What is it with 'Complexity'?...

[SoupErb]

Y'all need to stop saying this shit.. "Needs to be more complex" lol That shit is so annoying.

Obviously nobody wants to read some shit that looks like it been copied from a Child's bed time story-book...

But Y'all expect some Magnificent Shakespeare shit that half the time don't even make sense.. I mean c'mon, half you dickheads prolly need a dictionary and a thesaurus for the most simple bars.

Thing is.. It wouldn't piss me off as much if y'all actually READ and took note of 'COMPLEX' bars.

Example of my own:

You could END UP DEAD IN PRISON because your BEST OF FRIENDS ARE SNITCHES; Coz ya 'Circle' aint 'Crazy' ... they just some 'CENTRE' 'MENTAL' BITCHES!!

'Circle' = Centre ... 'Crazy' = Mental ... Wordplay = Sentimental; Which means someone who is Soft, or takes things to heart sorta thing.

The only motherfuckin person that even mentioned this bar in their expo.. Was RULE.
I ain't sayin this is some 'Outta this world' shit.. But most of y'all can't even understand 'Simple Complexity' (lol)

Stop using the word Complexity unless your actually going to understand complex bars.

[SoupErb]

Y'all need to stop saying this shit.. "Needs to be more complex" lol That shit is so annoying.

Obviously nobody wants to read some shit that looks like it been copied from a Child's bed time story-book...

But Y'all expect some Magnificent Shakespeare shit that half the time don't even make sense.. I mean c'mon, half you dickheads prolly need a dictionary and a thesaurus for the most simple bars.

Thing is.. It wouldn't piss me off as much if y'all actually READ and took note of 'COMPLEX' bars.

Example of my own:

You could END UP DEAD IN PRISON because your BEST OF FRIENDS ARE SNITCHES; Coz ya 'Circle' aint 'Crazy' ... they just some 'CENTRE' 'MENTAL' BITCHES!!

'Circle' = Centre ... 'Crazy' = Mental ... Wordplay = Sentimental; Which means someone who is Soft, or takes things to heart sorta thing.

The only motherfuckin person that even mentioned this bar in their expo.. Was RULE.
I ain't sayin this is some 'Outta this world' shit.. But most of y'all can't even understand 'Simple Complexity' (lol)

Stop using the word Complexity unless your actually going to understand complex bars.

[ORC]

sentimental/centre mental is forced

[ORC]

sentimental/centre mental is forced

[SoupErb]

You being serious?... LOL

How do you say it?

Coz i literally say 'Sentimental' .. as 'Centremental'

What... You say it like.. 'Sent I Menthol' or some shit? Fuck outta here i don't even know you.

[SoupErb]

You being serious?... LOL

How do you say it?

Coz i literally say 'Sentimental' .. as 'Centremental'

What... You say it like.. 'Sent I Menthol' or some shit? Fuck outta here i don't even know you.

[ORC]

so you say sentermental? haha ok

haa @ u don't even know me. i dont know u son but judging by ya wordplay u suck

[ORC]

so you say sentermental? haha ok

haa @ u don't even know me. i dont know u son but judging by ya wordplay u suck

[SoupErb]

Wtf do you say then bitch? Coz seriously I ain't never heard someone say 'Sentimental' any different than how it is ACTUALLY pronounced.

See this is what im talkin bout.. Little bitches like this who don't even know the basics of vocabulary.. Tryna judge other people's bars? lol

And actually my wordplay was ony of my strongest points when I actually did text battling.

Fuck outta here Bilbo.. Get a few battles under ya belt then send me an audio.

[SoupErb]

Wtf do you say then bitch? Coz seriously I ain't never heard someone say 'Sentimental' any different than how it is ACTUALLY pronounced.

See this is what im talkin bout.. Little bitches like this who don't even know the basics of vocabulary.. Tryna judge other people's bars? lol

And actually my wordplay was ony of my strongest points when I actually did text battling.

Fuck outta here Bilbo.. Get a few battles under ya belt then send me an audio.

[ORC]

i wont ever battle here tbh

[ORC]

i wont ever battle here tbh

[RhetoriK]

We could argue phonetics all day on that.
However Soup has a valid point. Iono, my lines are complex in nature most of the time, but I see a lot of cats that pull words out and it's not needed.
Unless it's relevant to the line and has a true double meaning to it. Leave it, LEAVE IT!!

