The beat was pretty fire, actually. I think that your voice was actually fairly overshadowed by it, though. I think that your overall style and sound would drastically benefit from layered vocals & a bit more complex vocal mixing. Right now it's just you going dry on a beat with some tiny editing thrown in the pot. This is probably the best I've heard you flow on a beat, but like I said you should really re-record this with more powerful vocals & a bit of mixing. As I said on your other track, your complexity is kind of fucked up with bars like the toothpick line, which makes your overall style seem basic, even though it's obviously not. That's just the image it portrays, so please try not to do that much.
Towards 3 minutes you really fall off of riding the beat a bit, it seems like your flow always conforms to a single pattern whenever you go in on a beat. I'd try to differentiate your flow patterns throughout your tracks so that it has definitive flavor and pops stylistically, in contrast to stagnated repetitiveness in flow-structure.
That's basically it for this one, a bit more complexity, some vocal mixing, and a louder vocal projection. Peace Posted By: Babylon - 2015-01-10
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