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Unread 03-20-2014, 04:36 AM
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Entering a remixing contest. I just crafted my 1st draft. I'm long ways away from the final product. But I decided to publish the 1st draft here so I could get some feedback.

heres the originalhttps://soundcloud.com/squadrecordin...ty-fever-squad

Here's my 1st draft remix.


This is just the general mapping laid out, I'll probably add more left and right of it. Please leave serious feedback
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Default Need Some Feedback on this, EVERYONE ENTER
Entering a remixing contest. I just crafted my 1st draft. I'm long ways away from the final product. But I decided to publish the 1st draft here so I could get some feedback.

heres the originalhttps://soundcloud.com/squadrecordin...ty-fever-squad

Here's my 1st draft remix.


This is just the general mapping laid out, I'll probably add more left and right of it. Please leave serious feedback
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Unread 03-20-2014, 04:47 AM
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2 plays? I'll drop feed when you get over a thousand.




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2 plays? I'll drop feed when you get over a thousand.




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Unread 03-20-2014, 10:21 AM
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Unread 03-20-2014, 10:47 AM   #4
 
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Unread 03-20-2014, 12:05 PM
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Nice shit Deej, Ill just offer what I can as a lover of Rap/Dubstep. At the beginning It feels like theres Less echo, and some parts when theres only one effect playing seams kinda off to me.
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Nice shit Deej, Ill just offer what I can as a lover of Rap/Dubstep. At the beginning It feels like theres Less echo, and some parts when theres only one effect playing seams kinda off to me.
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I'm not into gay electric club dancing music.
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I'm not into gay electric club dancing music.
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Not much feedback your gonna get on here tbh..

But it sounds nice imo.
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Not much feedback your gonna get on here tbh..

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