So word @SoupErb

There's two types of wordplay. Mikey and i just talked about this a while ago.

Phrase wordplay (NawkOut, Rican, Grief, Book) and Single/Phonetic Wordplay (Mikey, Reef, Tank) I think people try to use both. Deciding what angle your taking is key. Sometimes its unavoidable, but still. Agreed.

'Circle' aint 'Crazy' ... they just some 'CENTRE' 'MENTAL' BITCHES!!

Nah.

'Circle aint Crazy' ..they just some 'CENTRE MENTAL' BITCHES!!

probably how i would have done that. if they dont get it... you already know. More of a single wordplay off a metaphor. but yeah seen.

[RhetoriK]

We could argue phonetics all day on that.
However Soup has a valid point. Iono, my lines are complex in nature most of the time, but I see a lot of cats that pull words out and it's not needed.
Unless it's relevant to the line and has a true double meaning to it. Leave it, LEAVE IT!!

So word @SoupErb

There's two types of wordplay. Mikey and i just talked about this a while ago.

Phrase wordplay (NawkOut, Rican, Grief, Book) and Single/Phonetic Wordplay (Mikey, Reef, Tank) I think people try to use both. Deciding what angle your taking is key. Sometimes its unavoidable, but still. Agreed.

'Circle' aint 'Crazy' ... they just some 'CENTRE' 'MENTAL' BITCHES!!

Nah.

'Circle aint Crazy' ..they just some 'CENTRE MENTAL' BITCHES!!

probably how i would have done that. if they dont get it... you already know. More of a single wordplay off a metaphor. but yeah seen.

[SoupErb]

Originally Posted by Plaudit

Sen (tee) mental or sen (tah) mental

You must be British.

People forget about accents. That goes for both of you.

I already knew it would have been an accent thing..

But seriously.. You guys actually say SenTEEmental? lol

Ok ok.. So now we can say shit like 'Da feet' is shit worldplay coz who actually speaks like that? 'Da'?

Lol there's gotta be some flexibility.. Dudes comin in here sayin my wordplay is forced because I say SenterMental - N y'all say SentEEmental, which just sounds stupid to be honest lmao.

[SoupErb]

Originally Posted by Plaudit

Sen (tee) mental or sen (tah) mental

You must be British.

People forget about accents. That goes for both of you.

I already knew it would have been an accent thing..

But seriously.. You guys actually say SenTEEmental? lol

Ok ok.. So now we can say shit like 'Da feet' is shit worldplay coz who actually speaks like that? 'Da'?

Lol there's gotta be some flexibility.. Dudes comin in here sayin my wordplay is forced because I say SenterMental - N y'all say SentEEmental, which just sounds stupid to be honest lmao.

[SoupErb]

@RhetoriK got it down to a T, as usual hahaha.

It's funny coz when I think of 'Complex Bars', I actually think of Rhet's. And they always nice bars.

@Plaudit , Yeh true lmao it's played, but it was just an example of wordplay that could be seen as 'Forced' .. Like I said who actually says 'Da Feet'

[SoupErb]

@RhetoriK got it down to a T, as usual hahaha.

It's funny coz when I think of 'Complex Bars', I actually think of Rhet's. And they always nice bars.

@Plaudit , Yeh true lmao it's played, but it was just an example of wordplay that could be seen as 'Forced' .. Like I said who actually says 'Da Feet'

[Black Book]

Sent-Ah-Mental...
He's pronouncing Centre, which is spelled Center in English, Centah.
This way it works, and back to the main focus of this thread...

Only time I say more complexity if it's the very simple style like:
I'll prove you is A GEEK. Chop off your ankles and shove them in ya face so ya know DEFEAT!
...Just something like that. Irrelevant set up & very simple & played line.
I say more complexity when trying to get them to think on the next level...

[Black Book]

Sent-Ah-Mental...
He's pronouncing Centre, which is spelled Center in English, Centah.
This way it works, and back to the main focus of this thread...

Only time I say more complexity if it's the very simple style like:
I'll prove you is A GEEK. Chop off your ankles and shove them in ya face so ya know DEFEAT!
...Just something like that. Irrelevant set up & very simple & played line.
I say more complexity when trying to get them to think on the next level...