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06-16-2020, 05:33 PM
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FEEDBACK AND HONEST VOTES.
I posted an open battle and it was accepted by Bnas. I would like some viewings for the both of us. Vote as you feel. I'm more interested in the feedback to enhance my skills.
View the battle below:
Joshua Sowell vs. Bnas
https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=519343
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I was challenged by The Punisherr and accepted. I believe he may have sent his 8 bars in response to my open battle. I would some viewings for the both of us. Feedback and Honest Votes welcome.
View the battle below:
The Punisherr vs. Joshua Sowell
https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=519345
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06-16-2020, 05:33 PM
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FEEDBACK AND HONEST VOTES.
I posted an open battle and it was accepted by Bnas. I would like some viewings for the both of us. Vote as you feel. I'm more interested in the feedback to enhance my skills.
View the battle below:
Joshua Sowell vs. Bnas
https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=519343
---------- Post added at 04:33 PM ---------- Previous post was at 03:03 PM ----------
I was challenged by The Punisherr and accepted. I believe he may have sent his 8 bars in response to my open battle. I would some viewings for the both of us. Feedback and Honest Votes welcome.
View the battle below:
The Punisherr vs. Joshua Sowell
https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=519345
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06-16-2020, 05:54 PM
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I’ll checkem out in a few
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06-16-2020, 05:54 PM
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I’ll checkem out in a few
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06-16-2020, 09:57 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Joshua Sowell
I posted an open battle and it was accepted by Bnas. I would like some viewings for the both of us. Vote as you feel. I'm more interested in the feedback to enhance my skills.
View the battle below:
Joshua Sowell vs. Bnas
https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=519343
---------- Post added at 04:33 PM ---------- Previous post was at 03:03 PM ----------
I was challenged by The Punisherr and accepted. I believe he may have sent his 8 bars in response to my open battle. I would some viewings for the both of us. Feedback and Honest Votes welcome.
View the battle below:
The Punisherr vs. Joshua Sowell
https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=519345
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I really don’t feel like explaining everything. It needs work. You need all the basics. Learn about setups, punchlines, multiple syllable rhyme scheme(the reason anything should be bold or capitalize) (only because it helps readers with the flow) , just keep writing, reading watching battles and you’ll get there
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06-16-2020, 09:57 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Joshua Sowell
I posted an open battle and it was accepted by Bnas. I would like some viewings for the both of us. Vote as you feel. I'm more interested in the feedback to enhance my skills.
View the battle below:
Joshua Sowell vs. Bnas
https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=519343
---------- Post added at 04:33 PM ---------- Previous post was at 03:03 PM ----------
I was challenged by The Punisherr and accepted. I believe he may have sent his 8 bars in response to my open battle. I would some viewings for the both of us. Feedback and Honest Votes welcome.
View the battle below:
The Punisherr vs. Joshua Sowell
https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=519345
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I really don’t feel like explaining everything. It needs work. You need all the basics. Learn about setups, punchlines, multiple syllable rhyme scheme(the reason anything should be bold or capitalize) (only because it helps readers with the flow) , just keep writing, reading watching battles and you’ll get there
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06-16-2020, 11:14 PM
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Originally Posted by Xanda
I really don’t feel like explaining everything. It needs work. You need all the basics. Learn about setups, punchlines, multiple syllable rhyme scheme(the reason anything should be bold or capitalize) (only because it helps readers with the flow) , just keep writing, reading watching battles and you’ll get there
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Thanks, that was very helpful.
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06-16-2020, 11:14 PM
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Originally Posted by Xanda
I really don’t feel like explaining everything. It needs work. You need all the basics. Learn about setups, punchlines, multiple syllable rhyme scheme(the reason anything should be bold or capitalize) (only because it helps readers with the flow) , just keep writing, reading watching battles and you’ll get there
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Thanks, that was very helpful.
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06-19-2020, 05:10 AM
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I challenged Xanda to an 8 line text battle. I would like some viewings for the both of us. Vote as you feel. I'm more interested in the feedback to enhance my skills.
View the battle below:
Joshua Sowell vs. Xanda
https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=519353
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06-19-2020, 05:10 AM
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I challenged Xanda to an 8 line text battle. I would like some viewings for the both of us. Vote as you feel. I'm more interested in the feedback to enhance my skills.
View the battle below:
Joshua Sowell vs. Xanda
https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=519353
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06-23-2020, 01:06 AM
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3V1L was upset about my vote against him on one of his battles so he told me to send him 8 bars. His claim was that if I won he would never log back in to letsbeef.com again. I told him that's unacceptable. I would only agree to battle him if, win or lose, he agrees to log back on. I battle for the sport of it. Votes aren't as important as the craft in my opinion.
I would like some viewings for the both of us. Vote as you feel. I'm more interested in the feedback to enhance my skills.
View the battle below:
Joshua Sowell vs. 3V1L
https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...431§ion=tb
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06-23-2020, 01:06 AM
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3V1L was upset about my vote against him on one of his battles so he told me to send him 8 bars. His claim was that if I won he would never log back in to letsbeef.com again. I told him that's unacceptable. I would only agree to battle him if, win or lose, he agrees to log back on. I battle for the sport of it. Votes aren't as important as the craft in my opinion.
I would like some viewings for the both of us. Vote as you feel. I'm more interested in the feedback to enhance my skills.
View the battle below:
Joshua Sowell vs. 3V1L
https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...431§ion=tb
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06-23-2020, 07:08 PM
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40killa replied to an open battle I posted. I would like some viewings for the both of us. Vote as you feel. I'm more interested in the feedback to enhance my skills.
View the battle below:
Joshua Sowell vs. 40killa
https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=519442
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06-23-2020, 07:08 PM
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40killa replied to an open battle I posted. I would like some viewings for the both of us. Vote as you feel. I'm more interested in the feedback to enhance my skills.
View the battle below:
Joshua Sowell vs. 40killa
https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=519442
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