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 | This was purposely intended to imitate. Just flipped it for my own personal situation.
Posted By: MULICIOUS - 2009-10-29 |
 | mulicious that was a nice track bro good ish
Posted By: dbang - 2009-10-29 |
 | Most of the text heads turn out to be wack with a mic...this was dope tho...more tracks need to be done fam...hit me up if you wanna collab...10's all round...
Posted By: Mayneak - 2009-10-29 |
 | Pretty intense & deep Lyrics on this one
@ Jack... haha he has a point
@ Mayneak... hope I'm not on that list
Posted By: Lizman - 2009-10-29 |
| Thanks for all the feedback fam. Much appreciated from emcees of your caliber. Looking to improve and get better at this but i think its a good start.
Posted By: MULICIOUS - 2009-10-30 |
| (Intro: Mulicious)
Hey Laura, this is to you, I love you
(Verse 1: Mulicious)
Shit was crazy tight, always up late at night
With our hazy eyes, we didnt want day to die
I message to her, i really dont want to bug you
But i think i love you, and i wish i could hug you
And for the first time i saw that hint of twinkle
She felt that tingle, and realized she was no longer single
Thats when i saw the light, shes my future wife
Saved my life, and made me stop and put down the knife
Why is it she liked me? I place my doubt upon my shelf
But she thought of me as more then i had thought of myself
This girl i cant describe in words, maybe i was a nerd
The thought of me being a prick never occurred
And thats the type of person, that love was cursin'
My chest was burstin', i think maybe i need some nurses
And i was perfectly content with just conversin'
But it wasn't too long before it began to worsen
(Chorus: Repeat 2x)
And when ya sad just grab some more tissues
I've got some issues but baby I'm always with you
Never forget even in your darkest hour
Never cower cuz our love has all the power
(Verse 2: Mulicious)
Sadly I'm madly in love but I dont mean to be sappy
Makin' life crappy, when I just wanted to make her happy
All the times we used to have, sometimes I miss it
Now I wish we were kissin', but we can't kiss from the distance
Reminiscin' on the past and all the pain you concealin'
I know you feel it, I just wish I knew how to heal it
All these conflicts, I wish I knew how to fix
Now things are a mess and im tryna pick up the sticks
Where'd we go wrong, along the way of this song
When did this song, become about you and me being strong
I think that this shit is my fault, i think i shoulda just halt
And listened more instead of just sitting here and talk
Bawk bawk! My beak talks and its so annoyin'
Take ya feelings in my hand and smash and destroy em
Looking like im just toyin', almost like i enjoy it
But if i paid attention, this could have been avoided
(Chorus: Repeat 2x)
And when ya sad just grab some more tissues
I've got some issues but baby I'm always with you
Never forget even in your darkest hour
Never cower cuz our love has all the power
(Verse 3: Mulicious)
I tell her i'd support her, but I ain't crossin' the border
Then turn around and tell her, I would do anything for her
I see what we can be, thinking that I'm manly
But what man would I be, if i asked her to leave her family
And it hurts knowing, that you have not showed her
How much you love her, and how much you really owe her
She turned to me and said, is it me you want to marry?
She's staring, have I not proven myself caring?
A ring I'm bearin', and this ring is two carats
And then i asked her if this is something she wouldn't mind wearin'
Screen lit and starin', feeling shes sparin'
She said with carin', I'm sorry Evan I cannot leave my parents
I hope she's jokin', and now my face is soakin'
Crying and chokin', the words leavin my heart broken
Im smokin' trying to collect the pieces, for a reason
I've got to start growing up and succeeding
Im bleeding but now i think its time, that i use my brain for thinking
Thinking about all the things that she's really needing
Any one who will ever meet us, whos ever seen us
Knows that theres nothing on this earth that can ever come between us
Then god himself asked me, do you really love her?
I want to hug her, and tell her I hate to see her suffer
I'm always thinking of her, laying under my cover
She's making supper, for my kids and she's the mother
And all the thoughts, how am I to make it happen?
The keys are tappin', none of it will come true by rappin'
I know that we'll get through, cuz my words are all true
Whatever we do, there's nothing that can keep me from you
Posted By: MULICIOUS - 2009-10-30 |
 | nice track mul, lyrics were there. timing was good. Sounds like you might need a better mic or maybe som effects but that stuff can be changed. Keep it up bro
Posted By: Gramdacious - 2009-10-31 |
 | this sounds killer the flow is nice...keep it up you got talent!!!!
Posted By: DRUG - 2009-10-31 |
 | you def got the tone right. nice track
Posted By: Heavythoughtz - 2009-10-31 |
| Yeah my mic has no compressor and im using a shitty ass third rate compressor for it. So yeah the quality is questionable.
Posted By: MULICIOUS - 2009-10-31 |
| Thanks for the feedback and the listen all yall. Much appreciated.
Posted By: MULICIOUS - 2009-10-31 |
 | yo for being ur first track this shit is nice man...im impressed... nice choice of beat..one of my fav eminem beats...and tracks.... keep working on music and ull develop into a real dope emcee...10
Posted By: BENSON THA GREAT - 2009-10-31 |
| @ B Honest: First comment fam
Posted By: MULICIOUS - 2009-11-01 |
 | YOU SOUNDED LIKE A MIX BETWEEN STOT AN EMINEM (wat a combo haha).....FOREAL IF THIS IS YOUR FIRST TRACK YOU'VE DONE THEN THIS IS FUCKIN AMAZIN!!!!!!........WHEN IT STARTED OFF I WOZ LIKE DDAAYYUUMM...AN I STAYED IN AWE THROUGHOUT, NICE FLOW WIT PERFECT SWITCHUPS AN SWITCHDOWNS.......HOOK WOZ VERY NICELY DONE TOO....FIRE LYRICS (obviously)......YEAH AS YOU CAN TELL I REALLY LIKE THIS TRACK haha......MAYBE A MULICIOUS TRACK ON A HVK BEAT IS SUMMIT TO CONSIDER AT SOME TIME HUH......10
Posted By: HVK - 2009-11-05 |
 | nice shit 4 da ladyz mayn
Posted By: CYCLONIC - 2009-11-08 |
 | Very Impressed, SICK Verses And Structre. You Road The Beat Perfectly, I Wassnt To Keen On The Hook But I Cnt Say Nuttin, Im Shit On Hooks Haha....
Posted By: Swinny - 2009-11-08 |
 | Damn This A Good Track Hmoie
Posted By: Beast_ - 2010-03-18 |
Ratings:
Beast_: 10
BENSON THA GREAT: 10
Heavythoughtz: 10
dbang: 10
Lizman: 10
Mayneak: 10
CYCLONIC: 10
DRUG: 10
HVK: 10
Swinny: 8
Brutally Honest: 0
Gramdacious: 0
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