Fame v Sordid QC @ Barmageddon - YouTube
Watch that shit.
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Oh yeah... I'm also battling a female in this vid.
Awwww your second round was the scheme verse you had written for me :-)
haha yeah, I thought it was quite funny and didn't want it to go to waste LOL
Your first was nice, Sordid was pretty dope here.
Too many jokes tho fam, the fat jokes got boring after round 1.
Plenty positives & critques to elevate from here.
Good shit!
I know man... Let's just say, It's my best performance yet LOL
How the fuck did you lose to this piece of shit, i mean yeah the jokes were mad boring but women suck live.. just sayin
I was drunk and kept choking/stumbling... And she has tits... LOL
yeah your fucking stupid
hahaha we all know this.
Haha Dayum! she killed you. Uncomfortable.
Gotta love the hate lol.
I think a lesson has been learnt as applies to your concepts and range of them. Your delivery is steadly improving, just gotta work on that content and the balance of it. Also work on including more personals, her personals against you were most of her best stuff.
Also (imo) you should try to keep quiet when its not your turn to spit. I always think that people who comment during other peoples verses just come across looking a little desperate. Spit your verse and then just chill, look for possible rebuttles or even just look away all nonchalant like.
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haha I'm just an arrogant prick and I can't help myself :/
But yeah, I made the mistake of not having a wide range of angles here... My delivery and overall performance has gotten a LOT better though.
So whos next?
Dunno... I'm workin on music for now... But if anythin gets offered, I'll take it if it interests me.
She killed him and it was uncomfortable to watch. I don't even know who this kid is. Also Interrupting your opponent during their verse makes you look obnoxious & desperate. This is rap battling, and part of rap battling is creative writing, so nothing she said has to be true. Just like some of the stuff he said about her isn't true. It's entertainment, not a Biog.
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She killed him and it was uncomfortable to watch. I don't even know who this kid is. Also Interrupting your opponent during their verse makes you look obnoxious & desperate. This is rap battling, and part of rap battling is creative writing, so nothing she said has to be true. Just like some of the stuff he said about her isn't true. It's entertainment, not a Biog.
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Aren't you the kid that claimed to be a ghostwriter in another thread? You make money off that? Judging by your quote in your sig, I'm calling you a liar.
Assume and call me what ever the fuck you want bruh, it's no skin off my nose. because at the end of the day homie, that video up there? Is PROOF you got bodied. Keep acting a fool though.
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Assume and call me what ever the fuck you want bruh, it's no skin off my nose. because at the end of the day homie, that video up there? Is PROOF you got bodied. Keep acting a fool though.
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I ALWAYS act the fool... Deal with it.
I'll deal with it when you deal with that loss and the criticism that comes with it.
I'm dealing with the criticism... You're just not offering anything creative for me to build on.
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