You need to work on cleaning up that structure. Make sure everything makes sense and is worded correctly. Lose some of the multis, They are filler and make your verse weak. Your punches aren't bad which is good but you need to work on structure/delivery/wording.

Mad Verbs is #1 on the list of targets yo. get em.

Looks like we are battling first round of the poetic justice tournament.
What size should I get your coffin?

Lmfao 666 all time niiiiicccceeee haha plus the pic kinda completes it

Send that battle again bro! I got us some credits for the ones we lost. hmu

Check out a quick story teller cypher I did Mr Dirty! AC's!
http://www.letsbeef.com/cypher_detai...on=tb&id=60993

How does that make you feel?

oh please dont block me coz I give a shit...

Been cyphering after I voted on a few battles. Thats why i dont remember you dear. Now refrain from annoying me with bitch commentary.

Yes I read all battles. Its my opinion. I cant remember you, but im sure whatever rating I gave was fitting of the way I interpreted it.

Lets see what you got young buck

Peep shit, If u got time on ya hands. Flames bro. Support is really appreciated. Peace.
http://www.letsbeef.com/cypher_detai...on=tb&id=60925

send 8

word thanks bruh you too, ill get at that verse in a lil bit no doubt sometime tonite/today

Hey whats up
if you party hard then check it out "Party Anthem"..hit Likes and drop some Comments..Thanks.

You want Beef? Will you respond if i send 8

yeah dude i don't know what the hell that line means, i was going to vote for you at first but the last couple lines didn't do it for me and i saw something on the other dudes lines

Yo,can i join SOR?