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09-02-2011, 03:29 PM
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i like the concept behind this song, the lyrics are good...but cant help but feel like you go the same way every track tho - step out of your comfort zone and switch things up...a faster pace flow would have killed this beat...quality is great but the tags kill it...hook is catchy - maybe stack it to give it that chorus feel...you did your thing man, good job
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i like the concept behind this song, the lyrics are good...but cant help but feel like you go the same way every track tho - step out of your comfort zone and switch things up...a faster pace flow would have killed this beat...quality is great but the tags kill it...hook is catchy - maybe stack it to give it that chorus feel...you did your thing man, good job
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09-02-2011, 06:15 PM
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09-02-2011, 06:15 PM
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and Freezy...
I changed my style up alot on this, even though i didn't rap fast. I think you just wanna hear me rap fast lol. I'll make one where I do that. Got one in the works actually haha.
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and Freezy...
I changed my style up alot on this, even though i didn't rap fast. I think you just wanna hear me rap fast lol. I'll make one where I do that. Got one in the works actually haha.
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