRILL so im 'pluck this game bird 1st round', bet yal SEE QUILLS/sequeal!! go over the COOKOOs NEST?,meainin ya GOONZOO SET! wild=no bars so do wut YOU DO BEST, cuz a preQueen, 'be mean' wont get a"chant in her honor" usin VOODOO TEXT! so OFF WIT HER HEAD, earlier mentioning COFFINS INSTEAD, see her 'tear ducts, tear up' around T, tho she OFTEN GETS WETS, thinkin I'd 'slaughter nuns alike', Tana!, put ya 'water guns aside' cuz ya verse, you aint TOSSIN THE LEAD! n im too FAST AND QUICK AT DISHIN.um,'brutality'didnt 'you challenge me?' so T wont BASH THE CHICKS WACK WRITTENS, im sendin? yup, when id rather jus 'hold her head under water',like CATHOLIC BAPTISMS!

---------- Post added at 05:33 AM ---------- Previous post was at 05:14 AM ----------

[/COLOR]her bars are stretched more than her belly from the 5 kids she has...each line don't go tother at all..WRITTENS DO DROP BLUNT/hypertension JEW KNOT RUSHED..syllable ok but HYPER is part of the word..if u have to cut words down jus for syllable purposes then we shouldn't use them is wut I was told..GRIPPIN (A) FEW is off syllable badly..(hyper/super?)STITIOUS 2PAC/AFEW..really? GIMMICKS STOP(wut happened to the 2 syllable like 2PAC? how is one known to (son, pussy, ass, niggas,) wtf is that..i mean her whole verse is put together poorly but ima take the lose..so I need expo

**ItzNDaSawce** · 03-12-2013, 06:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RULE

Post the verse and we'll dissect it for you...

(Trill) every"dog has its day" so im BRAWLIN WIT BITCHES, but 4"balls in this game?'CALL IT SUSPICIOUS or"call it a phrase"so while she CLAWIN RELENTLESS, wit(Cs"ock)in her face" is just STALIN DEFENSES cuz ima "Leave (Ls)"in"{A~LL)OF YA BUSINESS! i'm back yal no BRO'KEN ACCENT tho when SPOKEN AT SCRIPTS they FOCUSED AT PRINCE so "check ya lines then view these",LB wont"recognize the new me" while I"stand over ya box"like an OPEN*CASKET*chick winning? is 'sumthing delirious?' T FEELS like leavin P. "bloody as periods"and still 'eat her box up', learn why C'REAL/cereal, and 'others be fearin this'and not a CHEAP THRILL so im 'pluck this game bird 1st round', bet yal SEE QUILLS/sequeal!! go over the COOKOOs NEST?,meainin ya GOONZOO SET! wild=no bars so do wut YOU DO BEST, cuz a preQueen, 'be mean' wont get a"chant in her honor" usin VOODOO TEXT! so OFF WIT HER HEAD, earlier mentioning COFFINS INSTEAD, see her 'tear ducts, tear up' around T, tho she OFTEN GETS WETS, thinkin I'd 'slaughter nuns alike', Tana!, put ya 'water guns aside' cuz ya verse, you aint TOSSIN THE LEAD! n im too FAST AND QUICK AT DISHIN.um,'brutality'didnt 'you challenge me?' so T wont BASH THE CHICKS WACK WRITTENS, im sendin? yup, when id rather jus 'hold her head under water',like CATHOLIC BAPTISMS!

---------- Post added at 05:33 AM ---------- Previous post was at 05:14 AM ----------

[/COLOR]her bars are stretched more than her belly from the 5 kids she has...each line don't go tother at all..WRITTENS DO DROP BLUNT/hypertension JEW KNOT RUSHED..syllable ok but HYPER is part of the word..if u have to cut words down jus for syllable purposes then we shouldn't use them is wut I was told..GRIPPIN (A) FEW is off syllable badly..(hyper/super?)STITIOUS 2PAC/AFEW..really? GIMMICKS STOP(wut happened to the 2 syllable like 2PAC? how is one known to (son, pussy, ass, niggas,) wtf is that..i mean her whole verse is put together poorly but ima take the lose..so I need expo

**RULE** · #9 03-12-2013, 06:45 AM

first thing i notice is your presentation is terrible.

wit(Cs"ock)in her face" is just STALIN DEFENSES cuz ima "Leave (Ls)"in"{A~LL)OF YA BUSINESS!

How are people supposed to read that smoothly? Too many brackets and swiggles n shit.

The lines a mess.

**RULE** · 03-12-2013, 06:45 AM

first thing i notice is your presentation is terrible.

wit(Cs"ock)in her face" is just STALIN DEFENSES cuz ima "Leave (Ls)"in"{A~LL)OF YA BUSINESS!

How are people supposed to read that smoothly? Too many brackets and swiggles n shit.

The lines a mess.

**ItzNDaSawce** · #10 03-12-2013, 06:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RULE

first thing i notice is your presentation is terrible.

wit(Cs"ock)in her face" is just STALIN DEFENSES cuz ima "Leave (Ls)"in"{A~LL)OF YA BUSINESS!

How are people supposed to read that smoothly? Too many brackets and swiggles n shit.

The lines a mess.

if that the only reason Ima loose this..then im go back to cypher for a bit..right on

**ItzNDaSawce** · 03-12-2013, 06:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RULE

first thing i notice is your presentation is terrible.

wit(Cs"ock)in her face" is just STALIN DEFENSES cuz ima "Leave (Ls)"in"{A~LL)OF YA BUSINESS!

How are people supposed to read that smoothly? Too many brackets and swiggles n shit.

The lines a mess.

if that the only reason Ima loose this..then im go back to cypher for a bit..right on


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