First ever rap - Give me Feedback - Lets Beef

Putbehindbars · #1 11-12-2013, 04:09 PM

Ive walked this road my whole life, Same every day, Ready to end it, Maybe with a knige. Losing control Im ready to implode Locked up, blocked up. Contained in this shell and I cant be topped. I know its the truth Im the top
*: You might as well call me the rap cop
*: ......
*: Hit you cross the face with this baseball bat
: Permit you back up and hit you until you ave hearing loss
*: Listen
*: Im the king cat

Literally its the first ever thing ive done. Please only CnC . If what you say will help me I dont care how mean it is

Thanks

Putbehindbars · 11-12-2013, 04:09 PM

Ive walked this road my whole life, Same every day, Ready to end it, Maybe with a knige. Losing control Im ready to implode Locked up, blocked up. Contained in this shell and I cant be topped. I know its the truth Im the top
*: You might as well call me the rap cop
*: ......
*: Hit you cross the face with this baseball bat
: Permit you back up and hit you until you ave hearing loss
*: Listen
*: Im the king cat

Literally its the first ever thing ive done. Please only CnC . If what you say will help me I dont care how mean it is

Thanks


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