Breaking down my bar against cookup

[Wraxius]

Since I've already lost the battle, and I'm not mad about it, I'm just going to break the bar down to what I was thinking. JUST to see if it was mis-understood. NO hate to anyone.

The Bar:

It's in the rules, you can't ROTATE THE DECEASED MATTER, So is it a mistake if I GO WASTIN YOUR WEAK CATTLE Because it has NO TASTE AND IT'S BLEAK? BATTERED to prove that you can't HOLD WEIGHT IN A BEEF BATTLE

The Meaning: Read it backwards, sort of. What I meant by "rotate the deceased matter" was talking about Killing his bars (In this case, since it's battle rap, refer to as beef), Go wasting your weak cattle (meaning I'm killing his beef, thus I can't flip it in reference to the first bar). No Taste and it's bleak? Battered (Saying that his bars weren't fresh and had no flavor/spice to them), to prove that you can't hold weight in a beef battle. (Meaning that since I killed his bars (beef) that he has none left, meaning he can't hold weight in a battle rap since it's referred to as beef).

If that confused anyone, my bad. Maybe I wrote it bad, or maybe it's just wack Lol. Just thought I should at least clarify what I was talking about. Good battle, Cookup!!!

[Wraxius]

Since I've already lost the battle, and I'm not mad about it, I'm just going to break the bar down to what I was thinking. JUST to see if it was mis-understood. NO hate to anyone.

The Bar:

It's in the rules, you can't ROTATE THE DECEASED MATTER, So is it a mistake if I GO WASTIN YOUR WEAK CATTLE Because it has NO TASTE AND IT'S BLEAK? BATTERED to prove that you can't HOLD WEIGHT IN A BEEF BATTLE

The Meaning: Read it backwards, sort of. What I meant by "rotate the deceased matter" was talking about Killing his bars (In this case, since it's battle rap, refer to as beef), Go wasting your weak cattle (meaning I'm killing his beef, thus I can't flip it in reference to the first bar). No Taste and it's bleak? Battered (Saying that his bars weren't fresh and had no flavor/spice to them), to prove that you can't hold weight in a beef battle. (Meaning that since I killed his bars (beef) that he has none left, meaning he can't hold weight in a battle rap since it's referred to as beef).

If that confused anyone, my bad. Maybe I wrote it bad, or maybe it's just wack Lol. Just thought I should at least clarify what I was talking about. Good battle, Cookup!!!

[NOBLE]

From the way you wrote it, it's not obvious that you were talking about his bars. The only thing that really stood out is your use of multies (which was great). But the punch isn't apparent.

[NOBLE]

From the way you wrote it, it's not obvious that you were talking about his bars. The only thing that really stood out is your use of multies (which was great). But the punch isn't apparent.

No........

No........