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07-07-2011, 01:27 PM
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Election Day.
No Link To Rate. Cypher Won't Show Up.
The Beat. Election Day Instrumental.mp3 - 2.9 Mb
Please play link while reading.
(Not strictly Rap, Sing a long, throw ya lighters in the air type shit)
*Think of some Rappin Coldplay/Oasis Anthem esque shit*
Lyrics Start 15 seconds @ the Gutar solo
Election Day Pt 1:
Verse: 1
Yes I know times are hard, so there's some need for me.
I want to reach for the stars, if you'll beleive in me.
Put your life on the line, and say you trust in me.
To put your troubles behind, so you can find some peace.
Theres no need to be scared, just take a chance on me.
And I promise you this, you'll find all you seek.
No Red Tape and no War, there'll be no Po-ver-ty.
No stoping in at a ward, having to wait for weeks.
No JSA or job cuts, no endless ques for a cheque.
That make you feel a little worthless, as you're loosing respect
A good school for your kids, a roof over your head.
I'll even get your gran a lift so she aint using the steps.
Hook:
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII.
Understand you need some help in life.
But I am not the 1 to make it right.
So forget what I have said tonight.
And get your life together.
Verse:2
No cracks or bumps on the road, no scruntching up on the bus.
Cuz no, over priced charges for you parkings a must.
Nobody spongin ya stash, cuz everyones on their grind.
Nobody eyeing up your cash, nobody robbing you blind.
You don't think it's the truth?, but if you e-lect me.
I'll provide with you the proof, so all of you can see.
That I'm sincere in my words, I don't mean no harm.
I wanna make a difference in your life, so you'll go far.
You've been let down before, on many countless occasions.
But I can make so many changes, if you show me some patience.
Make good on every promise made, you'll be glad that you waited.
Once they start to bare fruit, in this garden I'm making
Hook:
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII.
Understand you need some help in life.
But I am not the 1 to make it right.
So forget what I have said tonight.
And get your life together.
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Election Day.
No Link To Rate. Cypher Won't Show Up.
The Beat. Election Day Instrumental.mp3 - 2.9 Mb
Please play link while reading.
(Not strictly Rap, Sing a long, throw ya lighters in the air type shit)
*Think of some Rappin Coldplay/Oasis Anthem esque shit*
Lyrics Start 15 seconds @ the Gutar solo
Election Day Pt 1:
Verse: 1
Yes I know times are hard, so there's some need for me.
I want to reach for the stars, if you'll beleive in me.
Put your life on the line, and say you trust in me.
To put your troubles behind, so you can find some peace.
Theres no need to be scared, just take a chance on me.
And I promise you this, you'll find all you seek.
No Red Tape and no War, there'll be no Po-ver-ty.
No stoping in at a ward, having to wait for weeks.
No JSA or job cuts, no endless ques for a cheque.
That make you feel a little worthless, as you're loosing respect
A good school for your kids, a roof over your head.
I'll even get your gran a lift so she aint using the steps.
Hook:
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII.
Understand you need some help in life.
But I am not the 1 to make it right.
So forget what I have said tonight.
And get your life together.
Verse:2
No cracks or bumps on the road, no scruntching up on the bus.
Cuz no, over priced charges for you parkings a must.
Nobody spongin ya stash, cuz everyones on their grind.
Nobody eyeing up your cash, nobody robbing you blind.
You don't think it's the truth?, but if you e-lect me.
I'll provide with you the proof, so all of you can see.
That I'm sincere in my words, I don't mean no harm.
I wanna make a difference in your life, so you'll go far.
You've been let down before, on many countless occasions.
But I can make so many changes, if you show me some patience.
Make good on every promise made, you'll be glad that you waited.
Once they start to bare fruit, in this garden I'm making
Hook:
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII.
Understand you need some help in life.
But I am not the 1 to make it right.
So forget what I have said tonight.
And get your life together.
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I'm a do a flip side to this and then make the track. All feed back is welcome and will be returned if you leave a link in your post. If you link but don't feed don't expect me to take a look or listen.
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I'm a do a flip side to this and then make the track. All feed back is welcome and will be returned if you leave a link in your post. If you link but don't feed don't expect me to take a look or listen.
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07-07-2011, 01:41 PM
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Good shit i was reading like a Lupe flow added a syllable here and there and took one out...the nerve of me...But yeah it was dope...Some substance involved
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Good shit i was reading like a Lupe flow added a syllable here and there and took one out...the nerve of me...But yeah it was dope...Some substance involved
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I'll just feed with no link lol
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I'll just feed with no link lol
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Lol good looks Zach
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Lol good looks Zach
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I can't follow the flow.. cuz your flow is unique. I can't read along to the shit.... haha
but the lyrics were dope and that beat was pretty hot too. Why didn't the cypher show up?
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I can't follow the flow.. cuz your flow is unique. I can't read along to the shit.... haha
but the lyrics were dope and that beat was pretty hot too. Why didn't the cypher show up?
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Thanks on the lyrics. can see how it be a lil hard to flow with. it aint a typical rap flow.
but yea, I dunno why the cypher aint showing. I guess its another glitch to add to the list.
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Thanks on the lyrics. can see how it be a lil hard to flow with. it aint a typical rap flow.
but yea, I dunno why the cypher aint showing. I guess its another glitch to add to the list.
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Originally Posted by Truth Be Told
Thanks on the lyrics. can see how it be a lil hard to flow with. it aint a typical rap flow.
but yea, I dunno why the cypher aint showing. I guess its another glitch to add to the list.
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Have to make it flow in your own way until you actually hear it by him...And if you mean Audio Cyphers on here they've been messed up for a while...but then again that's prob not what you meant  lol
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Originally Posted by Truth Be Told
Thanks on the lyrics. can see how it be a lil hard to flow with. it aint a typical rap flow.
but yea, I dunno why the cypher aint showing. I guess its another glitch to add to the list.
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Have to make it flow in your own way until you actually hear it by him...And if you mean Audio Cyphers on here they've been messed up for a while...but then again that's prob not what you meant  lol
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what remark said...post more tracks my nigga, youre dope.
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what remark said...post more tracks my nigga, youre dope.
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It Sounds Like A Soft Lullaby For Newborns Of Spread Eagled Jingoists
Until You Hear The Beat...Then Its For Soccer Fans Of The Same Breed
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you still have to give someone the benefit of the doubt regardless of how obvious it looks
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Ok so at this point you guys are just being willfully ignorant / not understanding on purpose / or just trolling.
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"Little 4 To 5"? Need To Be "Hand Held"? My "Style" Is Modish Than Basic, I Kid, Joint Clips Follow My "Touch" Like "Co-vid" App Tracing - Lizman Vs MarkThePatriarch
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It Sounds Like A Soft Lullaby For Newborns Of Spread Eagled Jingoists
Until You Hear The Beat...Then Its For Soccer Fans Of The Same Breed
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Wait, how old are you? I feel uncomfortable being inside your head if you're a minor.
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you still have to give someone the benefit of the doubt regardless of how obvious it looks
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Ok so at this point you guys are just being willfully ignorant / not understanding on purpose / or just trolling.
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"Little 4 To 5"? Need To Be "Hand Held"? My "Style" Is Modish Than Basic, I Kid, Joint Clips Follow My "Touch" Like "Co-vid" App Tracing - Lizman Vs MarkThePatriarch
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