SoupErb FIRST TRACK OMG ABOUT TIME - Lets Beef

**SoupErb** · #1 06-01-2012, 08:59 AM

Yeeeh. Just a quick track. Ill be uploading it as a track on LB when I got exclusive.

Check it y'allllllllll

http://soundcloud.com/souperb-m16/souperb-follow-instructions
See all this haters wanna shit but, they gotta be pussy coz their always on my dick cuz; Think ya gonna win when ya 'Flow blows', you're just 'Pissin in the wind',
Fam I 'Stay on the grind' like Tony hawk cheat codes, Yeh I know ya don't let the heat blow!
All you other crews are still bitches, get killed quick if you snitch coz 'Reporters get hit' like Will Smith Did, see im a 'badboy' it's No 'Biggie'.. On stage it's a 'massacre' like Fifty, See..
Still pushin weed in the street just to get the 'C.R.E.A.M' - Cash Rules Everythin Around Me, just like Meth Said, 'n' That'll be stuck in my head till im 'resting in peace' on my 'death bed'..
See it's all trademark but people wanna take my swag 'n' I don't even, wanna take it back! Coz you bin tracin that, so now im gonna have to change that, erase that; Keep this beat on playback, coz it won't be the same Fam 'n' I'll be the Grand Champ
steppin in the game yeh you know im that man! See,
I snub heroes for thinkin their cold or below Zero coz only time you ever bin 'Sub-0' is coz you got.. 'No fans on youtube' now you're a victim to my voodoo.. 1 shot, 2 shot, the Bird's goin crazy, I think it's goin CooCoo!
And now your bitch is finger lickin, probly suggestin her mouth should'a had my dick in, coz im nice with the writtens - I could get, rid of your Illness like yo, I just signed ya prescription.. on the dotted line, now die as a victim!

---------- Post added at 01:52 PM ---------- Previous post was at 01:19 PM ----------

All comments are appreciated.

---------- Post added at 01:59 PM ---------- Previous post was at 01:52 PM ----------

Oh yeh this is recorded on a really shitty mic. So quality is bad.

**SoupErb** · 06-01-2012, 08:59 AM

Yeeeh. Just a quick track. Ill be uploading it as a track on LB when I got exclusive.

Check it y'allllllllll

http://soundcloud.com/souperb-m16/souperb-follow-instructions
See all this haters wanna shit but, they gotta be pussy coz their always on my dick cuz; Think ya gonna win when ya 'Flow blows', you're just 'Pissin in the wind',
Fam I 'Stay on the grind' like Tony hawk cheat codes, Yeh I know ya don't let the heat blow!
All you other crews are still bitches, get killed quick if you snitch coz 'Reporters get hit' like Will Smith Did, see im a 'badboy' it's No 'Biggie'.. On stage it's a 'massacre' like Fifty, See..
Still pushin weed in the street just to get the 'C.R.E.A.M' - Cash Rules Everythin Around Me, just like Meth Said, 'n' That'll be stuck in my head till im 'resting in peace' on my 'death bed'..
See it's all trademark but people wanna take my swag 'n' I don't even, wanna take it back! Coz you bin tracin that, so now im gonna have to change that, erase that; Keep this beat on playback, coz it won't be the same Fam 'n' I'll be the Grand Champ
steppin in the game yeh you know im that man! See,
I snub heroes for thinkin their cold or below Zero coz only time you ever bin 'Sub-0' is coz you got.. 'No fans on youtube' now you're a victim to my voodoo.. 1 shot, 2 shot, the Bird's goin crazy, I think it's goin CooCoo!
And now your bitch is finger lickin, probly suggestin her mouth should'a had my dick in, coz im nice with the writtens - I could get, rid of your Illness like yo, I just signed ya prescription.. on the dotted line, now die as a victim!

---------- Post added at 01:52 PM ---------- Previous post was at 01:19 PM ----------

All comments are appreciated.

---------- Post added at 01:59 PM ---------- Previous post was at 01:52 PM ----------

Oh yeh this is recorded on a really shitty mic. So quality is bad.

**Phil Banks** · #2 06-01-2012, 09:17 AM

I love this beat... MOP my shit all day.... the beat is to low... off top raise it some.....this a cypher type track.... you aint really have the lines I look for in these kind of songs... your flow is cool your presence on point... the problem is with the written in some places i think some bars came off the a lil awkward were lacking syllables in some places ... but I def. think this a good building block considering it's ya first joint..keep writing do as many tracks as possible you only get better

**Phil Banks** · 06-01-2012, 09:17 AM

I love this beat... MOP my shit all day.... the beat is to low... off top raise it some.....this a cypher type track.... you aint really have the lines I look for in these kind of songs... your flow is cool your presence on point... the problem is with the written in some places i think some bars came off the a lil awkward were lacking syllables in some places ... but I def. think this a good building block considering it's ya first joint..keep writing do as many tracks as possible you only get better