Could use better mic quality man, cus its hard to hear you. Could work on riding the beat a little better. Not sure if youre going for the comedy angle but if you are then its funny haha. Increase your volume cus we cant hear you. If this was a freestyle thats cool, but id write the raps ya digg.
i would have given you a 4 but i can tell you love the rap game so i added an extra point. i dont want to be harsh but in order for anyone to rise they have to hear the truth sometimes. even my older bro hates some of my songs lol and he's my best friend