beat is nice
hook is nice got that jill scott feel
1st verse, mix is not to good, lacking in emotion, delivery is boring which kills the flow, lyrical content is cool but the other issues bring i down
2nd hook sound off when it comes in like it off beat idk
2nd verse mix still not good, i can hear the emotion n delivery tryna come thru, but it alos sound like u readin, flow is cool, lyrics is straight
3rd hook same as 2nd
3rd verse same as the first two verses
this song would be nice if yall spit it right, but that comes with practice, so keep working, good drop
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