I liked this track fam. Producing was different. First verse was smooth, the second verse kinda feel into the battle rapper problem where you were spitting TOO much. Let the beat breathe sometimes. 1/

I really liked the hook here, and I thought the production in general was very slick. The bits where you switched up the flow with the beat worked pretty well, altho like RULE said at times I think you were packing too much into your bars.

iLL Flo' Bro...Keep Paccin' Sick Barss..props...

I think the hook was the best part. a few times you were off beat in the verses a few times, i just recommend more practice and writing something that you can put your all behind. 

Yo! What up, My name is ---M E N T A L

i been on lets beef for a long time and im here to show respect to all you guys out here having fun rapping. So lets get into it, alright, so yea, this verse reminded me of back in the day when we were all freestyling and doing battles, its fun, and i can tell you want to rap for a living so thats cool, back then learning how to make songs was the best part because when you have it, your life changes for the better and you have even more fun so yea,  i can see you want to keep up with the new flows out there, me too. So, yea, keep making songs and learning and then surprise us. Cool, keep rhyming.