Keep playing round with, maybe speed up your flow, wasn't feelin the beat and lyrics didn't match it, keep grinding 

Idc what nobody says that "on anotha level u could say I been promoted" line is fire. Keep dropping punches like that on beats then it won't matter what beat u said it to. Ur flow was nice in the hook too as well, it was just the verses to me which wasn't so bad just not as nice as what u said in the hook. Me personally I like to have harder verses than my hooks, but sometimes that doesn't work out so I understand that as an artist. U just gotta spit it when u get in that mode, not just whenever. I could tell u prolly rushed it. That's what I use to do just to get it out. I feel that if that's what u did, if not I respect it. Bout to peep some more tracks now but I'm with Cake on the 9 here

This is interesting.  I dont hate the lyrics, but the quality and flow is so bad that it really takes away from the track as a whole.  

You slow down so much at some points that it's like you are less than a normal talking speed and it sounds broken. 

Props on posting a track though. Keep at it.