 | This is a nice track. The beat is nice. The lyrics are on point as well as the flow. I like the topic. I believe that adding some vocals over the sampled chorus, nothing to take away from it just a few words here and there to add to the concept. They don't even have to rhyme. Maybe some calls to action or concise views on the topic to add effect to what's being conveyed. A lot of times with songs of this nature it can be good to have those moments in the song where the listener can have something to have them thinking while they're vibing.. the extra vocals can even be what transitions into the next verses. Overall great work. Get a better quality recording. Posted By: Benny Lectric - 2020-08-04 |