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Unread 05-08-2012, 09:46 AM
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http://barzbeyond.ucoz.com/forum/47-63-1

Don't laugh lmao!!

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Don't laugh lmao!!

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Unread 05-08-2012, 10:39 AM
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That ringing was fucking with my ears yo.
A beat shouldn't physically hurt your ears lmaoo
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That ringing was fucking with my ears yo.
A beat shouldn't physically hurt your ears lmaoo
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Not bad for a first try, fam! Gotta roll wit Wiz about the ring sound tho. It's too high pitched and almost creates a 'dog whistle effect' where you wanna squint your eyes. Bring it down a few octives and re-link it. I think that'd help. Keep doin' work tho, you're off to a nice start.
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Not bad for a first try, fam! Gotta roll wit Wiz about the ring sound tho. It's too high pitched and almost creates a 'dog whistle effect' where you wanna squint your eyes. Bring it down a few octives and re-link it. I think that'd help. Keep doin' work tho, you're off to a nice start.
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Unread 05-08-2012, 12:03 PM
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lol this goof Juno got separate forums for

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bahahahaaaaaaaaaa

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Unread 05-08-2012, 12:42 PM
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Haha.. On the bright side, he doesn't appear to have any family issues, and he's not gettin' bullied at school.
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the bell is to loud, and it definitely shouldn't be there through the whole song, maybe just on the chorus part.... and its missing something, but over all its not bad for your first attempt
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the bell is to loud, and it definitely shouldn't be there through the whole song, maybe just on the chorus part.... and its missing something, but over all its not bad for your first attempt
 
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this kid = white people swag
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this kid = white people swag
 
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nah don't wanna hate.. nice first beat. maybe slow it down. u can make ur beats swing a lot nicer with a lower tempo... i usually sit at 77 tbh, unless im feelin rugged. might even do it at 140 and treat it like 70

but yea, ur whole style/beat/aura says 'kid who jumped on the swagwaggon'
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nah don't wanna hate.. nice first beat. maybe slow it down. u can make ur beats swing a lot nicer with a lower tempo... i usually sit at 77 tbh, unless im feelin rugged. might even do it at 140 and treat it like 70

but yea, ur whole style/beat/aura says 'kid who jumped on the swagwaggon'
 
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lol @ gurp.. Good lookin out boys.... Appreciate the feed.
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lol @ gurp.. Good lookin out boys.... Appreciate the feed.
 
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